for Under the Hunters Moon6/19/2022 c7 Creativenameok
I wish this diverged from canon more, as I feel that that’s the point of fanfiction, and this makes me feel somewhat like I’m rereading canon, as this isn’t very different in the grand scheme of things. Idk if I’m making much sense here, but whatever.
I wish this diverged from canon more, as I feel that that’s the point of fanfiction, and this makes me feel somewhat like I’m rereading canon, as this isn’t very different in the grand scheme of things. Idk if I’m making much sense here, but whatever.
6/17/2022 c6 
10ultima-owner
I think the stress of what his life become caused him to snap at her like that.
10ultima-ownerI think the stress of what his life become caused him to snap at her like that.
6/17/2022 c6 Guest
So long as the smartest being in Britain, (Hedwig), is okay Harry will survive. Loving it so far. BTW there was a weird bug when searching, it said you only had 3 chapters.
So long as the smartest being in Britain, (Hedwig), is okay Harry will survive. Loving it so far. BTW there was a weird bug when searching, it said you only had 3 chapters.
6/17/2022 c4 27mad97
About my last review and I told you you should have all Artemis powers because he is her firstborn although I am wrong about the firstborn thing it is still good to gave him the all the powers he could inherit from her
About my last review and I told you you should have all Artemis powers because he is her firstborn although I am wrong about the firstborn thing it is still good to gave him the all the powers he could inherit from her
6/17/2022 c6 27mad97
Why did you change the memory he sees whaen the demantor attacks the memory of him seeing his mother killed is very significant to the story also harry seems more traumatized and abused in your version could elaborate why is that also why he is saying that he isn't good with magic It is obvious that with ADHD and Dislaxiya that he wouldn't be in the theory lessons but why he couldn't be he good at the practical especially since he would have more magic than the canon Harry due to him being a demigod and abouz
Why did you change the memory he sees whaen the demantor attacks the memory of him seeing his mother killed is very significant to the story also harry seems more traumatized and abused in your version could elaborate why is that also why he is saying that he isn't good with magic It is obvious that with ADHD and Dislaxiya that he wouldn't be in the theory lessons but why he couldn't be he good at the practical especially since he would have more magic than the canon Harry due to him being a demigod and abouz
6/16/2022 c4 9saxcuL. the all-knowing
. wooooow, sounds like someone hates complicated and nuanced characters.
9saxcuL. the all-knowing. wooooow, sounds like someone hates complicated and nuanced characters.
6/16/2022 c4 Guest
Dumbledore is a good man who sucked dick while his sister got raped and beaten. He knows he must manipulate people, for they are useful to him and his cock. His mother was a whore and his father should have killed him.
Dumbledore is a good man who sucked dick while his sister got raped and beaten. He knows he must manipulate people, for they are useful to him and his cock. His mother was a whore and his father should have killed him.
6/16/2022 c5 bahnannah
All I ask is that Hedwig be perfectly ok. I love that owl and it upsets me if she gets hurt.
All I ask is that Hedwig be perfectly ok. I love that owl and it upsets me if she gets hurt.
6/15/2022 c5 9saxcuL. the all-knowing
the switch in the style of narration is very easy to explain.
cause I felt like it.
9saxcuL. the all-knowingthe switch in the style of narration is very easy to explain.
cause I felt like it.