for Under the Hunters Moon9/1/2022 c32 Aspect of Stories
This was a good read but it definitely feels half finished...theres so much that hasnt had a neat conclusion and so much more that can be wrote about (rest of hp books and then the percy jackson books, if not an AU). But it was a nice read none the less.
This was a good read but it definitely feels half finished...theres so much that hasnt had a neat conclusion and so much more that can be wrote about (rest of hp books and then the percy jackson books, if not an AU). But it was a nice read none the less.
9/1/2022 c32 cowchoas
lovey chapter,
i so cant wait for Zoe and rest of the hunt reaction to harry.
great story cant wiat for the sequel to happen even if i have to wait a while.
lovey chapter,
i so cant wait for Zoe and rest of the hunt reaction to harry.
great story cant wiat for the sequel to happen even if i have to wait a while.
8/31/2022 c31 
9SilverLightning26
This is such an amazing story! I really thought Harry had killed Sirius for a minute, and I thought, how could you? Then of course I remembered about the celestial bronze not affecting mortals and I laughed a little in relief. I'm so happy for Harry, and I'm so very curious about how the horcrux issue will be resolved. I can't wait for the next chapter!
9SilverLightning26This is such an amazing story! I really thought Harry had killed Sirius for a minute, and I thought, how could you? Then of course I remembered about the celestial bronze not affecting mortals and I laughed a little in relief. I'm so happy for Harry, and I'm so very curious about how the horcrux issue will be resolved. I can't wait for the next chapter!
8/30/2022 c6 9SilverLightning26
Still loving the story! I did just want to point out that there are a few sections from Harry's point of view where you switch between first and third person. It's not too bad, looks like a few minor slip-ups, but something to be aware of and maybe fix the next time you go through editing. You also switch between past and present tense a lot, especially (again) in Harry's point of view. One more thing to be aware of and adjust. (Sorry if I sound like I'm nagging; I'm an English teacher; noticing and pointing out those things are kind of my job :D) But I really love the way the story is developing. I'll definitely keep reading!
9SilverLightning26Still loving the story! I did just want to point out that there are a few sections from Harry's point of view where you switch between first and third person. It's not too bad, looks like a few minor slip-ups, but something to be aware of and maybe fix the next time you go through editing. You also switch between past and present tense a lot, especially (again) in Harry's point of view. One more thing to be aware of and adjust. (Sorry if I sound like I'm nagging; I'm an English teacher; noticing and pointing out those things are kind of my job :D) But I really love the way the story is developing. I'll definitely keep reading!
8/30/2022 c31 DeGamer422
Are you ever gonna do the scenes of her explaining harrys existence to other gods personally I kinda wanna see her explain it to Athena because that’s the only other god or goddess that I feel will not question it.
Are you ever gonna do the scenes of her explaining harrys existence to other gods personally I kinda wanna see her explain it to Athena because that’s the only other god or goddess that I feel will not question it.
8/30/2022 c2 SilverLightning26
"Make me, you snake-faced mudblood bitch!" Haha! I don't normally condone profanity, but those have got to be the best last words I've ever seen for Lily Potter! I'm loving this!
"Make me, you snake-faced mudblood bitch!" Haha! I don't normally condone profanity, but those have got to be the best last words I've ever seen for Lily Potter! I'm loving this!
8/30/2022 c31 Lb
Great work
Great work
8/30/2022 c31 zearph
I hoe you do gof were voldemort fuck about and finds out why you dont fuck with the gods. Sad to see the end but a great story look foward to more of your work8)
I hoe you do gof were voldemort fuck about and finds out why you dont fuck with the gods. Sad to see the end but a great story look foward to more of your work8)
8/30/2022 c30 7terrahsims
Wow! I just spent a day-and-a-half reading this excellent story. Thank you for sharing this story with us, I can't wait to follow along when you next update.
7terrahsimsWow! I just spent a day-and-a-half reading this excellent story. Thank you for sharing this story with us, I can't wait to follow along when you next update.