for Kiss of Life7/27/2024 c13 hdres
An imaginative and well written story. I really enjoyed how Harry changed and grew more aware of different motivations. I also liked how you explored Dumbledores actions through a more balanced lens. Thank you for sharing your story
An imaginative and well written story. I really enjoyed how Harry changed and grew more aware of different motivations. I also liked how you explored Dumbledores actions through a more balanced lens. Thank you for sharing your story
7/25/2024 c13 Schazmen
I binged this whole story today. I think this might be my favorite Harry Potter fic. Especially one where the manipulators face consequences. Ku-freaking-dos.
I binged this whole story today. I think this might be my favorite Harry Potter fic. Especially one where the manipulators face consequences. Ku-freaking-dos.
7/15/2024 c9 evattude
Good on hermione stop being a perfect and Ron's friend (neither are a benefit). And go neville
Good on hermione stop being a perfect and Ron's friend (neither are a benefit). And go neville
6/21/2024 c13 
13James Spookie
You know I really enjoyed this up until the end where everything just felt rushed and thrown together. Also, the word Postulate was used entirely too much. Other than that, pretty solid story.
13James SpookieYou know I really enjoyed this up until the end where everything just felt rushed and thrown together. Also, the word Postulate was used entirely too much. Other than that, pretty solid story.
6/18/2024 c13 scyfly
there is soo much bashing in here and most of it went unpunished. all of it was swept aside 'water under the bridge'. i get seeing things from dumbledores perspective but... dumbledore had the power to do something but did not, instead he went after innocents. what kind of person hesitates to act against monsters but merciless targets children? and in the end nothing has changed in this society. some minor rule changes are not gonna fix anything.
overall too much drama too little magic. well written but couldve been shorter with no loss
there is soo much bashing in here and most of it went unpunished. all of it was swept aside 'water under the bridge'. i get seeing things from dumbledores perspective but... dumbledore had the power to do something but did not, instead he went after innocents. what kind of person hesitates to act against monsters but merciless targets children? and in the end nothing has changed in this society. some minor rule changes are not gonna fix anything.
overall too much drama too little magic. well written but couldve been shorter with no loss
6/7/2024 c13 sherrithewriter
I probably say “brilliant story” too much when reviewing your work but it is difficult to find a word that truly describes your skill at telling a story. I was entranced and glued to the pages on my phone, eagerly reading chapter after chapter but knowing the goodness must come to an end. Thank you so much for sharing your gift — I hope you continue to do so.
I probably say “brilliant story” too much when reviewing your work but it is difficult to find a word that truly describes your skill at telling a story. I was entranced and glued to the pages on my phone, eagerly reading chapter after chapter but knowing the goodness must come to an end. Thank you so much for sharing your gift — I hope you continue to do so.
4/22/2024 c13 RightnWrong
This was quite enjoyable, thanks for writing,
This was quite enjoyable, thanks for writing,