for About Time10/11/2022 c1 
4Garnet Wings
Enticing start! You've created an introspective and melancholic aura around adult Sarah that I really enjoy. I'm excited to see how these versions of Sarah and Jareth interact and how this seemingly disinterested wife of his will handle whatever is coming.
4Garnet WingsEnticing start! You've created an introspective and melancholic aura around adult Sarah that I really enjoy. I'm excited to see how these versions of Sarah and Jareth interact and how this seemingly disinterested wife of his will handle whatever is coming.
9/18/2022 c1 9MollyMuffinHead
Hell of a start. So much potential. Like the idea of her possibly helping him. Please come back. I definitely want more.
9MollyMuffinHeadHell of a start. So much potential. Like the idea of her possibly helping him. Please come back. I definitely want more.
7/12/2022 c1 Lyla 4th 1
Well written. and very interesting. Looking forward to reading this .
Well written. and very interesting. Looking forward to reading this .
6/29/2022 c1 tonemara
Interesting beginning. looking forward to seeing where you take this journey. I already want to kill the Queen.
Interesting beginning. looking forward to seeing where you take this journey. I already want to kill the Queen.
6/29/2022 c1 Guest 2022
Jareth married?! OMG! Until you dropped that bombshell, I was enjoying a unique new twist on the typical Labyrinth stories. Now I am so utterly taken aback by this shocker that I don’t know what to think or feel. Thanks.
Jareth married?! OMG! Until you dropped that bombshell, I was enjoying a unique new twist on the typical Labyrinth stories. Now I am so utterly taken aback by this shocker that I don’t know what to think or feel. Thanks.