for Valkyrie Potter: Falling Ashes12/13/2022 c1 Kennji
right so alot of stuff happened we don't know about mhhh
also I fully support ValiXCynthia that needs to be the official paaring or ValiXSabrina but the first one it should be please!*begins knelling and begging*
right so alot of stuff happened we don't know about mhhh
also I fully support ValiXCynthia that needs to be the official paaring or ValiXSabrina but the first one it should be please!*begins knelling and begging*
12/12/2022 c2 Sozin's Flame
Awesome! Thrilled abt the new chapter. I really like Vali with Cynthia I hope you'll keep them together!
Awesome! Thrilled abt the new chapter. I really like Vali with Cynthia I hope you'll keep them together!
12/12/2022 c2 
13ZaneT69
I'm glad you're posting again. The chapter was great, I only noticed that you misspelled Giovanni as Giovani in terms of mistakes. But your quality isn't effected.
13ZaneT69I'm glad you're posting again. The chapter was great, I only noticed that you misspelled Giovanni as Giovani in terms of mistakes. But your quality isn't effected.
12/12/2022 c2 Ether02
About time this got rolling again, I've been waiting for more of this.
Also the fact that Potter luck is allready striking, just tells me that this shit will get rediculous real quick.
About time this got rolling again, I've been waiting for more of this.
Also the fact that Potter luck is allready striking, just tells me that this shit will get rediculous real quick.
12/12/2022 c2 1Lucky Guard
Great chapter. It made my day (or maybe my week) to see an update from you. I can't wait to see what happens next. Ho-oh? That is my prediction.
1Lucky GuardGreat chapter. It made my day (or maybe my week) to see an update from you. I can't wait to see what happens next. Ho-oh? That is my prediction.
12/12/2022 c2 Reaper1990
Please let vali find a victini egg. Also please don't take so long between chapter post's please.
Please let vali find a victini egg. Also please don't take so long between chapter post's please.
12/12/2022 c2 ayienne
Ash and Gary adventure finally here and instead of a Missy encounter, we have a thief. What a start! XD Lance slipping <3 Thank you for new chapter!
Ash and Gary adventure finally here and instead of a Missy encounter, we have a thief. What a start! XD Lance slipping <3 Thank you for new chapter!
12/12/2022 c2 alphagates
Ash how i miss this fic so
it's nice to see it continued, and I hope i tales less time for the next chapter
Ash how i miss this fic so
it's nice to see it continued, and I hope i tales less time for the next chapter
12/12/2022 c2 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing ash and gary learning on the road will be fun to see them grow and good trainers
fun little bits on the hate of paperwork and how lance deals with it all
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing ash and gary learning on the road will be fun to see them grow and good trainers
fun little bits on the hate of paperwork and how lance deals with it all
12/12/2022 c2 TintedFero
I nearly squealed when I saw this was updated - Omfg Lance calling vali mama to his axew and cali being like wtf did you just call me and Lance making a strangled sound made my day :))
I nearly squealed when I saw this was updated - Omfg Lance calling vali mama to his axew and cali being like wtf did you just call me and Lance making a strangled sound made my day :))
12/12/2022 c2 3Acolyte of the Blood Moon
So great to hear from you! Loved the chapter, it was great. Why is Lance keeping Vali from battling? Or we will find out?
3Acolyte of the Blood MoonSo great to hear from you! Loved the chapter, it was great. Why is Lance keeping Vali from battling? Or we will find out?