for The hero of the Shield is a Spider?1/14/2023 c5 Guest
This story is awesome I hope you are doing well
This story is awesome I hope you are doing well
7/4/2022 c5 
8CRUDEN
I kinda want the looking for a baby dragon as a running gag and personality bringing in stark is meh maybe if you brought in others in as well would be kinda cool.
8CRUDENI kinda want the looking for a baby dragon as a running gag and personality bringing in stark is meh maybe if you brought in others in as well would be kinda cool.
7/3/2022 c3 Guest
I'm going to stop here the pairing is just not my cup of tea. But do encourage you to continue this story is very well taught out, and just because I don't like it. It doesn't mean other readers wouldn't.
I'm going to stop here the pairing is just not my cup of tea. But do encourage you to continue this story is very well taught out, and just because I don't like it. It doesn't mean other readers wouldn't.
6/10/2022 c4 Slade01
I would have to say something similar to Russell Crowe's gladiator armor from the Gladiator movie but no helmet you know how he was in his last fight in that movie my reasoning is very simple that kind of armor was meant to protect the vital areas that would kill a man quickly but not heavily weigh him down because the Roman army was a marching Army and the only way to get somewhere unless you were a part of the upper class was on foot also keep in mind there are no skyscrapers or high buildings here so web-swinging is not really going to work roof top running that can be done in a medieval city but not web-swinging you've got gauntlets to cover the wrists and forearms and you got knee guards and shin guards to cover the Shins and you got the chest armor that covers both the stomach and the chest and the back without being overly heavy also I think it's really stylish but it's not only stylish it's realistic.
I would have to say something similar to Russell Crowe's gladiator armor from the Gladiator movie but no helmet you know how he was in his last fight in that movie my reasoning is very simple that kind of armor was meant to protect the vital areas that would kill a man quickly but not heavily weigh him down because the Roman army was a marching Army and the only way to get somewhere unless you were a part of the upper class was on foot also keep in mind there are no skyscrapers or high buildings here so web-swinging is not really going to work roof top running that can be done in a medieval city but not web-swinging you've got gauntlets to cover the wrists and forearms and you got knee guards and shin guards to cover the Shins and you got the chest armor that covers both the stomach and the chest and the back without being overly heavy also I think it's really stylish but it's not only stylish it's realistic.
6/9/2022 c4 Guest
What the hell is up with these blackouts? How come the moment Peter defends himself, he somehow blacks out and loses memories of it? They're unnecessary and too rushed if you ask me.
What the hell is up with these blackouts? How come the moment Peter defends himself, he somehow blacks out and loses memories of it? They're unnecessary and too rushed if you ask me.
6/9/2022 c4 Demonic Rebel
I think this story has a lot of potential. The one major flaw i see is the blackouts. the first one wasn't too bothersome but the second seems to imply that the plot is being forced in pure defiance of the characters. Thankfully at the least it seems like he wasn't forced to blow the trial while blacked out but it is certainly annoying to see the MC get railroaded into the plot especially when the audience doesn't even get to know what the fuck happened. Like I don't even know if the railroading was even remotely warranted since i have no idea what he was forced to do and see how it might or might not conflict with his character. The story is pretty solid in every other regard but then a blackout happens that pulls you out of the story by leaving you wondering what the hell you just missed.
I think this story has a lot of potential. The one major flaw i see is the blackouts. the first one wasn't too bothersome but the second seems to imply that the plot is being forced in pure defiance of the characters. Thankfully at the least it seems like he wasn't forced to blow the trial while blacked out but it is certainly annoying to see the MC get railroaded into the plot especially when the audience doesn't even get to know what the fuck happened. Like I don't even know if the railroading was even remotely warranted since i have no idea what he was forced to do and see how it might or might not conflict with his character. The story is pretty solid in every other regard but then a blackout happens that pulls you out of the story by leaving you wondering what the hell you just missed.
5/31/2022 c3 1Tylus
Holy crap he seduced her! I don't think I ever see that but it was fucking awesome!
1TylusHoly crap he seduced her! I don't think I ever see that but it was fucking awesome!
5/29/2022 c2 BobIsBadAtEnglish
There are at least two other Spider-Man/Shield Hero crossovers. They’re on YouTube, but they’re both in Spanish. Still they’re both pretty good and worth a look in my opinion. One of them has Superior Spider-Man as the Shield Hero and the other features your standard Peter Parker except he’s blonde. They should be easy enough to find. Anyway, I like the idea of Peter starting fairly cold, but slowly warming as time goes on. Your grammar and writing has already improved since up your first chapter of your other story. There’s still some minor errors, but it’s still readable so it doesn’t really matter. I hope we see a flashback in the “ghosts” perspective next chapter to see what happened while Peter was out.
There are at least two other Spider-Man/Shield Hero crossovers. They’re on YouTube, but they’re both in Spanish. Still they’re both pretty good and worth a look in my opinion. One of them has Superior Spider-Man as the Shield Hero and the other features your standard Peter Parker except he’s blonde. They should be easy enough to find. Anyway, I like the idea of Peter starting fairly cold, but slowly warming as time goes on. Your grammar and writing has already improved since up your first chapter of your other story. There’s still some minor errors, but it’s still readable so it doesn’t really matter. I hope we see a flashback in the “ghosts” perspective next chapter to see what happened while Peter was out.
5/29/2022 c1 Guest
Well I mean he needs to start little op, unlike the other heroes he actually has powers and not only that but he he has a high IQ he probably understand how to use the weapon way better tha others would in the end of the month than the other heroes, and as for battle experience well depending the version you use he still have more experience than the others considering he actually knows how to fight unlike the others he never has never learned how to throw a punch correctly. So it would be weird if he didn't start a little bit op so don't worry about it.
Well I mean he needs to start little op, unlike the other heroes he actually has powers and not only that but he he has a high IQ he probably understand how to use the weapon way better tha others would in the end of the month than the other heroes, and as for battle experience well depending the version you use he still have more experience than the others considering he actually knows how to fight unlike the others he never has never learned how to throw a punch correctly. So it would be weird if he didn't start a little bit op so don't worry about it.
5/28/2022 c1 Guest
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5/27/2022 c1 Guest
When you mentioned the Black and Red Suit, but then "Assassin" I had two Alternative Spideys in mind.
It was either "Superior Spider-Man" or "Assassin Spider-Man"
When you mentioned the Black and Red Suit, but then "Assassin" I had two Alternative Spideys in mind.
It was either "Superior Spider-Man" or "Assassin Spider-Man"