for Valkyrie Potter: Falling Ashes9/2/2023 c20 Guest
its kinda ironic how ash has more Pokemon than Gary when in canon its the opposite
its kinda ironic how ash has more Pokemon than Gary when in canon its the opposite
9/4/2023 c20 Ktap4321
Ooh. I can’t wait for more information and world building with Commission. Great chapter as always.
Ooh. I can’t wait for more information and world building with Commission. Great chapter as always.
9/2/2023 c20 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing ash collect a new team member and the kids learning something about the world
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing ash collect a new team member and the kids learning something about the world
9/2/2023 c20 ayienne
Ash's status as the Chosen One activating this early with these events pulling him in despite Vali's attempts for protection. Gary gets to go along the ride tho.
I hope Lance's recovery goes successful and them Vali, Lance and Steven still get to catch up and touch bases even with the fast pace chaos lining up in the future. Thank you for the new chapter!
Ash's status as the Chosen One activating this early with these events pulling him in despite Vali's attempts for protection. Gary gets to go along the ride tho.
I hope Lance's recovery goes successful and them Vali, Lance and Steven still get to catch up and touch bases even with the fast pace chaos lining up in the future. Thank you for the new chapter!
9/1/2023 c20 Jostanos
True. With all of the BS that she and the boys have been through lately it is a bout time for Vali to "retire/resign" from being part of lance's Elite Four and become a "Freelancer/ Operative" for Goodshow.
Heavens! Vali is practically already the Head Honcho of the Pokémon League's "ANBU Black Ops".
Please continue when you may, BK.
True. With all of the BS that she and the boys have been through lately it is a bout time for Vali to "retire/resign" from being part of lance's Elite Four and become a "Freelancer/ Operative" for Goodshow.
Heavens! Vali is practically already the Head Honcho of the Pokémon League's "ANBU Black Ops".
Please continue when you may, BK.
8/24/2023 c19 Jostanos
Oh shards. They wanted to help Vali, but ended up getting caught by a Rocket Grunt/scientist.
May either Elrond, Vali, or another ally have heard Ash's mental pleas for help?
Stay tuned to find out!
Oh shards. They wanted to help Vali, but ended up getting caught by a Rocket Grunt/scientist.
May either Elrond, Vali, or another ally have heard Ash's mental pleas for help?
Stay tuned to find out!
8/20/2023 c19 CalmWinds
so knowing what type of job she has, Ash decides to follow after her anyway... Ugh smh cant wait for the next chapter
so knowing what type of job she has, Ash decides to follow after her anyway... Ugh smh cant wait for the next chapter
8/17/2023 c19 Guest
I know ash and Gary are doing the classic protagonist thing and exploring but really this is getting ridiculous, in their minor defence Vali should have said that they should stay where they were and not look for her
I know ash and Gary are doing the classic protagonist thing and exploring but really this is getting ridiculous, in their minor defence Vali should have said that they should stay where they were and not look for her
8/18/2023 c19 
11Gabriel Herrol
*Groan* When will the boys learn to obey simple commands? its not hard to stay put where its safe and wait for Vali to come back! Gary and Ash are too green to fight against Team Rocket just yet.
11Gabriel Herrol*Groan* When will the boys learn to obey simple commands? its not hard to stay put where its safe and wait for Vali to come back! Gary and Ash are too green to fight against Team Rocket just yet.