for Fallen Down5/20/2023 c83 captainamurco
I thought the empyrium that was flying over the beastman country would make an appearance since you brought them up a couple chapters ago, what is it actually doing there?
I thought the empyrium that was flying over the beastman country would make an appearance since you brought them up a couple chapters ago, what is it actually doing there?
5/20/2023 c83 
2Small italian boy
Damn, was that first pov amazing. Got that "ancient and epic" feel to it, like some old fantasy movie.
Cool to see the Mirewood dragon lord display their power on the beastmen. And also cool to see how fucking strong and devastating these things can be for the other race, something not always shown in this series. The battle scenes were amazing and BDL at the end, musing about the conflict, juicy. Thank you for the chapter.
2Small italian boyDamn, was that first pov amazing. Got that "ancient and epic" feel to it, like some old fantasy movie.
Cool to see the Mirewood dragon lord display their power on the beastmen. And also cool to see how fucking strong and devastating these things can be for the other race, something not always shown in this series. The battle scenes were amazing and BDL at the end, musing about the conflict, juicy. Thank you for the chapter.
5/14/2023 c82 Small italian boy
The yuri part was soft and wholesome. Liar Drau arc? The discussion about blacksmithing was also cool. Wonder it the Draconic Kingdom will start to develop new "upgrade" for their troops.
The 6 Superpowers presentation was amazing. Even in case you will never use them, gave a sense of magnitude to the new world, which is one of my favorite part of Overlord. Seeing all these country out there, trying to guess what their culture, costumes and history are like it's always a fun input for creativity.
The yuri part was soft and wholesome. Liar Drau arc? The discussion about blacksmithing was also cool. Wonder it the Draconic Kingdom will start to develop new "upgrade" for their troops.
The 6 Superpowers presentation was amazing. Even in case you will never use them, gave a sense of magnitude to the new world, which is one of my favorite part of Overlord. Seeing all these country out there, trying to guess what their culture, costumes and history are like it's always a fun input for creativity.
5/10/2023 c1 Silver566
Message was the reason Gatenbarg fell. Basically they couldnt encrypt their conversations and misinformation easily caused its downfall
Message was the reason Gatenbarg fell. Basically they couldnt encrypt their conversations and misinformation easily caused its downfall
5/9/2023 c81 Small italian boy
I'm really liking the dryad characterization. She is detached enough from the trivial things of humanoid species to appear "alien". Good job.
The process of reconstruction still has a lot of road ahead but it's cool to see Drau being busy and showing how much works it is needed to run a kingdom. It's our favorite airhead after all, kek. Curious how the meeting with Jircniv will procede.
I'm really liking the dryad characterization. She is detached enough from the trivial things of humanoid species to appear "alien". Good job.
The process of reconstruction still has a lot of road ahead but it's cool to see Drau being busy and showing how much works it is needed to run a kingdom. It's our favorite airhead after all, kek. Curious how the meeting with Jircniv will procede.
5/3/2023 c80 Small italian boy
The pov of Crystal Tear was really awesome. The way you write the adventures is always a treat to read and, Cerabrate, with his attitude of "schoolgirl in love" for how much despicable can he be it's always funny.
Drau e Yuriko relationship is adorable as always but, especially after the joke chapter, was heartful to see the see the Angel talk about her regrets of her past life. The encounter with the merchant was also engaging and how cute was Yuriko when she underline she was also part of the "meeting".
The ending part with the beastmen also put a lot of interesting things. That last line sheesh. An amazing chapter.
The pov of Crystal Tear was really awesome. The way you write the adventures is always a treat to read and, Cerabrate, with his attitude of "schoolgirl in love" for how much despicable can he be it's always funny.
Drau e Yuriko relationship is adorable as always but, especially after the joke chapter, was heartful to see the see the Angel talk about her regrets of her past life. The encounter with the merchant was also engaging and how cute was Yuriko when she underline she was also part of the "meeting".
The ending part with the beastmen also put a lot of interesting things. That last line sheesh. An amazing chapter.
4/28/2023 c79 Small italian boy
Using only dialogues in the first pov was a sound choice. I felt the bond of Drau and Yuriko, their worries and their hopes for the future. Their relationship continue to advance and so does my cheering for them.
Lakyus, Lakyus. The adventurer is well characterized in her view of demihumans, as she both understand that every race has its set of moral compass but at the same time acknowledging that in some cases coexistence is impossible. Make for a well round character that is a pleasure to read.
Using only dialogues in the first pov was a sound choice. I felt the bond of Drau and Yuriko, their worries and their hopes for the future. Their relationship continue to advance and so does my cheering for them.
Lakyus, Lakyus. The adventurer is well characterized in her view of demihumans, as she both understand that every race has its set of moral compass but at the same time acknowledging that in some cases coexistence is impossible. Make for a well round character that is a pleasure to read.
4/23/2023 c78 Small italian boy
Oh dear, the angel pov was wonderful. Really captured the obsession a summon has for his summoner.
The part of the HS and the war with elves was also interesting, really can't wait to see how you will continue the conflict and what role will have Windstride.
Oh dear, the angel pov was wonderful. Really captured the obsession a summon has for his summoner.
The part of the HS and the war with elves was also interesting, really can't wait to see how you will continue the conflict and what role will have Windstride.
4/17/2023 c77 Small italian boy
The section with Jircniv was really interesting, you captured well the young emperor character and his contempt for the Renner and Drau (the blond one seems to hate women rulers, a little bit of misogyny in him?)
Angel-mail. The future is already here.
The section with Jircniv was really interesting, you captured well the young emperor character and his contempt for the Renner and Drau (the blond one seems to hate women rulers, a little bit of misogyny in him?)
Angel-mail. The future is already here.
4/16/2023 c77 FrenchWhiteFox
I really like this story ! Thank you for the great work! And I’m looking forward to see drau and Yuriko interact with the empire crew , i also hope the dragon lord die a painful dead x)
I really like this story ! Thank you for the great work! And I’m looking forward to see drau and Yuriko interact with the empire crew , i also hope the dragon lord die a painful dead x)
4/11/2023 c76 Small italian boy
Damn, Drau really showing the rajah who is boss now. I almost felt pity for the guy, but then I remembered he is a furry kek.
The Beastmen lord pondering if the cinnamon roll that is Yuriko is the one who slaughtered the council made me chuckle a lot. Poor guy.
Oof, Drau is becoming aware of BDL. The confrontation is more and more near, I guess.
Damn, Clementine is entering the field. Hehe, can't wait to see how you'll use her.
The ending was amazing. Awesome chapter!
Damn, Drau really showing the rajah who is boss now. I almost felt pity for the guy, but then I remembered he is a furry kek.
The Beastmen lord pondering if the cinnamon roll that is Yuriko is the one who slaughtered the council made me chuckle a lot. Poor guy.
Oof, Drau is becoming aware of BDL. The confrontation is more and more near, I guess.
Damn, Clementine is entering the field. Hehe, can't wait to see how you'll use her.
The ending was amazing. Awesome chapter!
4/10/2023 c76 2WhoStoleMyTea
Drau and Yuriko accidently charming/mind controlling the beastmen, poor(not) furries not even sure what is going on anymore.
2WhoStoleMyTeaDrau and Yuriko accidently charming/mind controlling the beastmen, poor(not) furries not even sure what is going on anymore.
4/7/2023 c75 2Small italian boy
Ok, the HS pov was really awesome. Got that feeling of a close team in just few paragraphs. Can't wait to see if they will get the unfortunate canon fate or you have something new in store for them.
How cute is the story Yuriko tells to Drau. And the angel having so many dreams, ,y heart is melting.
The ending is even more sweet. Damn. Great chapter.
2Small italian boyOk, the HS pov was really awesome. Got that feeling of a close team in just few paragraphs. Can't wait to see if they will get the unfortunate canon fate or you have something new in store for them.
How cute is the story Yuriko tells to Drau. And the angel having so many dreams, ,y heart is melting.
The ending is even more sweet. Damn. Great chapter.