
11/4/2022 c19 Aussie SciFi Tragic
This is one of the best Voyager fics and best fics of any genre I’ve ever read. I’m glad I found it.
He loves her? He doesn’t have to say it, his deeds would of demonstrated it to Torres. No doubt there. Not all men say the words.
I love how you’ve built this story. Bringing in the Xindi and the sphere builders was inspired. It was only the Xindi storyline that bought the Enterprise TV show alive, apart from the look back to the first warp flight ep, First Flight, which I loved.
Love the new ship being called the Jaeger. I’ve read his autobiography. I do hope it has adequate weaponry and Tom has adequate tactical training. At least as captain he’d have the briefing on the Omega particle. I’m glad he has Harry as XO. I always thought Harry would reach captain first! Focusing on his design abilities because of The Delta Flyer was another inspired plot choice. Tom glowed when he was in or talking about The Flyer.
I loved how you bought T’Pol into the story. She was such a great character. All we need is the ambassador in the story too! When Aaron and T’Lassa died it was unexpected and a shock. They were great original characters. I liked the interplay between Harry and Aaron too. Now it will help Harry as XO to Tom. I’m expecting Tom will give him a lot of latitude as XO.
This fic has so much further to go. I can’t wait to read it! Thanks.
This is one of the best Voyager fics and best fics of any genre I’ve ever read. I’m glad I found it.
He loves her? He doesn’t have to say it, his deeds would of demonstrated it to Torres. No doubt there. Not all men say the words.
I love how you’ve built this story. Bringing in the Xindi and the sphere builders was inspired. It was only the Xindi storyline that bought the Enterprise TV show alive, apart from the look back to the first warp flight ep, First Flight, which I loved.
Love the new ship being called the Jaeger. I’ve read his autobiography. I do hope it has adequate weaponry and Tom has adequate tactical training. At least as captain he’d have the briefing on the Omega particle. I’m glad he has Harry as XO. I always thought Harry would reach captain first! Focusing on his design abilities because of The Delta Flyer was another inspired plot choice. Tom glowed when he was in or talking about The Flyer.
I loved how you bought T’Pol into the story. She was such a great character. All we need is the ambassador in the story too! When Aaron and T’Lassa died it was unexpected and a shock. They were great original characters. I liked the interplay between Harry and Aaron too. Now it will help Harry as XO to Tom. I’m expecting Tom will give him a lot of latitude as XO.
This fic has so much further to go. I can’t wait to read it! Thanks.
10/11/2022 c17 Capt. Kathryn
How could all this happen so quickly? What about T'Mira? My mind is still reeling from this chapter; I'm even more hooked (if that's possible) and watching this story closely!
How could all this happen so quickly? What about T'Mira? My mind is still reeling from this chapter; I'm even more hooked (if that's possible) and watching this story closely!
10/10/2022 c17 lizzy74656
How sad. Maybe that is the daughter she was meant to save, not the one she already had? I wait with baited breath for the reveal of what is really going on and how time is reset. Edge of the seat stuff, great.
How sad. Maybe that is the daughter she was meant to save, not the one she already had? I wait with baited breath for the reveal of what is really going on and how time is reset. Edge of the seat stuff, great.
9/20/2022 c15 Capt. Kathryn
This is so intriguing; please keep going!
This is so intriguing; please keep going!
9/20/2022 c15 lizzy74656
I've always wondered that about the older Janeway and Voyager’s earlier arrival back to the Alpha Quadrant. Maybe it was these other alien beings, or the fact that the temporal division needed Voyager back early. Be interesting to see where you take this. Brilliant.
I've always wondered that about the older Janeway and Voyager’s earlier arrival back to the Alpha Quadrant. Maybe it was these other alien beings, or the fact that the temporal division needed Voyager back early. Be interesting to see where you take this. Brilliant.
9/10/2022 c14 Capt. Kathryn
I like the little bits and pieces of story that we get. It is enough to satisfy built up curiosity while still keeping us wondering. Kathryn's definitely holding something back, and the attack on the station, and now on Tom in particular, seem more deliberate. (Also, I absolutely loved the Doctor's lines in that Sickbay scene from after Belanna told Tom she loved him. Gave me a few good laughs.) This was worth the wait; keep going!
I like the little bits and pieces of story that we get. It is enough to satisfy built up curiosity while still keeping us wondering. Kathryn's definitely holding something back, and the attack on the station, and now on Tom in particular, seem more deliberate. (Also, I absolutely loved the Doctor's lines in that Sickbay scene from after Belanna told Tom she loved him. Gave me a few good laughs.) This was worth the wait; keep going!
8/31/2022 c13 Capt. Kathryn
I really love all the plot development you've done here; I can't wait to see what happens next!
I really love all the plot development you've done here; I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/30/2022 c13 Guest
To quote Mr. Spock, "Fascinating.". I am not sure how you are coming up with this story , but the imagination is out of this world.
To quote Mr. Spock, "Fascinating.". I am not sure how you are coming up with this story , but the imagination is out of this world.
8/28/2022 c13 Capt. Kathryn
I really love all the plot development you've done here; I can't wait to see what happens next!
I really love all the plot development you've done here; I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/28/2022 c13 lizzy74656
This is certainly hotting up. I always knew that the Temporal division had a reason for allowing the future Janeway to bring Voyager home earlier. I wonder if it is the Voyager crew or just one or two, who could deal with the technology of the Sphere Builders, probably because of having been in the Delta Quadrant and all they'd seen and learnt in order to return to the Federation. WOW!
This is certainly hotting up. I always knew that the Temporal division had a reason for allowing the future Janeway to bring Voyager home earlier. I wonder if it is the Voyager crew or just one or two, who could deal with the technology of the Sphere Builders, probably because of having been in the Delta Quadrant and all they'd seen and learnt in order to return to the Federation. WOW!
8/25/2022 c12 Guest
So will things get reset? Can we have our happy Paris family back?
So will things get reset? Can we have our happy Paris family back?
8/15/2022 c11 Capt. Kathryn
Wow; just when we don't think it could get any worse for them, it does. Great plot development here!
Wow; just when we don't think it could get any worse for them, it does. Great plot development here!
8/15/2022 c10 Capt. Kathryn
So sweet at the end of this chapter. Thank you.
So sweet at the end of this chapter. Thank you.