for Cinderella and Prince Charming (Well, Kind of, Jaune's Doing his Best)1/13 c68 delta4873
I've read probably a thousand RWBY fanfics, thousands of fanfics in general, and a few hundred actual books. This story was the best one I've ever read. I cried, I laughed, I went though every emotion while reading this story.
It truly was something special, thank you so much writing it!
I've read probably a thousand RWBY fanfics, thousands of fanfics in general, and a few hundred actual books. This story was the best one I've ever read. I cried, I laughed, I went though every emotion while reading this story.
It truly was something special, thank you so much writing it!
1/3 c6 
5FellStroke
I was kind of hoping Jaune wouldn't be so quick to forgive. Imagine Cinder having to work to gain his trust. Meanwhile, Juane is just aching to give it but errs on the side of caution everytime. In the future chapters I'm hoping to see it.
The story is well written, however, even though you tend to use the phrase, "It's everything he could do just to-".
5FellStrokeI was kind of hoping Jaune wouldn't be so quick to forgive. Imagine Cinder having to work to gain his trust. Meanwhile, Juane is just aching to give it but errs on the side of caution everytime. In the future chapters I'm hoping to see it.
The story is well written, however, even though you tend to use the phrase, "It's everything he could do just to-".
12/24/2024 c68 noble6117
Well...I gotta say, you might be the second or third person I've read from who made RWBY fanfic, and you are either 1st or 2nd place for making wonderful RWBY stories...this one, it's made me happy, sad, worried, and very satisfied, at first I thought I'd be happy and a bit unsatisfied because Ironwood, Salem, ozma, and some others died...but in the end? I'm very happy you became a Fanfic author, love the story, and I do hope you continue to make more stories...as for neo and Roman? Ahhh I do gotta say that they are my favs, as well as several other characters, considering I just recently gotten into RWBY fanfic, even without watching the show, I'm happy I decided to get into RWBY fanfic. Thanks for being a amazing author who made amazing RWBY stories.
Well...I gotta say, you might be the second or third person I've read from who made RWBY fanfic, and you are either 1st or 2nd place for making wonderful RWBY stories...this one, it's made me happy, sad, worried, and very satisfied, at first I thought I'd be happy and a bit unsatisfied because Ironwood, Salem, ozma, and some others died...but in the end? I'm very happy you became a Fanfic author, love the story, and I do hope you continue to make more stories...as for neo and Roman? Ahhh I do gotta say that they are my favs, as well as several other characters, considering I just recently gotten into RWBY fanfic, even without watching the show, I'm happy I decided to get into RWBY fanfic. Thanks for being a amazing author who made amazing RWBY stories.
6/19/2024 c68 1l0rd khaos
This is a fantastic Fic and truly does deserve every word of praise it receives
I absolutely loved it
Great work :)
1l0rd khaosThis is a fantastic Fic and truly does deserve every word of praise it receives
I absolutely loved it
Great work :)
4/22/2024 c4 Valanz-Del'gronto-Espada-neg'1
This… is the epitome of a dick move author… but… well done. You did it well. You are clearly skilled in the literary arts…
This… is the epitome of a dick move author… but… well done. You did it well. You are clearly skilled in the literary arts…
2/25/2024 c15 ThyDevoutBeliever
So far I am completely on Ironwood's side and am a bit baffled that people like Goodwitch who were close allies of Ozpin (killed by Cinder btw) would let Cinder take Jaune to their greatest enemy let alone support her at all after the shit she pulled.
So far I am completely on Ironwood's side and am a bit baffled that people like Goodwitch who were close allies of Ozpin (killed by Cinder btw) would let Cinder take Jaune to their greatest enemy let alone support her at all after the shit she pulled.
2/21/2024 c68 Kai Dranzer
Do the post-Volume 9 Knightfall fic. Thats the one we need. More Knightfall content.
Do the post-Volume 9 Knightfall fic. Thats the one we need. More Knightfall content.
2/17/2024 c1 Guest
Ugh... cringe.
Ugh... cringe.
2/5/2024 c68 3odstrules21
Man, it's been one hell of a run! Glad I was able to experience it entirely. Whatever you do next is going to be just as good, so let's see where it leads hmm?
3odstrules21Man, it's been one hell of a run! Glad I was able to experience it entirely. Whatever you do next is going to be just as good, so let's see where it leads hmm?
2/3/2024 c68 CommanderBilliam
Probably one of my favorite RWBY romance fics ever. The volume 9 fic idea's sound really interesting, especially the Willow one.
Probably one of my favorite RWBY romance fics ever. The volume 9 fic idea's sound really interesting, especially the Willow one.