for A Song of Magic4/19 c25 
1Saladinovic
It's not badly written, writing is pretty good. it's just that the story is kinda slow and boring. Too many POVs from people I don't really care about. Every time a chapter doesn't start with Naruto POV I just want to skip it. The whole chapter with Elia was just her POV about the Game of Thrones lore. I don't know if it's mostly gonna be like this , or if the story picks up the pace down the line , but the moment I felt like skipping a chapter I stopped having fun. Im gonna repeat myself: the writing is good and quality, which saddens me so much. Seems like everything is either poorly written or well writen but boring... I just gotta keep looking I guess.
1SaladinovicIt's not badly written, writing is pretty good. it's just that the story is kinda slow and boring. Too many POVs from people I don't really care about. Every time a chapter doesn't start with Naruto POV I just want to skip it. The whole chapter with Elia was just her POV about the Game of Thrones lore. I don't know if it's mostly gonna be like this , or if the story picks up the pace down the line , but the moment I felt like skipping a chapter I stopped having fun. Im gonna repeat myself: the writing is good and quality, which saddens me so much. Seems like everything is either poorly written or well writen but boring... I just gotta keep looking I guess.
4/9 c52 surya25addanki
Oii, noice chapters, I've went away and binged it this is awesome, it is a little confusing sometimes being overtly descriptive but still awesome nonetheless, the that is weird is how did the Mountain and his entourage even force Naruto to some extent was he going easy on them at start, or something even hundred people he should have been hardly injured, even without Chakra he could take more than that barely any need for this.
Oii, noice chapters, I've went away and binged it this is awesome, it is a little confusing sometimes being overtly descriptive but still awesome nonetheless, the that is weird is how did the Mountain and his entourage even force Naruto to some extent was he going easy on them at start, or something even hundred people he should have been hardly injured, even without Chakra he could take more than that barely any need for this.
3/22 c52 Mr.Heller
Holy moly, had to reread a few previous chapters to remember what is happening. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, have a good day.
Holy moly, had to reread a few previous chapters to remember what is happening. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, have a good day.
3/18 c52 Guest
Bye bye fancy dagger, you will be missed, but not by Naruto... further proof that the short life he lived in Essos is becoming less and less important to him.
Bye bye fancy dagger, you will be missed, but not by Naruto... further proof that the short life he lived in Essos is becoming less and less important to him.
3/18 c52 Guest
Good for them
Good for them
3/17 c52 Guest
52 chapters in, still ass.
52 chapters in, still ass.
3/17 c19 Guest
naruto is a pussy for even listening to her bullshit drivel at the end, cope all you want with your dogshit AN explanations but this entire chapter was ass, retard
naruto is a pussy for even listening to her bullshit drivel at the end, cope all you want with your dogshit AN explanations but this entire chapter was ass, retard
3/17 c4 Guest
dont care, nerf was gay, defeated the whole purpose of reading this type of fanfic in the first place. cope retard
dont care, nerf was gay, defeated the whole purpose of reading this type of fanfic in the first place. cope retard
3/12 c52 Guest
Glad to see him
Glad to see him
3/14 c52 pepitobat
I discovered your story 3 days ago. I've now read of 52 chapters. Every single minute of my free time went into reading it. That's how good it is. And, sure, every once in a while, a sentence is missing a word or a comma, but that didn't impact my enjoyment of this story at all. It's brilliant and I want.. nay, NEED more.
Keep up the good work, I'll be there for chapter 53. :)
I discovered your story 3 days ago. I've now read of 52 chapters. Every single minute of my free time went into reading it. That's how good it is. And, sure, every once in a while, a sentence is missing a word or a comma, but that didn't impact my enjoyment of this story at all. It's brilliant and I want.. nay, NEED more.
Keep up the good work, I'll be there for chapter 53. :)