for Harry's Private Army3/23 c20 Joe
Hi
Absolutely amazing just wanted to point out that prefects can't take points only teachers can as seen on order of the Phoenix
Joe
Hi
Absolutely amazing just wanted to point out that prefects can't take points only teachers can as seen on order of the Phoenix
Joe
3/14 c1 frisbeeg70
"Mrs. Weasley and her obsessive need to make kids work. ... That and there was a house elf for this house."
I just love that line. It always gets me when people claim they are writing an independent Harry and he just meekly goes along with the stupid cleaning thing.
It's like people who complain Hermione was right that they couldn't go against Dumbledore and call Harry over the summer. They're all teenagers. Going around or ignoring authority is what they do.
"Mrs. Weasley and her obsessive need to make kids work. ... That and there was a house elf for this house."
I just love that line. It always gets me when people claim they are writing an independent Harry and he just meekly goes along with the stupid cleaning thing.
It's like people who complain Hermione was right that they couldn't go against Dumbledore and call Harry over the summer. They're all teenagers. Going around or ignoring authority is what they do.
3/10 c12 Molenir
I really how you make Hermione this unreasonable child. I get this is fanfic, and you can make the characters anyway you like, but its so very much out of her normal character.
I really how you make Hermione this unreasonable child. I get this is fanfic, and you can make the characters anyway you like, but its so very much out of her normal character.
1/14 c27 
4Rachelme177
um, didn't Harry show his memory of the resurrection at his trial? It's why Lucius was arrested, so I'm pretty sure Amelia isn't going to buy that cover story and will most definitely be asking about Tom.
4Rachelme177um, didn't Harry show his memory of the resurrection at his trial? It's why Lucius was arrested, so I'm pretty sure Amelia isn't going to buy that cover story and will most definitely be asking about Tom.
1/12 c27 LAB1
What a great story! Love the Doxies! Fred and George were instrumental in Harry's success! They are my favorite characters!
What a great story! Love the Doxies! Fred and George were instrumental in Harry's success! They are my favorite characters!
12/1/2024 c27 Duchess67
I enjoyed this again, it is definitely worth rereading!
I enjoyed this again, it is definitely worth rereading!
11/10/2024 c11 Lamorak Korving
SERIOUSLY? YOU EXPECT ME TO BELIEVE DUMBLEDORE'S MIND IS FINE? I digress. Dumbledore
once supported the same Dark Wizard views as Grindelwald. Despite his defeat of his old friend,
I doubt that Dumbledore is a light lord. Grey, possibly, but NOT light.
SERIOUSLY? YOU EXPECT ME TO BELIEVE DUMBLEDORE'S MIND IS FINE? I digress. Dumbledore
once supported the same Dark Wizard views as Grindelwald. Despite his defeat of his old friend,
I doubt that Dumbledore is a light lord. Grey, possibly, but NOT light.
11/10/2024 c10 Lamorak Korving
Sirius Black is quite right to remind Molly Weasley that 12 Grimmauld Place is HIS home, NOT
hers. The Burrow is Molly's home, not Grimmauld Place. Yes, he allows Albus to use it as the
Headquarters for the Order of the Phoenix, but Molly acts as if she OWNS it. She does not.
Sirius Black is quite right to remind Molly Weasley that 12 Grimmauld Place is HIS home, NOT
hers. The Burrow is Molly's home, not Grimmauld Place. Yes, he allows Albus to use it as the
Headquarters for the Order of the Phoenix, but Molly acts as if she OWNS it. She does not.
11/10/2024 c9 Lamorak Korving
Hmm. First Cornelius Fudge, then Delores Umbridge, and now Lucius Malfoy. Score currently reads:
Minister of Magic:0. Delores Jane Umbridge:0. Lucius Malfoy, Death Eater:0. Harry Potter and his
Private Doxy Army: 3. I wonder who will be next?
Hmm. First Cornelius Fudge, then Delores Umbridge, and now Lucius Malfoy. Score currently reads:
Minister of Magic:0. Delores Jane Umbridge:0. Lucius Malfoy, Death Eater:0. Harry Potter and his
Private Doxy Army: 3. I wonder who will be next?
11/10/2024 c8 Nyx Nightmare
I was right! Fudge and Umbridge were the 1st victims (thank Merlin!) of Harry's private army
of doxies.
I was right! Fudge and Umbridge were the 1st victims (thank Merlin!) of Harry's private army
of doxies.
11/10/2024 c7 Lamorak Korving
Courtroom Ten, where criminals are charged? Hmm. I think I've just guessed who the 1st victim of
Harry's Private Army will be.
Courtroom Ten, where criminals are charged? Hmm. I think I've just guessed who the 1st victim of
Harry's Private Army will be.