for Ghosts & Dragons1/18 c1 
2Xerzo LotCN
I hope more dragon girls join the relationship with danny even a ghist dragon girl lol
But i mean so many good dragon girls so hopefully they all are with danny
2Xerzo LotCNI hope more dragon girls join the relationship with danny even a ghist dragon girl lol
But i mean so many good dragon girls so hopefully they all are with danny
9/1/2024 c5 14E-LuckArcher
Too many OCs and fandoms being smashed together that this became a mess in less than 5 chapters.
My feelings about multi-cross aside, if you want to go that route and if you want to introduce OCs then at least give it time. Why the rush? why does everyone and their mother need to find out about Tohru and start introducing tons of characters like it's the end of the world? Danny Phantom has a lot of episodes, and Danny only just became a halfa so you had more than enough time to include whatever you want.
Instead, ch 2 was wasted 90% on a story, ch 3-4-5 just a mess of introducing chapters, things from other fandoms and a lot of exposition and it doesn't seem like it'll stop to allow character developments, relationship building or the story to breath.
14E-LuckArcherToo many OCs and fandoms being smashed together that this became a mess in less than 5 chapters.
My feelings about multi-cross aside, if you want to go that route and if you want to introduce OCs then at least give it time. Why the rush? why does everyone and their mother need to find out about Tohru and start introducing tons of characters like it's the end of the world? Danny Phantom has a lot of episodes, and Danny only just became a halfa so you had more than enough time to include whatever you want.
Instead, ch 2 was wasted 90% on a story, ch 3-4-5 just a mess of introducing chapters, things from other fandoms and a lot of exposition and it doesn't seem like it'll stop to allow character developments, relationship building or the story to breath.
8/28/2024 c6 7SilverExcel115
Oh jeez, this is multiple fandoms being thrown at me here, hope this doesn’t become cluttered. Anyway, I always wondered why Sam went with such a weird dietary name when “vegan” probably would have covered those same issues with a less over the top name, unless it was for attention.
If you’re wondering who to pair Sam with, well, if Danny has Tohru as a dragon-maid, then why not have Sam with Fafnir as a dragon-butler?
7SilverExcel115Oh jeez, this is multiple fandoms being thrown at me here, hope this doesn’t become cluttered. Anyway, I always wondered why Sam went with such a weird dietary name when “vegan” probably would have covered those same issues with a less over the top name, unless it was for attention.
If you’re wondering who to pair Sam with, well, if Danny has Tohru as a dragon-maid, then why not have Sam with Fafnir as a dragon-butler?
8/26/2024 c6 Skull Flame
- Good on Danny for finally telling his parents he's half-ghost. That's one load off of his shoulders.
- I see Mr. Lancer is cooking a plan to keep Danny out of trouble when he has to go ghost. I have to wonder about the goal of that plan though.
- Damn, Star's father had one hell of a backstory. Can't help but wonder how are his parents and his brother doing though.
- Poll is not in your profile though.
- Good on Danny for finally telling his parents he's half-ghost. That's one load off of his shoulders.
- I see Mr. Lancer is cooking a plan to keep Danny out of trouble when he has to go ghost. I have to wonder about the goal of that plan though.
- Damn, Star's father had one hell of a backstory. Can't help but wonder how are his parents and his brother doing though.
- Poll is not in your profile though.
8/26/2024 c6 21Yami Luna Kitsune
pretty great chapter
glad I was correct with my guess
um, is sams's power similar to gambit, essentially using runes in addition to cards?
from what I can tell, it's incredibly close to the actual episode
sometime, though Jack means well, he's an idiot
that proves that maddie's the smart one of the two
that's odd for jack
I REALLY hope that lucoa is NOT talking about pariah
Sam, this problem is because you FORCED your 'individuality on the entire school
wow, look at that: lancer KNOWING that dash shouldn't be above the rules
who has dirt on lancer, and what is it?
Samantha, whether you like it or not, meat is VERY important
'three-and-a-half' is incomplete. it should be 'three-and-a-half feet'
time to makeup, should be "time to make up"
look at that, Jack Fenton CAN learn
shocked that HE learned what Danny is, now. not to mention, that he'll actually help Danny, like that
i'm with jazz, Maddie AND Danny about what Jack said, just chuck it back into the ghost zone
asked in atone, should be "asked in a tone"
'contact with his body using his' needs to be corrected
that that kwan wised up
hah, karma for henry's parent's came
i'm a siren star, should be "i'm a siren, star,"
check the beginning of star's question
unless the child is depraved, who WOULD watch their parents "having a roll in the hay"?
you put 'weld/welding' instead of 'wield/wielding"
the poll is not up
eager for the next chapter
21Yami Luna Kitsunepretty great chapter
glad I was correct with my guess
um, is sams's power similar to gambit, essentially using runes in addition to cards?
from what I can tell, it's incredibly close to the actual episode
sometime, though Jack means well, he's an idiot
that proves that maddie's the smart one of the two
that's odd for jack
I REALLY hope that lucoa is NOT talking about pariah
Sam, this problem is because you FORCED your 'individuality on the entire school
wow, look at that: lancer KNOWING that dash shouldn't be above the rules
who has dirt on lancer, and what is it?
Samantha, whether you like it or not, meat is VERY important
'three-and-a-half' is incomplete. it should be 'three-and-a-half feet'
time to makeup, should be "time to make up"
look at that, Jack Fenton CAN learn
shocked that HE learned what Danny is, now. not to mention, that he'll actually help Danny, like that
i'm with jazz, Maddie AND Danny about what Jack said, just chuck it back into the ghost zone
asked in atone, should be "asked in a tone"
'contact with his body using his' needs to be corrected
that that kwan wised up
hah, karma for henry's parent's came
i'm a siren star, should be "i'm a siren, star,"
check the beginning of star's question
unless the child is depraved, who WOULD watch their parents "having a roll in the hay"?
you put 'weld/welding' instead of 'wield/wielding"
the poll is not up
eager for the next chapter
6/1/2024 c5 ZeroExia
Okay I’m completely lost on Sam I originally thought her mom was poison ivy, then you came out her badass grandma has magic so now I’m thinking Raven from teen titans. As for Tucker that is simple techno paths.
Okay I’m completely lost on Sam I originally thought her mom was poison ivy, then you came out her badass grandma has magic so now I’m thinking Raven from teen titans. As for Tucker that is simple techno paths.
5/27/2024 c5 J
Major request can illu be part of the harem
Major request can illu be part of the harem