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9/30 c25 Alan Derk Garcia
After reading Koneko-chan's incomplete thought when she said that she pound him but in reality it would only be her pelvis but as a result she would receive the blow to her cervix

There is still a long way to go, but in the end almost all the women of Rias Gremory's peerage will end up in her bed; also if you could recruit Ingvilt before and also seduce Le Fay; since it is almost certain to assume that Yasaka would end up very tempted by the pheromones

If you could reach a Geass contract with Azazel and he could build you certain replicas of certain weapons from other series
9/28 c25 4Blond Lucifer
Great story as always. What I like about your stories is that your exploration of the power system or power or artifacts that can be explored even futher than the provided theories. That's what fanfics should be, at least action themed ones. You got humor, action, adventure, romance, NSFW etc. a very very good author your are. Hope to see more.
9/27 c8 Blond Lucifer
Goddam this is funny, here Irina is having existential crisis, this what's the point of living. ...there comes the toilet flushing sounds. Like how low can the situation get? Lol.
9/21 c25 1FillyDashie
I’ve been following ‘stacking the deck’ since like chapter 3. But i never actually went to your profile and checked out your other fics.

Now i’ve binged 5 stories and i can’t get enough. You are honestly one of the best author’s i’ve come across. Very rarely will i find an author that has made multiple stories that are this good. I hope you continue to do good work like this for a long time.
9/11 c11 abdeltefhegazy1234
So 11 chapters and gotta say your character sucks more than even Issei and that is something new too many plot holes it was going nice at the first 3 chapters but u just had to toss it all over i usually don't hate on stupid stuff like that call it what you want but even Issei with all the shitty stuff you called in this fanfic gave himself more freedom than your hypocritic mc and not forgetting the mesh up you pulled and literally dumped the whole fanfiction down and yeah it's failed fanfic for me for sure
9/7 c25 1MaxTrueOmnipotent1
Issei your latheric and youve reached a new level of degeneracy if your deviliping that feyish.
9/6 c25 Carlmike94
I feel like I should be surprised that people send death threats over shit like that... but I've been on the internet for too long. Still, that's really pathetic. Like... how do they muster the motivation to do something like that? I'd just stop reading the story.

Still, don't let some sweaty basement dweller get you down. They just shit on everything to make themselves feel better about their own sad, miserable life
9/5 c25 demissedwaifu
Ahh, I miss this so much
9/4 c25 Bella.42
I really think he should take the Boosted Gear from Issei, but maybe not by killing him, as he doesn't want to upset the girls. Can't he just talk to Azazel and get one of those other Twice Criticals he has lying around? Maybe trade for it? It would be much more interesting honestly, also I don't think Rias would care too much, as she has said previously that if one of her peerage members lost what made them special, she wouldn't mind. Thanks for the chapter!
9/1 c25 Aren Gisly
jajaja TFTC!
9/1 c13 bdydvl
her control over gravity is super good to basically use it as telekinesi tho
and so it's a sacred gear after all, does it not have a physical component or is she only using the passive mastery over gravity it give her ?
9/1 c25 AzurePheonix101
Yooo great chapter, i really like Draig in this… homie is so mad right now
8/27 c1 Karticus
i don't really get why people would complain about issei in your fic, you didn't even really change him at all, he is completely in character. the only people that i could see actually being upset about him being cucked are the ones that can relate to him a little to much, same with deku for that matter. but anyways i just recently found your fics and have been binging them and i can honestly say that you're my new favorite author, keep up the great work.
8/26 c25 2Outgund
I would prefer you just kill issei off instead of this, its just sad. I hate issei as a character but still.
8/23 c24 Guest
this is where it got shit shame
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