for Red Thread11/10 c1 Darth Tenibris2
Well, congratulations. You are the one fanfic writer who finally wrote something so utterly disgusting and depraved, it made me agree with the authoritarian notion that some people should indeed be deprived of their rights to free expression and instead get a lobotomy. So, I hope you get an ice pick through the skull, you mother fucker!
Well, congratulations. You are the one fanfic writer who finally wrote something so utterly disgusting and depraved, it made me agree with the authoritarian notion that some people should indeed be deprived of their rights to free expression and instead get a lobotomy. So, I hope you get an ice pick through the skull, you mother fucker!
5/24 c38 HyperionATLAS
god damn this was a really good story to read, felt a little rushed at some points but overall got a hella good story out
god damn this was a really good story to read, felt a little rushed at some points but overall got a hella good story out
2/2 c37 mj906brunswick
Up until the war arc the story is really good. It was detailed and didn’t seem very rushed but once we got to the war arc, it was very rushed. I understand you did say that the order would be out of out of order of the events but when you’re changing events in the you also didn’t give to give information about them. Then you just threw information in there, like about the fourth Hokage, we didn’t even know he was resurrected let alone fighting Madara we didn’t even know he was here, but you made no mention of it until this chapter So it threw me off while reading but otherwise great story.
Up until the war arc the story is really good. It was detailed and didn’t seem very rushed but once we got to the war arc, it was very rushed. I understand you did say that the order would be out of out of order of the events but when you’re changing events in the you also didn’t give to give information about them. Then you just threw information in there, like about the fourth Hokage, we didn’t even know he was resurrected let alone fighting Madara we didn’t even know he was here, but you made no mention of it until this chapter So it threw me off while reading but otherwise great story.
1/26 c38 Tom
Isagi Hina SS is the only ship that makes sense in canon.
Isagi Hina SS is the only ship that makes sense in canon.
1/21 c38 NH gives me life
Ahhhh it's ended. I'm equal parts content and kinda bumbed. Such an interesting concept and I've seen a bunch of one shots but never a really fleshed out story. Great job!
It would be interesting to see what Boruto and Sarada decide, though I'm pretty meh about that ship (and honestly, and ships for the new generation) but I really like how you explored how a world in peace would handle red threads.
So happy that you're working on 'the sacrifice,' it lives rent free in my head lol
Take care :)
Ahhhh it's ended. I'm equal parts content and kinda bumbed. Such an interesting concept and I've seen a bunch of one shots but never a really fleshed out story. Great job!
It would be interesting to see what Boruto and Sarada decide, though I'm pretty meh about that ship (and honestly, and ships for the new generation) but I really like how you explored how a world in peace would handle red threads.
So happy that you're working on 'the sacrifice,' it lives rent free in my head lol
Take care :)
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19BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
Congrats on completing this story! It was great to follow this until completion. Really enjoyed the journey. I'm looking forward to your updates on The Sacrifice!
Keep up the good work as always!
19BornOnTheBreakOfDawnCongrats on completing this story! It was great to follow this until completion. Really enjoyed the journey. I'm looking forward to your updates on The Sacrifice!
Keep up the good work as always!
1/3 c37 NH gives me life
What a lovely surprise! I'm equal parts excited and bummed out that this story is coming to an end, but so glad that you have others in the works. Seriously though, totally agree with you - this part in the canon universe was always a slog to get through and I commend you for making it unique to this AU and entertaining as well.
Minato's reunion and goodbye is always so bittersweet no matter how many times I read about it, and Neji! :( poor Hinata wanting to go retrieve his body always hurts to read about.
Thank you for the update, and happy new year!
What a lovely surprise! I'm equal parts excited and bummed out that this story is coming to an end, but so glad that you have others in the works. Seriously though, totally agree with you - this part in the canon universe was always a slog to get through and I commend you for making it unique to this AU and entertaining as well.
Minato's reunion and goodbye is always so bittersweet no matter how many times I read about it, and Neji! :( poor Hinata wanting to go retrieve his body always hurts to read about.
Thank you for the update, and happy new year!
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1/1 c37 BornOnTheBreakOfDawn
Happy New Year! Thanks for sharing this update. I find it interesting how they had to deal with Madara, Obito and then also Sasuke. I also liked that moment with Minato.
Nice work as always!
Happy New Year! Thanks for sharing this update. I find it interesting how they had to deal with Madara, Obito and then also Sasuke. I also liked that moment with Minato.
Nice work as always!