for Valkyrie Potter: Falling Ashes12/24/2022 c3 mr. bumpity
Don't feel bad if you can't get a chapter out on time, finding the time to write anything is hard these days. Oh god every time Vali, Lance, and Steven are together is too funny. To those who are confused; no that wasn't Misty for she has orange hair not red. Otherwise have some great holidays and see you next year!
Don't feel bad if you can't get a chapter out on time, finding the time to write anything is hard these days. Oh god every time Vali, Lance, and Steven are together is too funny. To those who are confused; no that wasn't Misty for she has orange hair not red. Otherwise have some great holidays and see you next year!
12/25/2022 c3 LilSqueaks
Love new chapters!
You've got Vali's age messed up. She was only 6 years older than Ash when she went on her journey, so now that he is 10, she would be 16 and Steven and Lance would be 20. I figure the age if consent in the Pokeworld would be 14/15 since they let 10yo kids leave home, drop out of school and be responsible for beings that "can spam elemental attacks and kill us all" to quite Vali from the first storyMy vote is on Steven/Vali/Lance pairing
I can't wait to see how this journey progresses.
Do we get to see more magic usage? Has there been any update from trying to reach anyone from the HP world?
I think a cool third story would be after Ash's journey the Goblet of Fire summons her back; it happens when she's with Lance/Steven and they go with her. Since Siri doesn't go with she claims the lordship for Black, Peverell, Potter, Slytherin (others of you want) During the tournament they learn about horcrux/Voldy. Time runs about the same day to day but when traveling between worlds Celebi or Dailga drop them off where they are needed so they don't miss out on much in the Pokeworld and why Vali aged even though it's only been 3 month in the HP world
Love new chapters!
You've got Vali's age messed up. She was only 6 years older than Ash when she went on her journey, so now that he is 10, she would be 16 and Steven and Lance would be 20. I figure the age if consent in the Pokeworld would be 14/15 since they let 10yo kids leave home, drop out of school and be responsible for beings that "can spam elemental attacks and kill us all" to quite Vali from the first storyMy vote is on Steven/Vali/Lance pairing
I can't wait to see how this journey progresses.
Do we get to see more magic usage? Has there been any update from trying to reach anyone from the HP world?
I think a cool third story would be after Ash's journey the Goblet of Fire summons her back; it happens when she's with Lance/Steven and they go with her. Since Siri doesn't go with she claims the lordship for Black, Peverell, Potter, Slytherin (others of you want) During the tournament they learn about horcrux/Voldy. Time runs about the same day to day but when traveling between worlds Celebi or Dailga drop them off where they are needed so they don't miss out on much in the Pokeworld and why Vali aged even though it's only been 3 month in the HP world
12/25/2022 c3 Catalis
ty for the Christmas gift you have no idea how happy i got when i saw that you post a new chapter. i really love the story of vali ...and i most say i really want to know who she will chose at the end , the hot head dragon master or the cool and calm steal master XD
ty for the Christmas gift you have no idea how happy i got when i saw that you post a new chapter. i really love the story of vali ...and i most say i really want to know who she will chose at the end , the hot head dragon master or the cool and calm steal master XD
12/25/2022 c3 silentstrixe
Your early Christmas present is well received and very much enjoyed.
Merry Christmas to uh ou as well!
Your early Christmas present is well received and very much enjoyed.
Merry Christmas to uh ou as well!
12/25/2022 c3 cowchoas
i be loling so badly if vali end up with cynthia after everything that has happen with lance and steven
i be loling so badly if vali end up with cynthia after everything that has happen with lance and steven
12/25/2022 c3 mallory.b.rosenstein
That was comedic gold the mama.
I still ship vali and Steven tho. And if Cinthia wants to join inbut I can’t wait for the next update.
Love the story.
That was comedic gold the mama.
I still ship vali and Steven tho. And if Cinthia wants to join inbut I can’t wait for the next update.
Love the story.
12/24/2022 c3 
4The Viking Stranger
You know what would be hilarious? Vali gets a Harem with Lance, Steven and Cynthia. How it would eventually geto to that point would be even more hilarious. I hope and pray this happens.
Keep up the good work!
4The Viking StrangerYou know what would be hilarious? Vali gets a Harem with Lance, Steven and Cynthia. How it would eventually geto to that point would be even more hilarious. I hope and pray this happens.
Keep up the good work!
12/24/2022 c3 Joanann
I am so delighted at this update! I love this story and just finished reading the first one for a third time, so an update to this one was amazing. Also, who did Vali leave behind? Galadriel?
I am so delighted at this update! I love this story and just finished reading the first one for a third time, so an update to this one was amazing. Also, who did Vali leave behind? Galadriel?
12/24/2022 c3 ASleepySloth
I'm a bit confused at what Vali's age currently is. I remember from the first story that she is physically six years older than Ash and Gary,(being 8 and 2 respectively) but in this book while the kids are both 10 Lance comments on her 16th birthday being three years ago. So she's supposed to be 19?
I'm a bit confused at what Vali's age currently is. I remember from the first story that she is physically six years older than Ash and Gary,(being 8 and 2 respectively) but in this book while the kids are both 10 Lance comments on her 16th birthday being three years ago. So she's supposed to be 19?
12/24/2022 c3 2Shazia Malik
Nice to see an update to this, really enjoying this sequel and am currently reading the first story for the nth time.
Nice to see Misty if only briefly.
The scenes with Elrond amused me. He’s got quite the potty mouth.
2Shazia MalikNice to see an update to this, really enjoying this sequel and am currently reading the first story for the nth time.
Nice to see Misty if only briefly.
The scenes with Elrond amused me. He’s got quite the potty mouth.
12/24/2022 c3 SHAE H
I really hope you make the pairing Steven,Vali and Lance I would love to see people making bets on who shall end up with
I really hope you make the pairing Steven,Vali and Lance I would love to see people making bets on who shall end up with
12/24/2022 c3 AchroniaSamara
If you're going to make Vali get in a relationship then it would be nice to see her togetehr with both Lance and Steven if you don't decide to go with her having a relationship with a Female
If you're going to make Vali get in a relationship then it would be nice to see her togetehr with both Lance and Steven if you don't decide to go with her having a relationship with a Female
12/24/2022 c3 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing them meet misty and ash not killing a bike
interesting seeing the flok of sparrow wonder if seeing ho-oh could help ash and pikachu bond
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing them meet misty and ash not killing a bike
interesting seeing the flok of sparrow wonder if seeing ho-oh could help ash and pikachu bond