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12/21/2023 c30 13yukicrewger2
Whelp, Ash is about to get a Charmander, especially since he may have just formed an Aura Bond with the little one. If this is the same charmander from canon, it might end up even more loyal to him than canon since canon Charmander/Charmeleon/Charizard had been blinded by pride until the Orange Islands incident
12/21/2023 c30 2ShadowWolf223
That’s an even scarier situation than Canon. And the fact little Charmander is Smaug’s kid?
…Damn Potter’s Luck…

Lots of Kudos though. Was riveting to my phone the entire chapter.
12/21/2023 c30 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
12/21/2023 c30 AyameKitsune
Epic! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
12/1/2023 c29 Guest
loved the scene with Sabrina, really enjoying their relationship though I sorta feel sorry for Sabrina. nice to see Brock get some interest in breeding and Vali showing some of the things she knows about Pokemon
12/1/2023 c29 frankieu
Nice chapter thx for writing it
12/1/2023 c29 Jostanos
Val has a point, Brock: You won't be thanking her later.
Well... you may thank her... sarcastically, or in other non lewd/sick ways. :P

Gary has earned/gained an Abra! What may their name be?

Please continue when you may, BK! *eye smiles*
12/1/2023 c29 BioHazard82
Another good one.
12/1/2023 c29 Silence The Loudest Sound
Loved the chapter. Also loved the Sabrina and Vali relationship though it does make me sad to miss out on the possible pairing cause I can just imagine how that would work out and I think I would have been okay with it. Though I am rooting for Vali and Cynthia!
11/30/2023 c29 AyameKitsune
Epic! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
11/20/2023 c28 Guest
like how bulbasaur ended up going with Ash, the way he is designated as a therapy case is a nice change
11/20/2023 c28 AyameKitsune
Epic! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
11/20/2023 c28 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
11/20/2023 c28 BioHazard82
Another good one.
11/19/2023 c28 Jostanos
Brock and Ash gained their respective new Pokémon from Melanie's "Heal Farm".
Brock: An Oddish and a Wooper.
Ash: The finicky Bulbasaur.

How may their journey go from here? Stay tuned to find out! *warm grin*

Please continue when you may, BK. This story is always a joy to read and review.
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