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2/23/2008 c10 2Princess of the Fae
Is there a part two?
2/5/2005 c10 13ViciousRejects
this was really really good!

Tezza
2/7/2004 c2 16Fantasmagorie
This is really great. Pure fluff!
10/7/2003 c9 heartwings22
It's me again :)

I am half way through this chapter..and I was thinkin' that instead of using the word rape..do you think it would sound a bit better if it was "so jareth could see him take her against her wishes"...i dunno, sounds more dramatic that way...again, i may be wrong. it is up to the talented writer to decide..
10/7/2003 c8 HeartWings22
The tenses of several words keep going from past to present-the fragments I found were cutting the story up-and the word "humping" I believe should be substituted with something else...perhaps something that doesnt make it sound as if a 12 year old is talking . No offense!. ...I'm just telling it like it is. I love the scene..but, it could flow alot better if those changes were made.
7/20/2003 c10 17Darkmaster2
Very very very very Wonderful story. I will read your next one ^_^.
7/20/2003 c9 Darkmaster2
Very wonderful chapter. Keep it up ^_^
7/15/2003 c8 Darkmaster2
o, very cool. Write more soon. ^_^
7/9/2003 c7 Darkmaster2
Very nice chapter. ^_^ Write more soon.
7/8/2003 c6 Labyris
Very good.Please werite more soon .
7/6/2003 c6 Darkmaster2
Very good story. Write more soon.
7/5/2003 c3 Darkmaster2
I love this story so far. Please write more soon.
7/5/2003 c3 Labyris
Not bad some of your sentesnces look like runons .But other then that it's good.
7/4/2003 c1 Royal Hollow
update please!
7/3/2003 c1 Labyris
Nice fic !Hope you continue.
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