for One Bad Decision at a Time11/21 c1 Jsmine Lucas
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "One Bad Decision at a Time" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
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I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "One Bad Decision at a Time" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
Discord: jasminelucas12
Instagram: jasmineluc_official
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11/13 c1 Vinay-kox01
Hey!
I just finished reading your story "One Bad Decision at a Time", and I absolutely loved it! I'd be super excited to adapt it into a comic or animation in my own style. I'm a digital artist and currently open for commission projects. I always aim to deliver work that I think you'd really enjoy, and hopefully, want to share too! My rates are fair, and I make sure the quality is top-notch every time.
If you’re interested, let's chat more I’d love to bring your story to life! You can reach me on
Discord: graphic_gold
Twitter: VKox139175
Instagram: vinaykox1
Hope to hear from you soon!
Hey!
I just finished reading your story "One Bad Decision at a Time", and I absolutely loved it! I'd be super excited to adapt it into a comic or animation in my own style. I'm a digital artist and currently open for commission projects. I always aim to deliver work that I think you'd really enjoy, and hopefully, want to share too! My rates are fair, and I make sure the quality is top-notch every time.
If you’re interested, let's chat more I’d love to bring your story to life! You can reach me on
Discord: graphic_gold
Twitter: VKox139175
Instagram: vinaykox1
Hope to hear from you soon!
5/21/2023 c4 Guest
This fic makes me want to vomit. The MC is easier to manipulate than Naruto and Kiba combined. Just how? Regardless, I dislike the direction the story is going in. Danzo and Root and all that…an extremely overused and overdone trope.
This fic makes me want to vomit. The MC is easier to manipulate than Naruto and Kiba combined. Just how? Regardless, I dislike the direction the story is going in. Danzo and Root and all that…an extremely overused and overdone trope.
5/19/2023 c3 Guest
I am ngl, I dislike this story. You are completely underestimating the Sarutobi’s power and understanding of what’s going on in the village unless he has explicitly given Danzo the green light to indoctrinate and mentally break the MC. I am against that, however, as Sarutobi understands the prowess of the Uzumaki and the familial link to Naruto. What I’m implying is that Sarutobi would not give Danzo the green light to destroy the MC as there is a possible budding relationship - with the potential to be a very strong relationship - between the MC and Naruto, which is essential for Naruto considering his upbringing.
So I ask, how has Danzo gotten away with doing this? Especially since it is extremely likely that Sarutobi has not given Danzo permission to and is also - if you were to use logic and common sense - likely vigilantly watching over the MC? This is probably all useless speculation as there is a tiny chance Sarutobi gave Danzo the green light.
Either way, interesting story with an interesting premise. Although, I absolutely hate how powerless the MC is to his own situation. In that sense, he is a true tool. Perhaps this will be a fic where we finally see an MC that’s nothing more than a tool — a weapon to be wielded because I don’t see how the MC can do anything to counteract the actions of the Hokage (assuming he’s letting Danzo do this) and Danzo himself, especially with Shisui’s mangekyo. Looks like the future for this MC will be that of a slave.
I am ngl, I dislike this story. You are completely underestimating the Sarutobi’s power and understanding of what’s going on in the village unless he has explicitly given Danzo the green light to indoctrinate and mentally break the MC. I am against that, however, as Sarutobi understands the prowess of the Uzumaki and the familial link to Naruto. What I’m implying is that Sarutobi would not give Danzo the green light to destroy the MC as there is a possible budding relationship - with the potential to be a very strong relationship - between the MC and Naruto, which is essential for Naruto considering his upbringing.
So I ask, how has Danzo gotten away with doing this? Especially since it is extremely likely that Sarutobi has not given Danzo permission to and is also - if you were to use logic and common sense - likely vigilantly watching over the MC? This is probably all useless speculation as there is a tiny chance Sarutobi gave Danzo the green light.
Either way, interesting story with an interesting premise. Although, I absolutely hate how powerless the MC is to his own situation. In that sense, he is a true tool. Perhaps this will be a fic where we finally see an MC that’s nothing more than a tool — a weapon to be wielded because I don’t see how the MC can do anything to counteract the actions of the Hokage (assuming he’s letting Danzo do this) and Danzo himself, especially with Shisui’s mangekyo. Looks like the future for this MC will be that of a slave.
4/22/2023 c5 Gerden360
Good work so far. The main character is kind of stuck with danzo controlling what he can do and having no allies so it will be interesting to see how he moves forward.
Good work so far. The main character is kind of stuck with danzo controlling what he can do and having no allies so it will be interesting to see how he moves forward.
11/12/2022 c3 Gerden360
Good job so far, it's nice to see Danzo actually achieve something as canon made him seem very incompetent since he didn't do anything that helped the leaf village deliberately.
Good job so far, it's nice to see Danzo actually achieve something as canon made him seem very incompetent since he didn't do anything that helped the leaf village deliberately.
7/1/2022 c1 PowWow22
This is such an intriguing story, I really like it so far. I really like the way your choosing to tell the story. It almost feels like the build up to a big twist would. It makes me feel like I'm the si or the main character in the story kind of like a VR experience. I like not knowing what's going and slowly figuring things out along with the character. I loved all the interactions that sota had with people who seem to know him. It made me even more curious to know who Sota is and why their relation to him and made it feel like this character actually exists in this world and didn't just pop up from nowhere, as itachi put it. It also cues us into the feeling of dissociation and confusion he must feel because I, like him, am not sure what exactly is going on or why people reacting certain ways. I like you portrayal of itachi. Sometimes he's protrayed as superhuman, stretched thin yet still super perfect and almost robotic. You were able to humanize him and show the kind of flaws/cracks in the facade he would probably have as kid especially before any of the tragedy. Like it makes sense that someone like itachi with so much on his plate and so many commitments would be impatient and foward when it comes to things not included in that, especially when they conflict. The reference to his love for dango and Sasuke were nice to see and felt natural and true to character. The story feels so immersive stories even though it's only the first chapter so I'm interested to see where it goes. I can't wait to lean more about character and see more interactions with the other characters.
This is such an intriguing story, I really like it so far. I really like the way your choosing to tell the story. It almost feels like the build up to a big twist would. It makes me feel like I'm the si or the main character in the story kind of like a VR experience. I like not knowing what's going and slowly figuring things out along with the character. I loved all the interactions that sota had with people who seem to know him. It made me even more curious to know who Sota is and why their relation to him and made it feel like this character actually exists in this world and didn't just pop up from nowhere, as itachi put it. It also cues us into the feeling of dissociation and confusion he must feel because I, like him, am not sure what exactly is going on or why people reacting certain ways. I like you portrayal of itachi. Sometimes he's protrayed as superhuman, stretched thin yet still super perfect and almost robotic. You were able to humanize him and show the kind of flaws/cracks in the facade he would probably have as kid especially before any of the tragedy. Like it makes sense that someone like itachi with so much on his plate and so many commitments would be impatient and foward when it comes to things not included in that, especially when they conflict. The reference to his love for dango and Sasuke were nice to see and felt natural and true to character. The story feels so immersive stories even though it's only the first chapter so I'm interested to see where it goes. I can't wait to lean more about character and see more interactions with the other characters.
7/1/2022 c1 MEA24
You shouldn't have the y/N pov it's ruining the ahh 'moment'?
It's a shame that you have a well written chapter but it ruins thr immersion cus I'm reading. you' stop blah blah blah... so yeah...
You shouldn't have the y/N pov it's ruining the ahh 'moment'?
It's a shame that you have a well written chapter but it ruins thr immersion cus I'm reading. you' stop blah blah blah... so yeah...