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6/18 c28 1Kanjut Sakura
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6/15 c28 Guest
I like that the main character relies on himself and actually works at becoming more powerful
5/24 c20 6Waki Paki
Devil thinks God twice with no pain? Wasnt that supposed to be a weakness? Yeah he may not have as strong weaknesses, but not even a twinge? Not even acknowledged?
5/24 c18 Waki Paki
I have to say, the character voices are pretty weak. Too many people using the same terminology, vocabulary, and general speech patterns. Particularly having both Azazel and Serafall say "Consider that nerve touched." aloud to the MC.
4/24 c15 Guest
yup in the sex department he is kinda pathetic lol... not like your systematic shinobi (multiverse) fic or your pokemon fic, he is just whipped by yaguka or whatever she's called... kinda hoped he just kills issei and fucks everyone in rias party thing
4/24 c14 Guest
hmm.. this mc is kinda a pathetic worm in compared to your jordinho pokemon fic, or some others
4/24 c9 Guest
plz kill issei, that would be delightful
4/23 c28 DracoKing30
really love this story can't wait for new chapters
4/4 c28 IsakDemn
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3/31 c1 1Blue Bull Of Infinite Patience
will this get an update next?
3/3 c23 carrotcakeisreallygood
Damn akeno is the damn devil lol
2/22 c28 Guest
Nice love it
2/21 c28 3SamMason666
I really like his developing relationship with rias
2/19 c28 Khavros
nice read. mc clearly has mr steal your girl perk on god mode which is very amusing. bro Ddraig is hilarious. tbh MC is waaay cooler than Issei. Looking forward to more Ravel. Plus i kinda like the corruption angle and wanna see Kaito gettimg his peerage with Yanagi queen and Irina knight? Looking foward to whoever else gets picked.. Kaito definitely chose right with Serafall instead of letting Rias cheat with transferred boosts from Issei.
2/16 c10 Velvety6
Would him and zelretch be besto friendos?
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