for Valkyrie Potter: Falling Ashes1/8/2023 c1 mallory.b.rosenstein
That was great. Loved the chapter and Vali and the sinnoh champ Spicy . I kind of feel bad for Steven and Lance, but good for her and I will always hope for Steven x Vali.
And I was wondering if somehow you could include another shiny Pokémon in the series.
I know they are rare but they need representation! Vali doesn’t even need to be it’s trainer it could only be mentioned plz.
That was great. Loved the chapter and Vali and the sinnoh champ Spicy . I kind of feel bad for Steven and Lance, but good for her and I will always hope for Steven x Vali.
And I was wondering if somehow you could include another shiny Pokémon in the series.
I know they are rare but they need representation! Vali doesn’t even need to be it’s trainer it could only be mentioned plz.
1/8/2023 c4 comodo50
Wait, Lance's jigglypuff is the one from anime, that slaps everyone and draws on people who fall asleep when they sing? LMAO.
I recall that scene where she slaps all the clefairy in the anime haha
Lovely to see a new chapter. Looking forward to what comes up next. Also interesting to see what Pikachu thinks of Vali and her team
Wait, Lance's jigglypuff is the one from anime, that slaps everyone and draws on people who fall asleep when they sing? LMAO.
I recall that scene where she slaps all the clefairy in the anime haha
Lovely to see a new chapter. Looking forward to what comes up next. Also interesting to see what Pikachu thinks of Vali and her team
1/8/2023 c4 
2ShadowWolf223
Ooo, I love Val’s title!
A the part about Lance’s spiteful fairy-type is funny.
Surprised Val once had a Togikiss though. That was nice little bit of background.
2ShadowWolf223Ooo, I love Val’s title!
A the part about Lance’s spiteful fairy-type is funny.
Surprised Val once had a Togikiss though. That was nice little bit of background.
1/8/2023 c4 Caue97
I love this story and it's prequel.
Having said that, didin't Vali trade a Cufant for a Smeargle with Steven in the obter story?
Love your story but It has inconsistencies
Sorry for my English, not my First language
I love this story and it's prequel.
Having said that, didin't Vali trade a Cufant for a Smeargle with Steven in the obter story?
Love your story but It has inconsistencies
Sorry for my English, not my First language
1/8/2023 c4 LilSqueaks
Awesomethanks for clearing up the age questionsI can't wait for them to meet Misty! Nice blackmail and hilarity from a pokemon that just wants a nap.
I love seeing updates but dont rush yourself. How closely will this be matching the TV series? Will Jessie, James and Meowth be making any appearances?
Awesomethanks for clearing up the age questionsI can't wait for them to meet Misty! Nice blackmail and hilarity from a pokemon that just wants a nap.
I love seeing updates but dont rush yourself. How closely will this be matching the TV series? Will Jessie, James and Meowth be making any appearances?
1/8/2023 c4 3Acolyte of the Blood Moon
Lance being trolled by a spiteful Jigglypuff was the best part of this chapter hands down lol. Thanks for the update!
3Acolyte of the Blood MoonLance being trolled by a spiteful Jigglypuff was the best part of this chapter hands down lol. Thanks for the update!
1/8/2023 c3 YokoMisaki
Everyone else*wondering who she will chose* meanwhile me *Cheering Cynthia on*
Everyone else*wondering who she will chose* meanwhile me *Cheering Cynthia on*
1/8/2023 c4 YokoMisaki
Vali is not the only one laughing at Lance's misery. I love that Jigglypuff so much right now. This is amazing and I can't tell you how much I adore this story and the original one as well. I've read it multiple times too, which doesn't usually happens. Thank you for writing this!
Vali is not the only one laughing at Lance's misery. I love that Jigglypuff so much right now. This is amazing and I can't tell you how much I adore this story and the original one as well. I've read it multiple times too, which doesn't usually happens. Thank you for writing this!
1/8/2023 c4 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing the puff with lance hope this means no random sleeping gags in the story for the gang
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing the puff with lance hope this means no random sleeping gags in the story for the gang
1/5/2023 c3 Em
Ahhhhhh! This story is so fucking cute! I love it! Marvellously written excellent pacing wonderful characters amazing interactions perfect plot line! It’s the works! And it’s free?! Damn how lucky are we?! You spoil us!
But ohhh Vali has a hell of a choice Steven straight up resurrects a Amaura for her just cuz she wants one and mentioned it off hand and Lance is straight up having a family with her! Mama and Papa talk about putting the cart before the horse! So cute love their simping how will she choose?!
Buttttttttttt but but but but but hear me out…what if she doesn’t?! Ehhhh? Eh? Little bit of polygamy little bit of a triad little bit of spice? I’m down! You down? We all down! Pretty please with a cherry on top? Fire Empress and her two simping king champions? Girls gonna rule the world without lifting a finger! I love it!
Can’t wait for the next update!
Ahhhhhh! This story is so fucking cute! I love it! Marvellously written excellent pacing wonderful characters amazing interactions perfect plot line! It’s the works! And it’s free?! Damn how lucky are we?! You spoil us!
But ohhh Vali has a hell of a choice Steven straight up resurrects a Amaura for her just cuz she wants one and mentioned it off hand and Lance is straight up having a family with her! Mama and Papa talk about putting the cart before the horse! So cute love their simping how will she choose?!
Buttttttttttt but but but but but hear me out…what if she doesn’t?! Ehhhh? Eh? Little bit of polygamy little bit of a triad little bit of spice? I’m down! You down? We all down! Pretty please with a cherry on top? Fire Empress and her two simping king champions? Girls gonna rule the world without lifting a finger! I love it!
Can’t wait for the next update!
1/5/2023 c2 Guest
Papa and Mama awwwww ️️️️
Papa and Mama awwwww ️️️️