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1Dragon Torretto
“ He wished Sirius knew how to obliviate people. They needed to know how the church did it.”…. Perhaps if he remembered good friend Lockhart he’d slap his head and realize he just yells out Obliviate! Obviously there’s more to it, not that I buy Sirius wouldn’t know how, but they know the spell and just need practice.
This is about as annoying several other story inconsistencies like the constant magical oaths Harry does. Which by the way, Harry is dead. He swore by magic never to leave Lexi again. Went to the goblins a continent away without her, and nothing happened.
1Dragon Torretto“ He wished Sirius knew how to obliviate people. They needed to know how the church did it.”…. Perhaps if he remembered good friend Lockhart he’d slap his head and realize he just yells out Obliviate! Obviously there’s more to it, not that I buy Sirius wouldn’t know how, but they know the spell and just need practice.
This is about as annoying several other story inconsistencies like the constant magical oaths Harry does. Which by the way, Harry is dead. He swore by magic never to leave Lexi again. Went to the goblins a continent away without her, and nothing happened.
5/2 c37 DaV1nc136
Great job in this one! Things are progressing smoothly, HarryLex’s relationship is still growing stronger by the minute, and the Council continues to change some traditions that don’t work anymore while keeping some good traditions the same.
And I hope the Order doesn’t succeed in destroying everything Harry, Sirius and Hammond have worked so hard to build.
See you for the next highly-anticipated chapter!
Great job in this one! Things are progressing smoothly, HarryLex’s relationship is still growing stronger by the minute, and the Council continues to change some traditions that don’t work anymore while keeping some good traditions the same.
And I hope the Order doesn’t succeed in destroying everything Harry, Sirius and Hammond have worked so hard to build.
See you for the next highly-anticipated chapter!
5/1 c31 2D72
rocks fall inquisition dies is exactly what I hope happens. They're such a horrible blight on a lovely story.
2D72rocks fall inquisition dies is exactly what I hope happens. They're such a horrible blight on a lovely story.
4/26 c33 Blackdragon3665
The only issue I have is the "goblin arrogance" vibe I keep getting everytime they talk. I'm hoping some event in the future humbles them
The only issue I have is the "goblin arrogance" vibe I keep getting everytime they talk. I'm hoping some event in the future humbles them
4/26 c37 wiewior
Hey there!
I hope you’re doing well. I recently came across your work, "The Magic of Amber", and I just had to reach out. The world you’ve built and the characters within it are so vivid and beautifully unique it really stuck with me.
I’m a commission artist who’s worked with several writers to turn their stories into comics. I’d love the chance to collaborate with you and bring your story to life visually. I already have some ideas for how your characters and key scenes could really shine in comic format.
If this sounds interesting to you, I’d be happy to share more details about how I work, the process, pricing, and how we could create something that stays true to your vision while opening it up to a wider audience.
Feel free to reach out anytime. I’d love to hear what you think!
Discord: wiewior114
Instagram: wiew ior14
email :wiewior482 gmail com
Looking forward to connecting and hopefully working together on something amazing.
Hey there!
I hope you’re doing well. I recently came across your work, "The Magic of Amber", and I just had to reach out. The world you’ve built and the characters within it are so vivid and beautifully unique it really stuck with me.
I’m a commission artist who’s worked with several writers to turn their stories into comics. I’d love the chance to collaborate with you and bring your story to life visually. I already have some ideas for how your characters and key scenes could really shine in comic format.
If this sounds interesting to you, I’d be happy to share more details about how I work, the process, pricing, and how we could create something that stays true to your vision while opening it up to a wider audience.
Feel free to reach out anytime. I’d love to hear what you think!
Discord: wiewior114
Instagram: wiew ior14
email :wiewior482 gmail com
Looking forward to connecting and hopefully working together on something amazing.
4/26 c37 3WhiteElfElder
Did Harry's knife taste blood before he put it away? "Knight" Verne is upset because he was deliberately trying to make a point that Harry did not deserve the appellation, but was soundly showed that Harry does and worse is better than those he himself trained.
3WhiteElfElderDid Harry's knife taste blood before he put it away? "Knight" Verne is upset because he was deliberately trying to make a point that Harry did not deserve the appellation, but was soundly showed that Harry does and worse is better than those he himself trained.
4/9 c36 Haggart
Yay, excellent as always.
I really like your runic explinations - not too wordy, makes sense.
Keep the chapters coming!
Yay, excellent as always.
I really like your runic explinations - not too wordy, makes sense.
Keep the chapters coming!
4/7 c36 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Glad to see that Harry was able to maintain order at the meeting. Looking forward to seeing how your Grindelwald develops. He certainly is an interesting character to be playing with. Also enjoyed the Lex/Harry time. They do make a fun couple. Update soon please! Can't wait to see what's next!
Excellent chapter! Glad to see that Harry was able to maintain order at the meeting. Looking forward to seeing how your Grindelwald develops. He certainly is an interesting character to be playing with. Also enjoyed the Lex/Harry time. They do make a fun couple. Update soon please! Can't wait to see what's next!
4/6 c36 DaV1nc136
Nicely done chapter! It looks like things are progressing smoothly for the inhabitants of Isla Nublar, while things are looking more grim for the Order.
I’m also glad that the Magical Races are forming new plans to move forward and advance into the future while digging up knowledge of the past in order to make that possible, and those closest to the two original founders are asking questions to get a better understanding of this ancient power and how a secret society functioned revolving around it.
See you for when Harry and Lex have their own downtime! Make sure a good portion of it is steamy, and not just becauee they’re spending time on a tropical island!
Nicely done chapter! It looks like things are progressing smoothly for the inhabitants of Isla Nublar, while things are looking more grim for the Order.
I’m also glad that the Magical Races are forming new plans to move forward and advance into the future while digging up knowledge of the past in order to make that possible, and those closest to the two original founders are asking questions to get a better understanding of this ancient power and how a secret society functioned revolving around it.
See you for when Harry and Lex have their own downtime! Make sure a good portion of it is steamy, and not just becauee they’re spending time on a tropical island!
4/6 c36 3WhiteElfElder
The church is going to end up with that group getting decimated when they attack and that will end up not only outing that order, but also magic.
3WhiteElfElderThe church is going to end up with that group getting decimated when they attack and that will end up not only outing that order, but also magic.