for Fallen Down11/10/2023 c47 Bonzy Bonnie1
Jesus... I will give this a honest review so please don't be mad at me.
your portrayal of the MC sucks, she killed many in the past chapters yet she still acted like it's her first kill in here, and you made her look so pathetic that she turns into a special child, pls make a re-write of this story.
your story plot is good but the problem is your characters. again I'm sorry for giving my honest review
Jesus... I will give this a honest review so please don't be mad at me.
your portrayal of the MC sucks, she killed many in the past chapters yet she still acted like it's her first kill in here, and you made her look so pathetic that she turns into a special child, pls make a re-write of this story.
your story plot is good but the problem is your characters. again I'm sorry for giving my honest review
10/28/2023 c103 Alein Ziggur
Oh, so it was based off Akemi. No wonder why the abess sounded so familiar.
Oh, so it was based off Akemi. No wonder why the abess sounded so familiar.
10/27/2023 c104 
2Small italian boy
Really liked the pov of the HK, from Calca being a genuine sweetheart from her and Kelart thinking about some unpleasant rumors and a not so idyllic relationships with the (men) nobles. Still, seeing the HK Queen being so relaxed after what happened to her in canon it's comforting, at least in one universe she has a better life that the one she got in canon.
Second pov was also really good. Mira is always a fun character to follow, who adds a lot of color to the duo of Drau and Yuriko.
This was a nice and relaxing chapter, thank you!
2Small italian boyReally liked the pov of the HK, from Calca being a genuine sweetheart from her and Kelart thinking about some unpleasant rumors and a not so idyllic relationships with the (men) nobles. Still, seeing the HK Queen being so relaxed after what happened to her in canon it's comforting, at least in one universe she has a better life that the one she got in canon.
Second pov was also really good. Mira is always a fun character to follow, who adds a lot of color to the duo of Drau and Yuriko.
This was a nice and relaxing chapter, thank you!
10/4/2023 c103 Small italian boy
Corpus pov was well done. Seeing the thoughts of these undead is always interesting. I wonder who is The One in this story.
The way swordmaster used [World Teleportation] and how it was described is fascinating. I love how you describe TDL techniques in this story.
Corpus pov was well done. Seeing the thoughts of these undead is always interesting. I wonder who is The One in this story.
The way swordmaster used [World Teleportation] and how it was described is fascinating. I love how you describe TDL techniques in this story.
9/17/2023 c102 Small italian boy
Ah the joys of having a goddes visiting your humble abode. The interaction between Yuriko and Nadia were nice. Poor Nigun, always bistracted by all these inferior to him. Seems the theocracy will start to have some internal conflicts (maybe).
Thanks for your amazing job!
Ah the joys of having a goddes visiting your humble abode. The interaction between Yuriko and Nadia were nice. Poor Nigun, always bistracted by all these inferior to him. Seems the theocracy will start to have some internal conflicts (maybe).
Thanks for your amazing job!
9/6/2023 c101 Small italian boy
I loved how the situation was being discussed from the start. Like, no more unnecessary drama but just an honest conversation and reflections of the 2 characters
This mini-arc if we can call this ended perfectly. Martin thoughts on the beastmen and the worries for the Queen and Goddess, Yuriko and Drau small confront and the future of their rapport, all very very good.
Thank you for your amazing work!
I loved how the situation was being discussed from the start. Like, no more unnecessary drama but just an honest conversation and reflections of the 2 characters
This mini-arc if we can call this ended perfectly. Martin thoughts on the beastmen and the worries for the Queen and Goddess, Yuriko and Drau small confront and the future of their rapport, all very very good.
Thank you for your amazing work!
9/6/2023 c100 MrBurkes
Did yuriko just give up some of her levels for that?
Wonderful story so far. Consistently high quality.
Did yuriko just give up some of her levels for that?
Wonderful story so far. Consistently high quality.
9/6/2023 c100 Small italian boy
Congratulations for the 100th chapter!
The dream sequence was bittersweet. The thoughts on Drau mortality and the final hug scene were great.
The second pov continued on the line of the first, I appreciated the writing style used to convey the mechanicality (?. Don't know if is the right term) of the summon.
Another great chapter, you are on a roll.
Congratulations for the 100th chapter!
The dream sequence was bittersweet. The thoughts on Drau mortality and the final hug scene were great.
The second pov continued on the line of the first, I appreciated the writing style used to convey the mechanicality (?. Don't know if is the right term) of the summon.
Another great chapter, you are on a roll.
9/5/2023 c100 ArtoriasHellkite
This has been a fantastic read start to current, love how faithful the representatuon of existing characters feels. And the thought put into the main cast, the entire story always feels like it's beimming with believable characters who don't exist solely for plot or conveniance. So mamy loose threads with potential in Overlord and it has been a treat to see so many touched on in what seemed like it would be a straight forward rom-com, but was so much more already from the first chapters.
Not much of a review, but felt I should give thanks after 100 chapters of entertainment on late nights.
Thank you for the read and any future writing
This has been a fantastic read start to current, love how faithful the representatuon of existing characters feels. And the thought put into the main cast, the entire story always feels like it's beimming with believable characters who don't exist solely for plot or conveniance. So mamy loose threads with potential in Overlord and it has been a treat to see so many touched on in what seemed like it would be a straight forward rom-com, but was so much more already from the first chapters.
Not much of a review, but felt I should give thanks after 100 chapters of entertainment on late nights.
Thank you for the read and any future writing
9/4/2023 c99 Small italian boy
Yu-chan tried to tease Drau but backfired splendidly.
It's good that after everything, Draus still has a modicum of respect for Cerabrate, not wanting to use him just as a meat bone
Was so heartwarming the conversation between Drau and Yu. 'If I was in your old world I would still find you'. The red thread of love is real.
This was a short but very powerful chapter. Thank you!
Yu-chan tried to tease Drau but backfired splendidly.
It's good that after everything, Draus still has a modicum of respect for Cerabrate, not wanting to use him just as a meat bone
Was so heartwarming the conversation between Drau and Yu. 'If I was in your old world I would still find you'. The red thread of love is real.
This was a short but very powerful chapter. Thank you!
9/2/2023 c98 Small italian boy
The first pov was really pleasant, with Mira adding some brattiness to Blue Roses dynamics and Laky confronting the truth of her profession and the idealized version of it.
The additional lore of the beastmen with the "mautkshan" was also interesting, always fun to see the customs of other civilizations.
The first pov was really pleasant, with Mira adding some brattiness to Blue Roses dynamics and Laky confronting the truth of her profession and the idealized version of it.
The additional lore of the beastmen with the "mautkshan" was also interesting, always fun to see the customs of other civilizations.
8/26/2023 c97 Small italian boy
Really liked the bard part and the addition of Tarou to the team. Hope Drau will not be too meanie to the animal now.
Didn't expect Cerabrate and Optics to "fight"! But makes sense with all the "savior" attitude adventures get compared to workers. It was a nice way to underline the differences between the professions
Well, finally Drau ended the loose thread that was the leader of Crystal Tear. The guy at the end got a lucky, even if painful, ending. But better than this would have been difficult to accomplish (to not say impossible)
Really liked the bard part and the addition of Tarou to the team. Hope Drau will not be too meanie to the animal now.
Didn't expect Cerabrate and Optics to "fight"! But makes sense with all the "savior" attitude adventures get compared to workers. It was a nice way to underline the differences between the professions
Well, finally Drau ended the loose thread that was the leader of Crystal Tear. The guy at the end got a lucky, even if painful, ending. But better than this would have been difficult to accomplish (to not say impossible)
8/17/2023 c96 Small italian boy
I liked the interactions with Lydia and her father. And the religious new politics are always fun to me to read (but maybe I am the strange one lol).
Poor Nigun. Completely forgotten, but at least he returned home xD. I wonder if he will return to his position or just sent home (seems too much a waste).
The ending was really sweet.
I liked the interactions with Lydia and her father. And the religious new politics are always fun to me to read (but maybe I am the strange one lol).
Poor Nigun. Completely forgotten, but at least he returned home xD. I wonder if he will return to his position or just sent home (seems too much a waste).
The ending was really sweet.
8/12/2023 c1 Guest
Unfortunately way too cringe
Unfortunately way too cringe
8/11/2023 c95 Small italian boy
Another great chapter! Drau learning to master her wild magic open a lot of new prospectives for the future. Can't wait to see where this plot point will lead.
Yuriko's past was amazing depict in these flashbacks, the depth you gave her characters is something barely seen in Overlord Oc players.
Another great chapter! Drau learning to master her wild magic open a lot of new prospectives for the future. Can't wait to see where this plot point will lead.
Yuriko's past was amazing depict in these flashbacks, the depth you gave her characters is something barely seen in Overlord Oc players.