
9/10/2023 c21 Guest
Great chapter but plz Vali/Cynthia
Great chapter but plz Vali/Cynthia
9/7/2023 c21 Guest
nice little scene with Grace, looking forward to the waterflowers showing up next chapter. interesting scene with suicune
nice little scene with Grace, looking forward to the waterflowers showing up next chapter. interesting scene with suicune
9/7/2023 c21 Jostanos
omake:
Ash: Knock knock.
Gary: Who's there?
Ash: Walter.
Gary: Walter who?
Ash: I would like to see Walter Wall ping pong balls!
Staryu & Starmie: *leaping out of the water several times* HYAAA! HYAA! HYAA! HYAA! HYAA!
Ash & Gary: *bows to the readers/audience* The above omake is based on a Capt. kangaroo skit that we just parodied.
omake end.
Suicune saved from Team Rocket Pokémon Poachers!
And we, and Vali, thought that we were through with the Rockets for a while too. Dang it!
May Misty learn her lesson, or may she have to be (figuratively) 'put down'?
Then again... Misty may be 'put down' by Vali anyway. How?
Why verbal barbs, jests, and 'put downs' of course!
Please continue when you may, BK. :)
omake:
Ash: Knock knock.
Gary: Who's there?
Ash: Walter.
Gary: Walter who?
Ash: I would like to see Walter Wall ping pong balls!
Staryu & Starmie: *leaping out of the water several times* HYAAA! HYAA! HYAA! HYAA! HYAA!
Ash & Gary: *bows to the readers/audience* The above omake is based on a Capt. kangaroo skit that we just parodied.
omake end.
Suicune saved from Team Rocket Pokémon Poachers!
And we, and Vali, thought that we were through with the Rockets for a while too. Dang it!
May Misty learn her lesson, or may she have to be (figuratively) 'put down'?
Then again... Misty may be 'put down' by Vali anyway. How?
Why verbal barbs, jests, and 'put downs' of course!
Please continue when you may, BK. :)
9/2/2023 c20 Guest
its kinda ironic how ash has more Pokemon than Gary when in canon its the opposite
its kinda ironic how ash has more Pokemon than Gary when in canon its the opposite
9/4/2023 c20 Ktap4321
Ooh. I can’t wait for more information and world building with Commission. Great chapter as always.
Ooh. I can’t wait for more information and world building with Commission. Great chapter as always.
9/2/2023 c20 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing ash collect a new team member and the kids learning something about the world
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing ash collect a new team member and the kids learning something about the world
9/2/2023 c20 ayienne
Ash's status as the Chosen One activating this early with these events pulling him in despite Vali's attempts for protection. Gary gets to go along the ride tho.
I hope Lance's recovery goes successful and them Vali, Lance and Steven still get to catch up and touch bases even with the fast pace chaos lining up in the future. Thank you for the new chapter!
Ash's status as the Chosen One activating this early with these events pulling him in despite Vali's attempts for protection. Gary gets to go along the ride tho.
I hope Lance's recovery goes successful and them Vali, Lance and Steven still get to catch up and touch bases even with the fast pace chaos lining up in the future. Thank you for the new chapter!
9/1/2023 c20 Jostanos
True. With all of the BS that she and the boys have been through lately it is a bout time for Vali to "retire/resign" from being part of lance's Elite Four and become a "Freelancer/ Operative" for Goodshow.
Heavens! Vali is practically already the Head Honcho of the Pokémon League's "ANBU Black Ops".
Please continue when you may, BK.
True. With all of the BS that she and the boys have been through lately it is a bout time for Vali to "retire/resign" from being part of lance's Elite Four and become a "Freelancer/ Operative" for Goodshow.
Heavens! Vali is practically already the Head Honcho of the Pokémon League's "ANBU Black Ops".
Please continue when you may, BK.
8/24/2023 c19 Jostanos
Oh shards. They wanted to help Vali, but ended up getting caught by a Rocket Grunt/scientist.
May either Elrond, Vali, or another ally have heard Ash's mental pleas for help?
Stay tuned to find out!
Oh shards. They wanted to help Vali, but ended up getting caught by a Rocket Grunt/scientist.
May either Elrond, Vali, or another ally have heard Ash's mental pleas for help?
Stay tuned to find out!