for Fallen Down8/6/2023 c94 
2Small italian boy
The demi-minotaurs were really cool. Seeing other black ops units and feeling a grasp of their power is always interesting. Can't wait to see them in action.
Drau smirking at Tia. Ahahahah, the ninja never had a chance.
Wholesome as always the ending, and congratulations for the first 10k chapter!
2Small italian boyThe demi-minotaurs were really cool. Seeing other black ops units and feeling a grasp of their power is always interesting. Can't wait to see them in action.
Drau smirking at Tia. Ahahahah, the ninja never had a chance.
Wholesome as always the ending, and congratulations for the first 10k chapter!
8/3/2023 c93 FrenchWhiteFox
Ahhhh angry yuriko is so cute and adorable ! Thank you for the great work as always ! It is really nice to read after a long day !
Ahhhh angry yuriko is so cute and adorable ! Thank you for the great work as always ! It is really nice to read after a long day !
8/3/2023 c93 Small italian boy
Great chapter, the interactions with the theocracy people were much appreciated by my part eheh and well, the poor landlord, got what he deserved.
Bolloupe getting humiliated was fun, if there is a definition of bad noble you will probably find his photo on the dictionary.
Drau and Yuriko continue to be as cute as always!
Great chapter, the interactions with the theocracy people were much appreciated by my part eheh and well, the poor landlord, got what he deserved.
Bolloupe getting humiliated was fun, if there is a definition of bad noble you will probably find his photo on the dictionary.
Drau and Yuriko continue to be as cute as always!
7/30/2023 c92 Small italian boy
My poor Keno, never get the respect she deserved.
Lakyus studying the others nations culture is a fine detail to add to her character, gives her more depth.
The ending speech was really heartwarming, you always know how to touch the strings of the heart.
Thank you for the chapter!
My poor Keno, never get the respect she deserved.
Lakyus studying the others nations culture is a fine detail to add to her character, gives her more depth.
The ending speech was really heartwarming, you always know how to touch the strings of the heart.
Thank you for the chapter!
7/25/2023 c91 Small italian boy
Feyyaz pov "exploring" the city before the festival was interesting, mundane life every now and then is always appreciated to see how the citizens are living under Yuriko's management kek.
Calca finding a friend in the angel was sweet. Blonde power alliance and all that aside, the Holy Queen really needs someone in her life to be a normal woman with.
Feyyaz pov "exploring" the city before the festival was interesting, mundane life every now and then is always appreciated to see how the citizens are living under Yuriko's management kek.
Calca finding a friend in the angel was sweet. Blonde power alliance and all that aside, the Holy Queen really needs someone in her life to be a normal woman with.
7/16/2023 c90 Small italian boy
Interesting to see the city-state mayor in here, and I appreciate the additional lore you put in the story (really curios of the sword saints).
Gazef continues to break hearts like the perfect man he is, unfortunately for the (wo)men he is in love only with the sword.
The Dra-Yuriko part was cute as usual
Interesting to see the city-state mayor in here, and I appreciate the additional lore you put in the story (really curios of the sword saints).
Gazef continues to break hearts like the perfect man he is, unfortunately for the (wo)men he is in love only with the sword.
The Dra-Yuriko part was cute as usual
7/12/2023 c1 Guest
she really is a sheltered useless little girl
how can the hellhole that is her former world mold someone with such a personality?
she really is a sheltered useless little girl
how can the hellhole that is her former world mold someone with such a personality?
7/12/2023 c89 Small italian boy
I feel sorry for those that couldn't bath themselves in the king's radiance, such a shame that mortal beings will never understand what true perfection is.
The sparring with Climb was cute in a wholesome way. Nice reference to the vol. 5 "fight", even if the poor warrior captain has a lot to catch up now. And Gazef, too cute. These nobles don't deserve him.
I feel sorry for those that couldn't bath themselves in the king's radiance, such a shame that mortal beings will never understand what true perfection is.
The sparring with Climb was cute in a wholesome way. Nice reference to the vol. 5 "fight", even if the poor warrior captain has a lot to catch up now. And Gazef, too cute. These nobles don't deserve him.
7/1/2023 c88 Small italian boy
Man, this was a fun chapter. Can't wait how things will develop.
The first pov of the Lydia really captured the turmoil of a young mind in a difficult moment. Not easy at all but you did it.
And Mira shipping Brain and Gachad will never not be funny ahahah.
Man, this was a fun chapter. Can't wait how things will develop.
The first pov of the Lydia really captured the turmoil of a young mind in a difficult moment. Not easy at all but you did it.
And Mira shipping Brain and Gachad will never not be funny ahahah.
6/27/2023 c3 Stormzy
This is way too boring and happy-go-lucky for my liking. "Meh I'm a kind-hearted slightly ignorant angel who so far has done nothing." I have to admit the writing is pretty good but I prefer an MC who isn't subservient and actually does things. Good luck with the rest of the work.
This is way too boring and happy-go-lucky for my liking. "Meh I'm a kind-hearted slightly ignorant angel who so far has done nothing." I have to admit the writing is pretty good but I prefer an MC who isn't subservient and actually does things. Good luck with the rest of the work.
6/20/2023 c87 Small italian boy
Renner interaction with Yuriko was really good. I think you really characterized the princess well, showing her intellect and ability to fool the angel. Was also nice the comparison and the vision Renner has of love, and how she compared her feelings to the bond Yuriko and Drau.
Mira acting as "advicer" to Climb and Brain was fun. As she said, without people like her the world would be lost eheh.
Drau and Yu part was incredibly cute. Make you wish to have something near to what these two dorks have.
Renner interaction with Yuriko was really good. I think you really characterized the princess well, showing her intellect and ability to fool the angel. Was also nice the comparison and the vision Renner has of love, and how she compared her feelings to the bond Yuriko and Drau.
Mira acting as "advicer" to Climb and Brain was fun. As she said, without people like her the world would be lost eheh.
Drau and Yu part was incredibly cute. Make you wish to have something near to what these two dorks have.
6/17/2023 c84 Guest
Finally Jirchin pov. Waited an eternity for this. Hope for more
Finally Jirchin pov. Waited an eternity for this. Hope for more
6/10/2023 c86 Small italian boy
Lmao, that title.
Ohoh, cool to see Noia here. Using the characters of mass is always a win in my book.
Ah, no. Fuck. Yeah makes sense. After all, was said that the Black would intervene. But I didn't expect Fluder to capitulate so easily. Just shows how the BS are the elite of the elite.
Drau joking about the "failed marriage", poor Jircniv. He is no match for Yuriko-chan.
Lmao, this is really the Draconic Queen win.
That was a fun chapter. Thank you
Lmao, that title.
Ohoh, cool to see Noia here. Using the characters of mass is always a win in my book.
Ah, no. Fuck. Yeah makes sense. After all, was said that the Black would intervene. But I didn't expect Fluder to capitulate so easily. Just shows how the BS are the elite of the elite.
Drau joking about the "failed marriage", poor Jircniv. He is no match for Yuriko-chan.
Lmao, this is really the Draconic Queen win.
That was a fun chapter. Thank you
6/3/2023 c85 Small italian boy
Oh the fate of the Dragon Empress is really interesting, I really can't wait to know more about it. The friendship between Tsa and the Gold Dragon surely is well conveyed.
Yuriko encounter with the dragon was fun. I expect it not to be a complete slaughter, considering the angel personality, but we will see.
Oh the fate of the Dragon Empress is really interesting, I really can't wait to know more about it. The friendship between Tsa and the Gold Dragon surely is well conveyed.
Yuriko encounter with the dragon was fun. I expect it not to be a complete slaughter, considering the angel personality, but we will see.
5/27/2023 c84 Small italian boy
In some fiction universe there are some laws set in stone and, no matter what, they are respected in every alternative universe.
Regarding the young Emperor, is impossible for him to escape stomachache. A pity, but surely he got it better in comparison with other characters.
Anyway the chapter was great. From Drau courtesy and etiquette and poor Yuriko trying to adjust to royal manners (she is doing her best) to Jircniv "infinite thought rambling" all in hipe to understand the situation.
Didn't expect to see the confrontation with the dragon so soon but, as Drau said, at this point normal dragon lord are hardly a problem so it was to be expected. Still, I'm curious to see how it will go.
And, well, there is a certain golden princess here now. Wonder how she will impact this diplomatic encounter.
In some fiction universe there are some laws set in stone and, no matter what, they are respected in every alternative universe.
Regarding the young Emperor, is impossible for him to escape stomachache. A pity, but surely he got it better in comparison with other characters.
Anyway the chapter was great. From Drau courtesy and etiquette and poor Yuriko trying to adjust to royal manners (she is doing her best) to Jircniv "infinite thought rambling" all in hipe to understand the situation.
Didn't expect to see the confrontation with the dragon so soon but, as Drau said, at this point normal dragon lord are hardly a problem so it was to be expected. Still, I'm curious to see how it will go.
And, well, there is a certain golden princess here now. Wonder how she will impact this diplomatic encounter.