for Valkyrie Potter: Falling Ashes7/5/2023 c16 dloold87
Why did Brock say Ash was trying for type advantage with a Pidgeotto, Flying is weak to Rock. Is Brock just saying shit to sound intimidating or something?
Why did Brock say Ash was trying for type advantage with a Pidgeotto, Flying is weak to Rock. Is Brock just saying shit to sound intimidating or something?
7/5/2023 c16 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun battle's against brock
wonder how crazy idea's lance will get to make it up ?
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun battle's against brock
wonder how crazy idea's lance will get to make it up ?
7/4/2023 c15 
2Rooster24
Loving the story so far camt wait for the next. Random question out of the depths of my depraved mind that couldn't stay hidden, being that she has a hisuian arcanine would that mean she has to be careful around balto when she goes in heat due to the instincts?
2Rooster24Loving the story so far camt wait for the next. Random question out of the depths of my depraved mind that couldn't stay hidden, being that she has a hisuian arcanine would that mean she has to be careful around balto when she goes in heat due to the instincts?
6/15/2023 c1 i have a name
Thank you for writing this story.
Thank you for writing this story.
5/21/2023 c15 ShadowPhyr
yay! this started updating again! after finishing the first story I was really hoping for more to sink my teeth into, thank you for putting out the sequel!
yay! this started updating again! after finishing the first story I was really hoping for more to sink my teeth into, thank you for putting out the sequel!
5/8/2023 c15 SHAE H
I would love to see vali keep at least one of the eevee’s maybe turn it into the fairy type to keep Lance on his toes
I would love to see vali keep at least one of the eevee’s maybe turn it into the fairy type to keep Lance on his toes
5/8/2023 c15 Jostanos
There is so much to say that I can not write it all let alone remember what it all is.
What? My mind is going as fast as the fastest Pokémon at top speed. I can't transfer all those wonderful ideas here for they go by too quickly for me to type!
*anime sighs* Such is the blessing and curse of a manic mind.
Anyway... Please continue when you may. :)
There is so much to say that I can not write it all let alone remember what it all is.
What? My mind is going as fast as the fastest Pokémon at top speed. I can't transfer all those wonderful ideas here for they go by too quickly for me to type!
*anime sighs* Such is the blessing and curse of a manic mind.
Anyway... Please continue when you may. :)
5/7/2023 c15 13yukicrewger2
let me guess, drawing on the manga for inspiration? Because with how you set Surge, Koga and Sabrina, I doubt they can become Rocket admins. So the Rockets might be looking elsewhere, and were trying to recruit Brock's Dad...
Also, with Brock's dad being arrested, He won't be able to retake the gym, meaning I don't think Brock will be joining them on their journey. Might want to set up an approved helper to help Brock out with his siblings, and to ease Brock out of his parentification
13yukicrewger2let me guess, drawing on the manga for inspiration? Because with how you set Surge, Koga and Sabrina, I doubt they can become Rocket admins. So the Rockets might be looking elsewhere, and were trying to recruit Brock's Dad...
Also, with Brock's dad being arrested, He won't be able to retake the gym, meaning I don't think Brock will be joining them on their journey. Might want to set up an approved helper to help Brock out with his siblings, and to ease Brock out of his parentification
4/26/2023 c14 saku hyuuga
I'm a fan of this story but a bad one jajaja I only found out this sequel. And that because I stumbled across the sidestories in Ao3.
Thank you so much for This story! Even if I barely slept last night and was quite useless at my job today
I'm a fan of this story but a bad one jajaja I only found out this sequel. And that because I stumbled across the sidestories in Ao3.
Thank you so much for This story! Even if I barely slept last night and was quite useless at my job today
4/26/2023 c14 Jostanos
*chuckles warmly* BK, you never cease to amaze me. Thank you.
Those two _FINALLY_ got through their sort-a thick skulls that they like/love Vali, and that they should actually confess soon rather than continue to wait as they have.
Steven has also found out that Cynthia _HAS_ had, and sort-a still does, have a relationship with Vali, and that she wouldn't mind being in a 'threesome' with both himself, and Vali.
Hmm... I wonder.. May she be.. Nah. Besides.. I don't think that Lance would like that at all. :P
*ahem*
Anyway... Flint and Lola are getting what they deserve.
Ash and Gary are training their Pokémon for not only thier respective Gym Battles, but also for any future encounters with Team Rocket!
Well.. the major group anyway like the ones that attacked the museum.
Jesse, James, and Meowth.. If I remember correctly, are essentially 'covert ops' being 'comic relief and 'training' for Ash and Gary whilst helping Vali and her 'crew' keep an eye on things.
Or have I gotten something wrong here? I have a feeling that I may have made an error with the above, but I am not sure.
BK, please verify either way. Thank you. :)
*chuckles warmly* BK, you never cease to amaze me. Thank you.
Those two _FINALLY_ got through their sort-a thick skulls that they like/love Vali, and that they should actually confess soon rather than continue to wait as they have.
Steven has also found out that Cynthia _HAS_ had, and sort-a still does, have a relationship with Vali, and that she wouldn't mind being in a 'threesome' with both himself, and Vali.
Hmm... I wonder.. May she be.. Nah. Besides.. I don't think that Lance would like that at all. :P
*ahem*
Anyway... Flint and Lola are getting what they deserve.
Ash and Gary are training their Pokémon for not only thier respective Gym Battles, but also for any future encounters with Team Rocket!
Well.. the major group anyway like the ones that attacked the museum.
Jesse, James, and Meowth.. If I remember correctly, are essentially 'covert ops' being 'comic relief and 'training' for Ash and Gary whilst helping Vali and her 'crew' keep an eye on things.
Or have I gotten something wrong here? I have a feeling that I may have made an error with the above, but I am not sure.
BK, please verify either way. Thank you. :)
4/24/2023 c14 A
thanks for the chapter! ngl, i'm into this champion harem. vali/lance? hell yeah! vali/steven? yes please! vali/cynthia? fuck yeah! or if you decide to go for one person, i'd be down for any cause your relationship development is top tier. lowkey really sad that regional differences/schedules are holding vali/cynthia back, hopefully they can work it out somehow?
Either way, looking forward to seeing what comes next!
thanks for the chapter! ngl, i'm into this champion harem. vali/lance? hell yeah! vali/steven? yes please! vali/cynthia? fuck yeah! or if you decide to go for one person, i'd be down for any cause your relationship development is top tier. lowkey really sad that regional differences/schedules are holding vali/cynthia back, hopefully they can work it out somehow?
Either way, looking forward to seeing what comes next!