for Hidden Lust Village12/16/2024 c19 terrancelaw891
Definitely should continue only bad thing the chapters were too short , one session shouldn’t compromise a entire chapter
Definitely should continue only bad thing the chapters were too short , one session shouldn’t compromise a entire chapter
7/23/2024 c20 
1Darkdoom III
First of: Update sooner you lazy ass ;). By this point I’m pretty sure the nara clan has a long lost relative in you.
Joke aside, please update. I have to say that I like the combination of blow- and boobjob.
As for a new partner I would desperately want you too use Hinata already. Maybe in a threesome with hanabi.
I could imagine Hinata being able to see and smell what naruto and tsunade were doing behind her. Maybe even a short activation of her eyes or a simple loss of balance were she catches a glimpse. Which no doubt would shatter her.
She would probably try and find comfort in her sisters arms, who would start to feel incredibly guilty as the one who started it all.
To the point where hanabi would set up hinata to tempt naruto to ravage her. Being no longer able to hold his horny ass back. But Naruto obviously continues to get his release elsewhere. Which would make Hinata even more distraught. Fearing that she may loose him. Feeling guilty and pent up hanabi comes up with a different plan. First she questions how hinata feels for the „other women“ in his life, to see if Hinata harbors any hatred for her if she learns about hanabis relation with her husband. Then after confirming that her sister doesn’t despise those that seek love in her husbands arms, hanabi grabs her by the wrist and drags her to narutos bedroom. Pushing hinata onto naruto, simply tears of all their clothing with a chakra scalpel then sitting on his face to silence any questions. Hinata would be seriously shocked but when faced with Narutos massive manhood she wouldn’t be able to hold herself back. Sucking and titfucking it too please her husband and get his attention back from her sister.
Something that would have some success. But that isn’t enough for her. She is about to loose her husband and has to fight for him. There is no other choice but to impale herself on his member. Taking her virginity and doing everything that she can to reassert her dominance. She would have to go further beyond to see please her husband that came already twice inside her. So she crosses a line that few people would. Hanabi that has been enjoying Narutos tongue suddenly gets brought back to reality when her sisters fingers join narutos tongue inside her while and protest is silenced by kiss after kiss from her big sister.
Has she gazes her sisters lust filled crazy body it brings back some of her insecurities. Especially in the chest area. She wouldn’t be able to give that type of blow and titjob. She doesn’t look as aesthetically pleasing as her sister. But she doesn’t want to loose what she has with naruto. So she clashes with her sister in a heated fight for the man between their legs. Passionate kisses, moaning, cries of pleasure that fill the air as the two bring each other to climax on top of naruto over and over again. Draining him completely while they continue their battle. Until they collapse. Hinatas uterus walls would have expanded quite a bit to keep Narutos seed within. Only now would she realize that it wasn’t a safe day.
As they lie in bed together hinata to his right, hanabi to his left, he would ask what the hell was going on, which Hinata would simply say, „I know of your escapades, and I forgive you for it. I should have taken my duty as a wife more seriously.“ he would obviously try to apologize but she would simply kiss him and say. „Shut it. I am sleepy now, or I’ll ask Nee-Chan to sit on your face again.“ Hanabi would chime in „don’t threaten him with a good time“ which would make them burst into a hearty laugh, snuggle into each other and drift off to sleep.
Obviously naruto would tell hinata about everything/everyone he has been with confessing everything, promising to be better and cut them off. But Hinata would have realized that there are just too many people that he would have to avoid, and any kind of this leaking to the public would hurt his chance to be hokage and harm the Hyuugas prestige. Which would sour her standing in the family even more. So Instead she wants a meeting at narutos old place and lets naruto hand out the invitations. The girls would come, hoping for some sexy one on one time, but be shocked when Hinata opens the door. Flustered and embarrassed the room would fill with more and more kunoichi. Naruto would even Hiraishin mei Terumi over for the talk. They all sit and await the angry looking Hyuuga they try to avoid eye contact and just wait for whatever yelling and screaming is to come. After all they knew that he was married and none of them had the decency to tell her, many of them trusted allies and friends. People she sacrificed her life for when fighting pain.
Hanabi would break first trying to apologize her ass off.
Which would quickly devolve into all of them following suit to get out of the uncomfortable environment.
Hinata would raise a hand to silence them. Ordering them to answer a simple question. „Do you love my husband?“ something that would give many people pause. While few would know the answer to that deep inside already. Tsunade, Samui, Hanabi and Mei would only be able to answer yes, expecting to be greeted by a gentle fist to the face. While the others are still reevaluating their relationships, Hinata drops the bomb that she allows her husband a harem, as long as she stays the head wife. Those that can’t accept that should leave and before she even finishes that sentence they would accept. Then she would turn to those that are unsure of their feelings, i.e. Temari, Ino, and Sakura.
„Once you figure out your feelings you can come to me and ask for a spot in my husbands harem.“ with that she would leave with the yes-group to inform her husband of the decision. Which would take place in their bedroom, with many a cumload being shared by Narutos wives. Just as the wives will be shared with the clones.
Now. If you don’t update, my idea is going to be my head canon. So until you do update take care of yourself and please don’t take too long.
1Darkdoom IIIFirst of: Update sooner you lazy ass ;). By this point I’m pretty sure the nara clan has a long lost relative in you.
Joke aside, please update. I have to say that I like the combination of blow- and boobjob.
As for a new partner I would desperately want you too use Hinata already. Maybe in a threesome with hanabi.
I could imagine Hinata being able to see and smell what naruto and tsunade were doing behind her. Maybe even a short activation of her eyes or a simple loss of balance were she catches a glimpse. Which no doubt would shatter her.
She would probably try and find comfort in her sisters arms, who would start to feel incredibly guilty as the one who started it all.
To the point where hanabi would set up hinata to tempt naruto to ravage her. Being no longer able to hold his horny ass back. But Naruto obviously continues to get his release elsewhere. Which would make Hinata even more distraught. Fearing that she may loose him. Feeling guilty and pent up hanabi comes up with a different plan. First she questions how hinata feels for the „other women“ in his life, to see if Hinata harbors any hatred for her if she learns about hanabis relation with her husband. Then after confirming that her sister doesn’t despise those that seek love in her husbands arms, hanabi grabs her by the wrist and drags her to narutos bedroom. Pushing hinata onto naruto, simply tears of all their clothing with a chakra scalpel then sitting on his face to silence any questions. Hinata would be seriously shocked but when faced with Narutos massive manhood she wouldn’t be able to hold herself back. Sucking and titfucking it too please her husband and get his attention back from her sister.
Something that would have some success. But that isn’t enough for her. She is about to loose her husband and has to fight for him. There is no other choice but to impale herself on his member. Taking her virginity and doing everything that she can to reassert her dominance. She would have to go further beyond to see please her husband that came already twice inside her. So she crosses a line that few people would. Hanabi that has been enjoying Narutos tongue suddenly gets brought back to reality when her sisters fingers join narutos tongue inside her while and protest is silenced by kiss after kiss from her big sister.
Has she gazes her sisters lust filled crazy body it brings back some of her insecurities. Especially in the chest area. She wouldn’t be able to give that type of blow and titjob. She doesn’t look as aesthetically pleasing as her sister. But she doesn’t want to loose what she has with naruto. So she clashes with her sister in a heated fight for the man between their legs. Passionate kisses, moaning, cries of pleasure that fill the air as the two bring each other to climax on top of naruto over and over again. Draining him completely while they continue their battle. Until they collapse. Hinatas uterus walls would have expanded quite a bit to keep Narutos seed within. Only now would she realize that it wasn’t a safe day.
As they lie in bed together hinata to his right, hanabi to his left, he would ask what the hell was going on, which Hinata would simply say, „I know of your escapades, and I forgive you for it. I should have taken my duty as a wife more seriously.“ he would obviously try to apologize but she would simply kiss him and say. „Shut it. I am sleepy now, or I’ll ask Nee-Chan to sit on your face again.“ Hanabi would chime in „don’t threaten him with a good time“ which would make them burst into a hearty laugh, snuggle into each other and drift off to sleep.
Obviously naruto would tell hinata about everything/everyone he has been with confessing everything, promising to be better and cut them off. But Hinata would have realized that there are just too many people that he would have to avoid, and any kind of this leaking to the public would hurt his chance to be hokage and harm the Hyuugas prestige. Which would sour her standing in the family even more. So Instead she wants a meeting at narutos old place and lets naruto hand out the invitations. The girls would come, hoping for some sexy one on one time, but be shocked when Hinata opens the door. Flustered and embarrassed the room would fill with more and more kunoichi. Naruto would even Hiraishin mei Terumi over for the talk. They all sit and await the angry looking Hyuuga they try to avoid eye contact and just wait for whatever yelling and screaming is to come. After all they knew that he was married and none of them had the decency to tell her, many of them trusted allies and friends. People she sacrificed her life for when fighting pain.
Hanabi would break first trying to apologize her ass off.
Which would quickly devolve into all of them following suit to get out of the uncomfortable environment.
Hinata would raise a hand to silence them. Ordering them to answer a simple question. „Do you love my husband?“ something that would give many people pause. While few would know the answer to that deep inside already. Tsunade, Samui, Hanabi and Mei would only be able to answer yes, expecting to be greeted by a gentle fist to the face. While the others are still reevaluating their relationships, Hinata drops the bomb that she allows her husband a harem, as long as she stays the head wife. Those that can’t accept that should leave and before she even finishes that sentence they would accept. Then she would turn to those that are unsure of their feelings, i.e. Temari, Ino, and Sakura.
„Once you figure out your feelings you can come to me and ask for a spot in my husbands harem.“ with that she would leave with the yes-group to inform her husband of the decision. Which would take place in their bedroom, with many a cumload being shared by Narutos wives. Just as the wives will be shared with the clones.
Now. If you don’t update, my idea is going to be my head canon. So until you do update take care of yourself and please don’t take too long.
7/11/2024 c1 philpotseth7
this story had potential but you fucked it up by not having hinata and Naruto fuck and your basically pushing away all other male characters like bro i know this s for horney fucks but t least show something like ino falling out of ove with sia because your just putting each of the females as whores who worship Naruto's cock and have no love for there partners.
this story had potential but you fucked it up by not having hinata and Naruto fuck and your basically pushing away all other male characters like bro i know this s for horney fucks but t least show something like ino falling out of ove with sia because your just putting each of the females as whores who worship Naruto's cock and have no love for there partners.
6/12/2024 c20 1Nithi velu
Good chapter. Excited for next one.
I do have one suggestion. Since Naruto is a Shinobi he needs to do regular missions maybe even solo missions. So make a chapter where he would go on a solo trip to the Waves where he could meet Tsunami. I believe it would be a different choice since she could be the only civilian among other females. If it happens my personal opinion is that they have fun together directly to satisfy Tsunami's needs rather than going around.
1Nithi veluGood chapter. Excited for next one.
I do have one suggestion. Since Naruto is a Shinobi he needs to do regular missions maybe even solo missions. So make a chapter where he would go on a solo trip to the Waves where he could meet Tsunami. I believe it would be a different choice since she could be the only civilian among other females. If it happens my personal opinion is that they have fun together directly to satisfy Tsunami's needs rather than going around.
5/30/2024 c20 15Naruhina 123
About story concept is good with Tsunade Samui and Temqri
Can you being Sadara Uchiha in Naruto Harem as since Sakura and Sasuke getting married in future (even Sakura sex with Naruto). as Time travel concept
Or second please bring Hinata Mother in law
Oh and other can you bring Shiseru in Naruto Harem if possible. She is well a police officer type. How Shiseru will seduce a new blonde hero.
Yugao also best choice as she is Kunoichi Cope
15Naruhina 123About story concept is good with Tsunade Samui and Temqri
Can you being Sadara Uchiha in Naruto Harem as since Sakura and Sasuke getting married in future (even Sakura sex with Naruto). as Time travel concept
Or second please bring Hinata Mother in law
Oh and other can you bring Shiseru in Naruto Harem if possible. She is well a police officer type. How Shiseru will seduce a new blonde hero.
Yugao also best choice as she is Kunoichi Cope
5/24/2024 c20 codywhite162
This story continues to be incredible and I cannot wait to read more. Excellent work and as for types of sex scenes perhaps more of Naruto making love to the girls while they kiss and exclaim how much they love doing activities together. I like reading scenes like that.
This story continues to be incredible and I cannot wait to read more. Excellent work and as for types of sex scenes perhaps more of Naruto making love to the girls while they kiss and exclaim how much they love doing activities together. I like reading scenes like that.
3/13/2024 c19 Guest
would love some more hanabi centred stuff
would love some more hanabi centred stuff
3/7/2024 c19 codywhite162
I quite enjoy reading the story and this chapter. I also like reading foreplay with the girls before the actual event starts. Regarding chapter twenty I wouldn't mind reading a longer chapter.
I quite enjoy reading the story and this chapter. I also like reading foreplay with the girls before the actual event starts. Regarding chapter twenty I wouldn't mind reading a longer chapter.
3/5/2024 c12 LegendaryMob
i wish we could get some penetration scene the isn't mei. 5-6 chapter and it's pretty much all about her. she isn't even a milf as she's not a mother. while genuine milf like temari and Sakura is left with basic scenes.
i wish we could get some penetration scene the isn't mei. 5-6 chapter and it's pretty much all about her. she isn't even a milf as she's not a mother. while genuine milf like temari and Sakura is left with basic scenes.