for Conjunction5/16 c22 
3Hiryo
Damn, you really made the Ranma X Makoto scene so wholesome and still sexy as hell!
In a way I anticipated that there are two male Ranmas for Makoto to enjoy, thought that could come later. XD
Such a great scene!
Quite a good way to start with Haruka there!
Love how she and Ranma talk with each other too.
Now what an interesting beginning between these two and what led to this!
3HiryoDamn, you really made the Ranma X Makoto scene so wholesome and still sexy as hell!
In a way I anticipated that there are two male Ranmas for Makoto to enjoy, thought that could come later. XD
Such a great scene!
Quite a good way to start with Haruka there!
Love how she and Ranma talk with each other too.
Now what an interesting beginning between these two and what led to this!
5/13 c21 3Hiryo
Oh such a great part good way to deal with Haruka.
Also so love the setup for Makoto coming together with Ranma, along the little kiss scene was just so golden!
Thanks for the great fanfic and please update soon!
3HiryoOh such a great part good way to deal with Haruka.
Also so love the setup for Makoto coming together with Ranma, along the little kiss scene was just so golden!
Thanks for the great fanfic and please update soon!
5/13 c21 2Death of Snipers
Mostly a set up chapter, but fun nonetheless. A bit sad that the lewdness seems so curtailed, as ranma’s first with makoto seems significant enough to be shown.
2Death of SnipersMostly a set up chapter, but fun nonetheless. A bit sad that the lewdness seems so curtailed, as ranma’s first with makoto seems significant enough to be shown.
4/23 c20 1Priest
I like how you're handling this whole situation, and I would love to see you continue it someday.
1PriestI like how you're handling this whole situation, and I would love to see you continue it someday.
3/16 c18 Kouteikuro
I'd like to see Nodoka's POV, after Ranma and Usagi leave, realizing how wrong she was by siding with Akane, or see her rant about Ranma and Usagi while wondering if that was really the Akane she knew.
We need to see some introspection on her part, especially since this concerns the future of her family. After all, I doubt the girls would agree to leave Nodoka with her children. If she agreed to her son committing seppuku because of a promise Ranma didn't know about or wasn't old enough to understand what it meant, I can't imagine she'd be capable of doing it to her grandchildren, something she herself might even consider, given what a terrible mother she is to Ranma.
That, and finally, whether he wants to side with Akane or with his own son.
I'd like to see Nodoka's POV, after Ranma and Usagi leave, realizing how wrong she was by siding with Akane, or see her rant about Ranma and Usagi while wondering if that was really the Akane she knew.
We need to see some introspection on her part, especially since this concerns the future of her family. After all, I doubt the girls would agree to leave Nodoka with her children. If she agreed to her son committing seppuku because of a promise Ranma didn't know about or wasn't old enough to understand what it meant, I can't imagine she'd be capable of doing it to her grandchildren, something she herself might even consider, given what a terrible mother she is to Ranma.
That, and finally, whether he wants to side with Akane or with his own son.
2/21 c20 2Death of Snipers
It was a fun interim chapter to establish what’s coming next, and I liked the new dynamic with Setsuna.
I’m not sure how I feel about michiru’s ultimatum. While I get she has plenty of reasons to distrust haruka, and the earlier scene of haruka’s commupance was fun, pregnancy blackmail is a little to intense to be fully sexy here? At least as a 0-100.
But overall we will see where it goes
2Death of SnipersIt was a fun interim chapter to establish what’s coming next, and I liked the new dynamic with Setsuna.
I’m not sure how I feel about michiru’s ultimatum. While I get she has plenty of reasons to distrust haruka, and the earlier scene of haruka’s commupance was fun, pregnancy blackmail is a little to intense to be fully sexy here? At least as a 0-100.
But overall we will see where it goes
2/21 c19 5Fox Boss
Considering how Haruka is right now, maybe have her rest and 'dress her up'? Maybe in some especially girly lingerie?
Also, I had an idea for the wedding rings. Instead of all of the stones being diamonds, they could be gems the same color as the one's on their tiaras/brooches?
Or he could just use some kind of ki trick to change the diamonds into different colors.
5Fox BossConsidering how Haruka is right now, maybe have her rest and 'dress her up'? Maybe in some especially girly lingerie?
Also, I had an idea for the wedding rings. Instead of all of the stones being diamonds, they could be gems the same color as the one's on their tiaras/brooches?
Or he could just use some kind of ki trick to change the diamonds into different colors.
2/21 c20 3Hiryo
Fellow readers, spoilers ahead; you have been warned!
What a great finish with the Kuonji’s!
Ranma and Usagi talking was really sweet!
Kek about Setsuna joining! Such fun teasing-time and how the flow goes! I’m so loving this!
Haruka’s situation is really interesting and show, now at the very end, and not just getting into the car, what really she has to do. I hope it got through to her!
Thanks as always for yet another awesome chapter!
3HiryoFellow readers, spoilers ahead; you have been warned!
What a great finish with the Kuonji’s!
Ranma and Usagi talking was really sweet!
Kek about Setsuna joining! Such fun teasing-time and how the flow goes! I’m so loving this!
Haruka’s situation is really interesting and show, now at the very end, and not just getting into the car, what really she has to do. I hope it got through to her!
Thanks as always for yet another awesome chapter!
2/21 c20 doctor3027
I kinda wish this was on ao3. Ive had a bit of trouble try to read the newest chapter.
I kinda wish this was on ao3. Ive had a bit of trouble try to read the newest chapter.