for Valkyrie Potter: Falling Ashes12/12/2022 c2 alphagates
Ash how i miss this fic so
it's nice to see it continued, and I hope i tales less time for the next chapter
Ash how i miss this fic so
it's nice to see it continued, and I hope i tales less time for the next chapter
12/12/2022 c2 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing ash and gary learning on the road will be fun to see them grow and good trainers
fun little bits on the hate of paperwork and how lance deals with it all
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing ash and gary learning on the road will be fun to see them grow and good trainers
fun little bits on the hate of paperwork and how lance deals with it all
12/12/2022 c2 TintedFero
I nearly squealed when I saw this was updated - Omfg Lance calling vali mama to his axew and cali being like wtf did you just call me and Lance making a strangled sound made my day :))
I nearly squealed when I saw this was updated - Omfg Lance calling vali mama to his axew and cali being like wtf did you just call me and Lance making a strangled sound made my day :))
12/12/2022 c2 
3Acolyte of the Blood Moon
So great to hear from you! Loved the chapter, it was great. Why is Lance keeping Vali from battling? Or we will find out?
3Acolyte of the Blood MoonSo great to hear from you! Loved the chapter, it was great. Why is Lance keeping Vali from battling? Or we will find out?
12/11/2022 c2 CapnWolfe
I absolutely love the story so far and can’t wait to see where it goes. Please keep up the good work!
I absolutely love the story so far and can’t wait to see where it goes. Please keep up the good work!
12/11/2022 c2 domoney246
it's so good to see a new chapter but for the list of pokemon it just says female for ashs
it's so good to see a new chapter but for the list of pokemon it just says female for ashs
12/11/2022 c2 13yukicrewger2
1) I find it funny that Elrond likes Mustard, when Ash's Pikachu likes Ketchup, and will find future arguments between the two on which is better to be hilarious
2) I vote on Vali's Magby, which hopefully is a Magmar now (if somehow its a Magmortar at this point) to be named Maui
13yukicrewger21) I find it funny that Elrond likes Mustard, when Ash's Pikachu likes Ketchup, and will find future arguments between the two on which is better to be hilarious
2) I vote on Vali's Magby, which hopefully is a Magmar now (if somehow its a Magmortar at this point) to be named Maui
12/11/2022 c2 Seruvius
Good fun. I enjoy the fleshed out routes, gyms and the thieves. Interested to see how the relationship with the champions and other elites develops
Good fun. I enjoy the fleshed out routes, gyms and the thieves. Interested to see how the relationship with the champions and other elites develops
11/18/2022 c1 Jared Reese
Be interesting to see you continue this story. I really enjoyed your first story with Vali.
Be interesting to see you continue this story. I really enjoyed your first story with Vali.
10/26/2022 c1 vampireslayer2000
I hope you update soon. I like this story. I hope it is a Lance/Vali/Steven romance.
I hope you update soon. I like this story. I hope it is a Lance/Vali/Steven romance.