for Under the Hunters Moon9/7/2022 c4 Korst
Huh... well I gotta say I really didn't enjoy this chapter. Not particularly because of anything that occurred within it, thought I do think that 'losing themself to the hunt' thing is some edgy nonsense and an excuse to have terrible things for terrible reason to satisfy some terrible self justification for terribleness. I really don't like that, it's pointless and serves no purpose, not to mention it's hard-line non-canon. Other than that of course, well, please I beg of you to begin a new line when the speaker in dialog changes. It's needlessly confusing and makes reading the story rather frustrating when I need to decompile a paragraph into a conversation in my head. Think about the flow of your writing, simplify dialog paragraph structure and enunciate the speaker by beginning a new paragraph whenever the speaker changes. Please. PLEASE. PLEASE! Because this? This was hell.
Huh... well I gotta say I really didn't enjoy this chapter. Not particularly because of anything that occurred within it, thought I do think that 'losing themself to the hunt' thing is some edgy nonsense and an excuse to have terrible things for terrible reason to satisfy some terrible self justification for terribleness. I really don't like that, it's pointless and serves no purpose, not to mention it's hard-line non-canon. Other than that of course, well, please I beg of you to begin a new line when the speaker in dialog changes. It's needlessly confusing and makes reading the story rather frustrating when I need to decompile a paragraph into a conversation in my head. Think about the flow of your writing, simplify dialog paragraph structure and enunciate the speaker by beginning a new paragraph whenever the speaker changes. Please. PLEASE. PLEASE! Because this? This was hell.
9/7/2022 c1 Korst
Huh, this is actually a really good integration of the two settings. It's also the most believable explanation of being a demigod of Artemis that I've read.
Huh, this is actually a really good integration of the two settings. It's also the most believable explanation of being a demigod of Artemis that I've read.
9/5/2022 c32 ForTheHonor
Well it's a good thing Harry isn't like Cú Chulainn, it would have been awkward if Atalanta had to use that weakness to stop Harry
Well it's a good thing Harry isn't like Cú Chulainn, it would have been awkward if Atalanta had to use that weakness to stop Harry
9/5/2022 c33 Deny Papin
(French reader here ! Apologises for the grammar mistakes)
A magnificent ending for this excellent fic. The extras really make me want to time travel just to be able to read the sequel(s?) sooner.
I didn't say it before, but I absolutely loved your portrayal of Severus Snape : you neither sugar-cot nor outright bash him, two ways to use him I despise in HP fanfics. Here, he sound definitely like himself, and I really hope you will continue to honor the complexity of his character.
Have a nice week !
(French reader here ! Apologises for the grammar mistakes)
A magnificent ending for this excellent fic. The extras really make me want to time travel just to be able to read the sequel(s?) sooner.
I didn't say it before, but I absolutely loved your portrayal of Severus Snape : you neither sugar-cot nor outright bash him, two ways to use him I despise in HP fanfics. Here, he sound definitely like himself, and I really hope you will continue to honor the complexity of his character.
Have a nice week !
9/4/2022 c19 moose3333
I’m always a fan of fem Voldemort. Though I do like the time travel variety a bit more where he meets her as Riddle and not Voldemort. Any type of relationship (friendship, platonic, romantic, etc..) I find unrealistic if she already killed his parents. Going from Tom to Emily (or whatever the name is) or to before it happened, at least allows for some realism in the relationship. Can’t be friends with the person who murdered your parents and left you to suffer for years at the Dursley’s. I don’t buy it no matter how it’s written and even if it’s good enough to ignore that part, it’s still worse than it could be. In my opinion at least.
I’m always a fan of fem Voldemort. Though I do like the time travel variety a bit more where he meets her as Riddle and not Voldemort. Any type of relationship (friendship, platonic, romantic, etc..) I find unrealistic if she already killed his parents. Going from Tom to Emily (or whatever the name is) or to before it happened, at least allows for some realism in the relationship. Can’t be friends with the person who murdered your parents and left you to suffer for years at the Dursley’s. I don’t buy it no matter how it’s written and even if it’s good enough to ignore that part, it’s still worse than it could be. In my opinion at least.
9/4/2022 c13 moose3333
Can’t wait to see his animagus form (if that will be written) since he’s a hunter. Would be curious what predator you pick. My suggestion, as always, for the coolest magical predator ever is the Nargacuga from Monster Hunter. Like a cool mix between a dragon and a panther.
Can’t wait to see his animagus form (if that will be written) since he’s a hunter. Would be curious what predator you pick. My suggestion, as always, for the coolest magical predator ever is the Nargacuga from Monster Hunter. Like a cool mix between a dragon and a panther.
9/4/2022 c7 moose3333
Kinda hoping Hedwig somehow gets a human form or something. Best girl for sure. I’m only half kidding I think
Kinda hoping Hedwig somehow gets a human form or something. Best girl for sure. I’m only half kidding I think
9/3/2022 c33 Guest
So either lady magic or death herself. Sounds fun, make sure Snape regrets ever being born by the time Harry is done with him. Bella as well, maybe have Lucius kill Draco in front of Narcissa just for fun. Good luck.
So either lady magic or death herself. Sounds fun, make sure Snape regrets ever being born by the time Harry is done with him. Bella as well, maybe have Lucius kill Draco in front of Narcissa just for fun. Good luck.
9/2/2022 c33 
10ultima-owner
the last scene I think is of a death goddess or maybe someone else in the Celtic pantheon who 'missed' out on the 'chance' to help his parents all those years ago. Not the god or goddess the y meant to call but one that became interested in his life after they sensed 'Greeks' running around their part of the world.
10ultima-ownerthe last scene I think is of a death goddess or maybe someone else in the Celtic pantheon who 'missed' out on the 'chance' to help his parents all those years ago. Not the god or goddess the y meant to call but one that became interested in his life after they sensed 'Greeks' running around their part of the world.