4/22 c1 Hestaka
i havent even begun ready but this starting explenation is one of the best I have ever read. I can tell you have as much, if not more, dedication to the small details than I do, and I appreciate that. Looking forward to reading this lets see how it goes.

4/7 c8 mattias.akerlund.71
fallout would be a total hit lol...

4/7 c2 mattias.akerlund.71
when its a male its a widower, not a widow lol...

3/18 c24 MordredVisor
This is by far one of the greats in ME fanfics. Still waiting for a new chapter, its been a year since the latest chapter. I hope author hasn't abandoned this story.

3/7 c2 Guest
(Long reminder/review short): Heh. So more Full of themselves here (even though I'm not one for the mass effect universe and galaxy(ies)/franchise itself).

And Yet Still is Ignorant, if not outright Hatred, about the: 'You Cannot Work for 'both' Love and 'Money' at the same time!' — The Word of God Himself, for one Big example. * :\

'Love God and others.'/or 'Love one another as I have Loved you.' — The Word/or Voice, Mouthpiece of God.

'You have heard, by them of the OLD Testament ways say, 'Love your friends and Hate your enemy.',

But I say: Love your 'enemies' and Not 'drop bombs' on them.' — The Word of God.

'You have heard, that it has been said, 'an eye for an eye, and a tooth for a tooth.'.

But I say: that you 'resist' Not Evil, But whosoever shall smite you on your right cheek, turn to them the other also.

Don't physically 'fight back'. Don't fight back the same way as Lovers of 'Money', OF the world have always done against each other for so long.' — The Word of God.

'We Wrestle Not 'Against flesh and blood', but Against Spiritual forces ('Money', that enables 'War' (the taking of Human lives outside of the Only one fit for the job: God. (All because we Humans Love/or Fond over some Useless, Man-made commodity called 'Money' more than choosing in having to spend each of our very lives in showing Love and teaching a young or a bunch of pre-aborted(!) era child(ren) for several more Earth years, for example)) and speeds up 'Death'—those Horsemen (Greed, and Death (the Final enemy to The God of Eternity), and War), since our Choice of Fall in the Paradisial Garden) in high places.' (— John(?)).

* Let alone the Easiest Command/Teaching of The Word of God's (and yet NOBODY is doing it to this day): 'Call No one on Earth 'dad', and 'sensei', and 'master'. For you have one Father, which is in Eternity/Heaven. So, 'titles of Respect'-' (Sire/Sir/Dad/Daddy/Pappa/Pope/Etc, Doctor/rabbi/etc, Boss/lord/etc, etc variations and other languages of the word 'Father', 'Teacher', 'Master') '-are for Him and Him alone.' (for another example of an info, that is chosen to Not being Shared around all over Mankind.

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Worldwide, supernatural, Demonic Conspiracy Against The Teachings (or the 4 Gospels/4 Good News books according to Jesus Christ) of The Infallible Word of God's it looks like?).

'My communication to them-' (I.e: my Human doctors, my Human/physically, biological 'fathers', etc whatever) '-is more like brothers or sisters: for we are ALL Children of God.' — AVITD/ETS people.

(Brothers and sisters of our Risen Lord).

'Jesus does not 'Teach Disrespect', He just Teaches that our Ultimate Respect is for our Heavenly Father instead.' — AVITD/ETS people.

''IF' calling my Human mother 'Alice'/etc first names 'means' that 'I Hate her!' to those of THIS world's/who Serve 'Money'/Materialism, then so be it...

But I'm Not going to Disrespect my Heavenly Father or my Big Brother Jesus by Disobeying them.' — AVITD/ETS people.

'Let your biological parents be shocked and angry at you because you started calling them by their first names... Do it anyways! Because your Heavenly Father Told you to.

Let your wife or husband Think that 'you 'Stopped' Loving them' because you are now Obeying to Forsake all and started Living by Faith... Do it anyways, because Jesus Told you to.' — AVITD/ETS people.

Bonus: 'Whosoever Believes and Obeys on The only begotton Son of God, shall Not Eternally be Destroyed, but shall have Everlasting Life. Life in All its Fullness.' — The Word of God.

'Whosoever that Forsakes Not ALL that they own, you Cannot be a Christian.' — Jesus, AKA The Word of God.

'Forbid them Not. For they who are not Against us is For us.' — The Infallible Voice of God.

'They that are Not with Me, everything that I Taught you and to Stand for, is Against Me.

And they that Gathers Not with Me and of My Teachings, Scatters.' — Jesus, God's Perfect Revelation of Himself to us Mankind.

'Like Judas did.

If Anyone could have Looked like a Gatherer, it was Judas...

But we Never hear a word of Support from anything that Judas did.

There he was, 'one of the twelve'...and yet a child of the Enemy himself.

'Sorry Judas. But if you Not WITH Me, you are Scattering'. And so he did: he sent Jesus to his Persecuted death.' — AVITD/ETS people.

'Don't Fret so much. If you Believe in God, then Believe also what I said.

I am The Way to My Father! I'm also The Truth, and the kind of Life that All are looking for.

No one can Find it without My Help.' — Jesus, The Word of God.

'The words that I Speak-' (Matthew/Mark/Luke (especially those first three witness books') ** and John) '-unto you, they are Spirit and they are Life.' — Jesus, God's literal Mouthpiece. And The True definition of what The Holy Ghost of God really is.

'The words that I have spoken will Judge you in the Last days.' — Jesus, The Voice/or Word of God.

** 'Heaven and Earth may Pass Away, But My words/Teachings will Never Pass Away.' — Jesus, The Word of God, while Matthew, and Mark, and Luke—independently from each other, but due to the Predicted Holy Spirit's help—declared the full credibility of The Messiah's with Exactly the same choice of words (even after 2 millennia later) that God really is real and what exactly our one and only Father really wants from each one of us Human beings.

Unlike the Apostate 'church''s, and the rest of God's similsrly Mammon-driven (and Not for God's Kingdom of Money-less Faith and Love instead) enemies that makes up the Majority of Humanity still.

2/6 c11 Jack.13cz
the reviues are great,but as i sead im here fore the story not the mechanics byhind it,still good story

11/26/2024 c24 12helrio uzugaku
This fic is a work of art.

You have officially set the bar unreasonably high for Mass Effect fics and this fic is now going to be THE comparison to others. There's not even enough for me to nitpick so yeah, without a doubt this is one of the best ME fics I've ever seen that isn't a crossover.

I am of course comparing this to Harry Potter: Geth which is just a barrel full of laughs, Irony, logic and, it should go without saying, MAGIC. It's kinda hard to beat cold blooded killer Tali blowing Harry's head off during their first meeting without warning.

This fic points out everything I take issue with in the mass effect plotline and multiple fanfiction plot devices. I've read lots of fics so far, enough to know lots of people consider the SA a joke version of Humanity. This fic is no different in that regard but for good reason. After all what man would approach a giant glowing Tuning fork and go "OOOoooh shiny" then push the very obvious big red button. We're reckless but without a doubt paranoid.

The Asari are failures, no argument against it, they hard a prothean beacon on their God damned home world with a working VI and the reapers still caught them off guard. BS, I think they knew full well what was coming, they just didn't give a fuck. They were arrogant enough to believe they were enough to stop it..