for Valkyrie Potter: Falling Ashes11/20/2023 c28 Guest
like how bulbasaur ended up going with Ash, the way he is designated as a therapy case is a nice change
like how bulbasaur ended up going with Ash, the way he is designated as a therapy case is a nice change
11/19/2023 c28 Jostanos
Brock and Ash gained their respective new Pokémon from Melanie's "Heal Farm".
Brock: An Oddish and a Wooper.
Ash: The finicky Bulbasaur.
How may their journey go from here? Stay tuned to find out! *warm grin*
Please continue when you may, BK. This story is always a joy to read and review.
Brock and Ash gained their respective new Pokémon from Melanie's "Heal Farm".
Brock: An Oddish and a Wooper.
Ash: The finicky Bulbasaur.
How may their journey go from here? Stay tuned to find out! *warm grin*
Please continue when you may, BK. This story is always a joy to read and review.
11/8/2023 c27 Guest
and the reveal finally happened, liked the talk between Gary and Vali
and the reveal finally happened, liked the talk between Gary and Vali
11/8/2023 c27 
65The Ginger Ghost
While I seldom leave reviews on anyone's work, it felt right to leave this one. Vali's emotions, motivations, and such always feel compelling and authentic to experience; this time... This time, I felt the need to review because of the discussion of her grief. In brief, I experienced the loss of a litter of kittens less than a week ago, and this chapter... Vali's explanation of grief made me feel understood and seen, even despite the fact that it's entirely a coincidence. Saying that reading helped would be both an under and overstatement; it made everything feel raw again, but it also made the wound feel a little bit easier to bear.
(As for the "usual" Review Things: I love your way with words, your worldbuilding is phenomenal, and I always eagerly look forward to new chapters.)
65The Ginger GhostWhile I seldom leave reviews on anyone's work, it felt right to leave this one. Vali's emotions, motivations, and such always feel compelling and authentic to experience; this time... This time, I felt the need to review because of the discussion of her grief. In brief, I experienced the loss of a litter of kittens less than a week ago, and this chapter... Vali's explanation of grief made me feel understood and seen, even despite the fact that it's entirely a coincidence. Saying that reading helped would be both an under and overstatement; it made everything feel raw again, but it also made the wound feel a little bit easier to bear.
(As for the "usual" Review Things: I love your way with words, your worldbuilding is phenomenal, and I always eagerly look forward to new chapters.)
10/20/2023 c26 6DGJabberwocky
Really liking this story. Was a little worried that there would be a lot of Misty-bashing, but you worked it well. Are you gonna include any Paldean Pokemon?
6DGJabberwockyReally liking this story. Was a little worried that there would be a lot of Misty-bashing, but you worked it well. Are you gonna include any Paldean Pokemon?
10/19/2023 c26 Guest
interesting small tidbits being revealed about why Vali actually dislikes Gold
interesting small tidbits being revealed about why Vali actually dislikes Gold
10/19/2023 c26 13yukicrewger2
My Guess: Vali lost a pokemon, probably a dragon type, and at the end of the chapter, it just came back to the world of the living as a Dreepy, hopefully they'll be reunited
13yukicrewger2My Guess: Vali lost a pokemon, probably a dragon type, and at the end of the chapter, it just came back to the world of the living as a Dreepy, hopefully they'll be reunited