for Hyperdimension Neptunia: Demon Slayer12/8/2022 c1 dleong769
It was fun reading the interaction of the boys, I'll say you did a good job keeping everyone in character! Can't wait for more!
It was fun reading the interaction of the boys, I'll say you did a good job keeping everyone in character! Can't wait for more!
12/1/2022 c2 IsekaiFanBoi
This is an idea that I actually find really interesting; hell I like the execution you've got going on with this idea.
This is an idea that I actually find really interesting; hell I like the execution you've got going on with this idea.
7/10/2022 c1 
1DietGingerAle
As you write more and make an attempt to fix perceived mistakes, your English will only improve. As far as I saw, you only really made grammar mistakes, and naturally some dialogue was a bit clunky. But just keep on putting in the time, and your quality will only improve. What you have already is pretty impressive, so it’s good to see that this is what we’re starting with.
On a slightly unrelated though still somewhat relevant note, Im just excited to see what the hell the boys reactions to video games will be. Fun times ahead, I’m sure
1DietGingerAleAs you write more and make an attempt to fix perceived mistakes, your English will only improve. As far as I saw, you only really made grammar mistakes, and naturally some dialogue was a bit clunky. But just keep on putting in the time, and your quality will only improve. What you have already is pretty impressive, so it’s good to see that this is what we’re starting with.
On a slightly unrelated though still somewhat relevant note, Im just excited to see what the hell the boys reactions to video games will be. Fun times ahead, I’m sure