for FATE: Break Dawn3/5 c12 Tallfy
My bro's cooking very hard this fight with heracles holy shit
I was expecting the 13 chapter soon
My bro's cooking very hard this fight with heracles holy shit
I was expecting the 13 chapter soon
1/30 c12 ZALAMBSAUCE
Feel so bad for Artoria and Archer! His past could possibly break her during this.
I can't imagine her taking that she was King Arthur and was part of how Archer came to be. The difference between Fate Shirou and Archer is that the latter wasn't able to save Saber from her fate or something.
The bond and tension between the two is really great, love how you depict it.
Can't wait for more!
Feel so bad for Artoria and Archer! His past could possibly break her during this.
I can't imagine her taking that she was King Arthur and was part of how Archer came to be. The difference between Fate Shirou and Archer is that the latter wasn't able to save Saber from her fate or something.
The bond and tension between the two is really great, love how you depict it.
Can't wait for more!
1/9 c12 alexgulak2001
I'm not against the Argonauts headcanon at all.
Simply because the Greek myths in Type Moon were initially a mess.
I'm not against the Argonauts headcanon at all.
Simply because the Greek myths in Type Moon were initially a mess.
1/5 c12 Lich
And one more question. why did Atlantis' arrows do damage, but Archer's did not. In the fight with the berserker from the flashbacks it is visible, he tries different approaches until he decides on Caladbolg. Why do Atlantis' arrows and Rider's sword do damage to Hercules?
And one more question. why did Atlantis' arrows do damage, but Archer's did not. In the fight with the berserker from the flashbacks it is visible, he tries different approaches until he decides on Caladbolg. Why do Atlantis' arrows and Rider's sword do damage to Hercules?
1/5 c12 Lich
Heh, Gerk hasn't turned red yet as usual with crazy boost (in the battle with Saber Alter it is clearly visible). If he can get so angry, then everyone will have big problems, also the question of the endless on mana as it was with Saber Alter, he have it?, I don't think that in the case of Hercules they will be able to kill him completely, Saber alter at least had one life. Eh, we need Karna here, Skatach won't be able to wound him with a spear (low rank to pierce god's hand. Only Arthur's phantasm will probably help) Archer will have to supply everyone with weapons.
Maybe we have a demon king here, a nascent beast? Reminds me of Nobunaga (red eyes), only the vision of the moon confuses me, is this the embodied grail like in a fire or something else, or like in Blood moon game? It is unlikely that vampires are involved. So far everything is interesting, although it is very obvious that Angra Manyu will play a big role, I hope there will be a threat greater than him, perhaps an Outer god ... It is also interesting why we have Gerk in a berserker option, and not an avenger. Although this is probably due to the fact that only Hercules himself can force himself to corruption, and external forces do not. I am very glad that you gave us such a gift. So far the story is going along an interesting path. The only thing I would really like is fragments of Archer's memories after his war, how he met Karen and Ciel, how he lived and who he encountered, themselves you see, we saw the 5th war in 3 versions and the novel, and as references in FGO and anime. Also a question, is Prelati also watching the war as usual, or is he, unlike the Fake, dead forever? given the situation, the church will probably pull up forces, everything is too unusual. Also, given the level of forces and the madness of the defiled servants, it seems to me that the city will not be able to provide decent places for battle, so as not to be completely left in ruins. perhaps we will have Buddha here, but this is very unlikely
Sorry for translate
Thank you for your work
Heh, Gerk hasn't turned red yet as usual with crazy boost (in the battle with Saber Alter it is clearly visible). If he can get so angry, then everyone will have big problems, also the question of the endless on mana as it was with Saber Alter, he have it?, I don't think that in the case of Hercules they will be able to kill him completely, Saber alter at least had one life. Eh, we need Karna here, Skatach won't be able to wound him with a spear (low rank to pierce god's hand. Only Arthur's phantasm will probably help) Archer will have to supply everyone with weapons.
Maybe we have a demon king here, a nascent beast? Reminds me of Nobunaga (red eyes), only the vision of the moon confuses me, is this the embodied grail like in a fire or something else, or like in Blood moon game? It is unlikely that vampires are involved. So far everything is interesting, although it is very obvious that Angra Manyu will play a big role, I hope there will be a threat greater than him, perhaps an Outer god ... It is also interesting why we have Gerk in a berserker option, and not an avenger. Although this is probably due to the fact that only Hercules himself can force himself to corruption, and external forces do not. I am very glad that you gave us such a gift. So far the story is going along an interesting path. The only thing I would really like is fragments of Archer's memories after his war, how he met Karen and Ciel, how he lived and who he encountered, themselves you see, we saw the 5th war in 3 versions and the novel, and as references in FGO and anime. Also a question, is Prelati also watching the war as usual, or is he, unlike the Fake, dead forever? given the situation, the church will probably pull up forces, everything is too unusual. Also, given the level of forces and the madness of the defiled servants, it seems to me that the city will not be able to provide decent places for battle, so as not to be completely left in ruins. perhaps we will have Buddha here, but this is very unlikely
Sorry for translate
Thank you for your work
12/30/2024 c12 Arubion
Ah, such a heartwarming father and daughter interaction. Those two get along so well~
Jokes aside, their conversation, laced with venom mostly on Caren's side, was very insightful.
Kirei not only managed to surprise The King, but also me when it became clear that his Clairvoyance wasn't foolproof.
His outrage when Caren called him a fake gave me a good chuckle.
The fight between Heracles and Berserker and Rider was amazing. Heracles was just as strong and overwhelming as I imagined him to be in this fight. Unfortunately, they weren't able to Overcome The Myth. Maybe with three additional servants this could happen or perhaps Archer is going to do something potentially reckless? Either way, can't wait to find out!
Looks like Rin is finally able to take a breather. She's really gonna need it when she hears Heracles is present.
And finally, the long awaited Archer and Illya interaction. While short, like in the Heavens Feel movie, he was able to speak to her. Let's hope they get to talk more after this.
Great chapter, and a Happy New Year!
Ah, such a heartwarming father and daughter interaction. Those two get along so well~
Jokes aside, their conversation, laced with venom mostly on Caren's side, was very insightful.
Kirei not only managed to surprise The King, but also me when it became clear that his Clairvoyance wasn't foolproof.
His outrage when Caren called him a fake gave me a good chuckle.
The fight between Heracles and Berserker and Rider was amazing. Heracles was just as strong and overwhelming as I imagined him to be in this fight. Unfortunately, they weren't able to Overcome The Myth. Maybe with three additional servants this could happen or perhaps Archer is going to do something potentially reckless? Either way, can't wait to find out!
Looks like Rin is finally able to take a breather. She's really gonna need it when she hears Heracles is present.
And finally, the long awaited Archer and Illya interaction. While short, like in the Heavens Feel movie, he was able to speak to her. Let's hope they get to talk more after this.
Great chapter, and a Happy New Year!
12/29/2024 c11 Slither21
Im genuinely frustrated that this narrative turn has killed my motivation to read this fic. I couldnt find myself enjoying any of this chapter.
It really feels like youre throwing shit at the wall to try to fulfill the impossible grail war theme as much as you can and you keep saying “theres a reason” and “you’ll see” but the thing is these twists are so out of left field that they just bring me out of my enjoyment of the fic.
Im genuinely frustrated that this narrative turn has killed my motivation to read this fic. I couldnt find myself enjoying any of this chapter.
It really feels like youre throwing shit at the wall to try to fulfill the impossible grail war theme as much as you can and you keep saying “theres a reason” and “you’ll see” but the thing is these twists are so out of left field that they just bring me out of my enjoyment of the fic.
12/29/2024 c10 Slither21
Ive been binging this and been loving it so far, but man this part with gil is going around in circles. Also saying this as someone who’s a fan of gil, theres a reason why he almost never uses his omniscient ability. Because it makes the story boring and the character annoying alongside feeling like an info dump.
Well that sucks. Youve spent the last 8 chapters building up aliances just to make then fight for what reason? This really reeks of you using gilgamesh as a forceful plot device.
Gilgamesh repeating the same line 3 times doesnt give of the all knowing and smug vibe but rather a time to piss off the readers vibe.
You shouldve just made this a faction grail war from the start instead of forcing it mid way
If this was your plan all along, you shouldve made it less of a random turn. There are plot twists and then there is flipping the plot over for no reason.
Ive been binging this and been loving it so far, but man this part with gil is going around in circles. Also saying this as someone who’s a fan of gil, theres a reason why he almost never uses his omniscient ability. Because it makes the story boring and the character annoying alongside feeling like an info dump.
Well that sucks. Youve spent the last 8 chapters building up aliances just to make then fight for what reason? This really reeks of you using gilgamesh as a forceful plot device.
Gilgamesh repeating the same line 3 times doesnt give of the all knowing and smug vibe but rather a time to piss off the readers vibe.
You shouldve just made this a faction grail war from the start instead of forcing it mid way
If this was your plan all along, you shouldve made it less of a random turn. There are plot twists and then there is flipping the plot over for no reason.
12/27/2024 c12 Guest
The only misspelling I noticed was you pluralizing rubble as "rubbles" when it should remain as "rubble". I.E. "a pile of rubble" or "lots of rubble" or "the church was turned to rubble"
The only misspelling I noticed was you pluralizing rubble as "rubbles" when it should remain as "rubble". I.E. "a pile of rubble" or "lots of rubble" or "the church was turned to rubble"
12/27/2024 c12 Yog-sothsoth
Shinji: Why am I here…? Just to suffer…?
Me: Yes.
Can I just say that I really love your Gil? He is one of my favourite characters, and I believe you have done him justice. It was a joy to read.
The last scene with Illya, on the other hand... wow. There wasn't a single joyous letter in the whole sequence. It seems like you sacrificed it to encrypt "Summon Rain" spell in your text.
Well done. I loved it. These were some real high quality feels.
Thank you for the chapter. I enjoyed it a lot. I hope the fact that it and the next were supposed to be one chapter means that you already wrote huge part of the next, meaning the it will be out soon.
There is no cope here, only pure logic. Trust me.
Shinji: Why am I here…? Just to suffer…?
Me: Yes.
Can I just say that I really love your Gil? He is one of my favourite characters, and I believe you have done him justice. It was a joy to read.
The last scene with Illya, on the other hand... wow. There wasn't a single joyous letter in the whole sequence. It seems like you sacrificed it to encrypt "Summon Rain" spell in your text.
Well done. I loved it. These were some real high quality feels.
Thank you for the chapter. I enjoyed it a lot. I hope the fact that it and the next were supposed to be one chapter means that you already wrote huge part of the next, meaning the it will be out soon.
There is no cope here, only pure logic. Trust me.
12/27/2024 c12 codywhite162
This chapter was incredible and I am very excited to see what will transpire in the next! Excellent work :)
This chapter was incredible and I am very excited to see what will transpire in the next! Excellent work :)
12/27/2024 c12 
2Indra the God
Goat chapter as always man! Archer coming in clutch to save her sister is a goat moment and Rider looking like a proud bro!
2Indra the GodGoat chapter as always man! Archer coming in clutch to save her sister is a goat moment and Rider looking like a proud bro!