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12/5/2022 c2 Heart Vs. Mind
check the stat points for Jin.. the prodigy perk points weren't added up for the levels. good story so far though
11/30/2022 c1 DameNingen1
And im gone… Didnt even make it a full chapter. Fucking mage builds always tick me off.
11/26/2022 c2 2blood enraged
an interesting take, there are some cringy fics out there that try to put in 2 oc-inserts, and its always meh, but to have 2 people in love, in a relationship already, going into a ecchi harem, honestly its a bit odd, and interesting.
My only gripe is i think your male oc needs a bit more 'dominance', or just 'more' in his personality, he's been a bit too...neutral so far, in contrast to the female oc, who has shown a bit more of her personality.
11/25/2022 c1 Blackkirito
Will you be putting a list of jins harem if he gets like 10 and up
11/25/2022 c2 Blackkirito
Will jin’s Vitality penalty be removed and is Mira rampage penalty removed. Next are they going to school
11/25/2022 c2 mrwinterdk
love the chapter good work
7/27/2022 c1 pablo.monroypm14
I don't know if you know this but picking half human is also very cleché hell it might be even more that devil because so many always pick human or part human.
7/5/2022 c1 mrwinterdk
I love the Concept of this story:)
6/29/2022 c1 Guest
Loving it so far
6/29/2022 c1 XxNightDragonxXx
this is probably the first story I've read like this, so props!
6/28/2022 c1 2The embodiment of Weirdness
This has potential. Keep up the good work.
6/28/2022 c1 Ahfucjcb
I’ll be honest the 5 wish thing only tends to show up in stories that last like 5 chapters.

Even nerfed extra powers like that quickly grow to the point of making the MC way to OP way too fast to make anything really a struggle.

I haven’t read past that part so I am hoping that you figured out a way to balance out what’s wrong he wishes for.

That said the very first wish saw you bring in another Mc to have their own gamer system. That alone is honestly something that can easily shatter a story.

I am hoping I will be proven wrong and am worrying for nothing but honesty anything more than a single wish beyond the gamer system and reincarnation tends to lead to writing oneself into a corner from what I’ve seen.
6/27/2022 c1 BeyndBOT
i love the first chapter keep it up

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