for A Tarnished Remnant2/2/2023 c5 Guest
se ve bien
se ve bien
10/9/2022 c4 General Radahn
Nice, hope to see more of this and perhaps the Waterfowl Dance in the future
Nice, hope to see more of this and perhaps the Waterfowl Dance in the future
8/21/2022 c3 Itharax
*Gets PTSD flashbacks to the many, many, many, many, many, many, MANY deaths caused by rolling, getting stuck, and accidental dodging off a certain academic roof.* … So many deaths… so much rage… yet… it is one of the things that unites us together. That… and [hopefully] a love for feeding Torrent like the best boy he is.
Loved the chapter! Can’t wait to see what happens next! Especially with that last line…
Have a great day!
*Gets PTSD flashbacks to the many, many, many, many, many, many, MANY deaths caused by rolling, getting stuck, and accidental dodging off a certain academic roof.* … So many deaths… so much rage… yet… it is one of the things that unites us together. That… and [hopefully] a love for feeding Torrent like the best boy he is.
Loved the chapter! Can’t wait to see what happens next! Especially with that last line…
Have a great day!
88/11/2022 c2 Daniel T. Gualnam
this is quite interesting thing thin but typos are needed to be fix like Nore> Nora.. or finale> final
this is quite interesting thing thin but typos are needed to be fix like Nore> Nora.. or finale> final
7/30/2022 c2 Guest
Me gusto el capítulo
Me gusto el capítulo
7/28/2022 c2 Guest
pretty good for your first story. Well written and dialogue feels natural.
pretty good for your first story. Well written and dialogue feels natural.
7/30/2022 c2 M.A.DMatt6
Interesting concept and good story pace thus far. Only complaint is the chapters are too short but that's just my own opinion.
Interesting concept and good story pace thus far. Only complaint is the chapters are too short but that's just my own opinion.