5/17 c1 3LuckyMadHatter
it's a cute little story i quiet like it a lot. I told you a while ago id read your others stories only hade a bit before work and I picked this one chapter story i'm glad I did. it's so Hermione to do something like bake treats cause she really wants a good impression and sadly its so like draco and his goons to bully her for it and to just eat what ever they see Infront of them. Keep up the writing it's fantastic
it's a cute little story i quiet like it a lot. I told you a while ago id read your others stories only hade a bit before work and I picked this one chapter story i'm glad I did. it's so Hermione to do something like bake treats cause she really wants a good impression and sadly its so like draco and his goons to bully her for it and to just eat what ever they see Infront of them. Keep up the writing it's fantastic
1/15 c1 ruth hammond
Neat story, I used to do that but for parties or those days when time or everything was messed up. Had fun doing that too. I noticed that there were a lot of spelling errors, you might go back and correct them. I also noticed that your later stories do not have that many errors so you are improving, good job!
Neat story, I used to do that but for parties or those days when time or everything was messed up. Had fun doing that too. I noticed that there were a lot of spelling errors, you might go back and correct them. I also noticed that your later stories do not have that many errors so you are improving, good job!
5/4/2023 c1 Fallow59
Kudos : )
Kudos : )