for Gravity8/24 c4 colbylast
this is why the orphan trope is king in naruto self inserts. it allows you to skip the whole, my family doesnt approve of letting me go to the academy for becoming a murderer. none of this pre academy stuff is fun to read about.
and no its not even being original. we dont like it because its so incredibly predictable.
and all so you can have a bunch of shallow characters thatll almost entirely get written out in the next few chapters.
and if they dont, theyll get used for awkward subplots like the family getting held hostage to use against the protagonist.
this is why the orphan trope is king in naruto self inserts. it allows you to skip the whole, my family doesnt approve of letting me go to the academy for becoming a murderer. none of this pre academy stuff is fun to read about.
and no its not even being original. we dont like it because its so incredibly predictable.
and all so you can have a bunch of shallow characters thatll almost entirely get written out in the next few chapters.
and if they dont, theyll get used for awkward subplots like the family getting held hostage to use against the protagonist.
6/25 c12 SDeep2026
Oooh! Pretty interesting stuff, and it seems that the Uchiha massacre just may be avoided!
Oooh! Pretty interesting stuff, and it seems that the Uchiha massacre just may be avoided!
6/25 c4 SDeep2026
Oooh! That must hurt a lot, for everyone in the family..
I hope they will manage to fix their relationships that will inevitably fracture a bit atleast..
Oooh! That must hurt a lot, for everyone in the family..
I hope they will manage to fix their relationships that will inevitably fracture a bit atleast..
4/24 c19 bluestickynote
BRO BRO BROOOOOOOOO THIS IS SO COOOOOL! I really loved the fight scene between Kinjo and the chunin! Also the final scene where they discuss Kinjo's promotion is also a very interesting twist. I love how far Kinjo has come since he started. He is set on his ideals and has a logical mind. He makes good decisions as opposed to emottional ones that would surely prove to be bad in a shinobi's line of work. keep up the great work! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Also, I was wondering...is this fic updating? or has it been abandoned?
BRO BRO BROOOOOOOOO THIS IS SO COOOOOL! I really loved the fight scene between Kinjo and the chunin! Also the final scene where they discuss Kinjo's promotion is also a very interesting twist. I love how far Kinjo has come since he started. He is set on his ideals and has a logical mind. He makes good decisions as opposed to emottional ones that would surely prove to be bad in a shinobi's line of work. keep up the great work! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Also, I was wondering...is this fic updating? or has it been abandoned?
11/22/2023 c19 TehStorm
Nice chapter!
Excited to see how strong the MC will get on the future...Those Crazy Fire jutsus from his sensei, the wind style from Danzo (If he doesn't get those crazy vacum style jutsus i will be sad), the Taijutsu and the 8 gates from Gai PLUS Fuinjutsu and his own original jutsus and combos?...Now THAT'S a combination that i could see MC using to beat even Itachi eventually, even with the latter being trained by Hiruzen...
Anyways, curious about the pairing though. Will it be a canon character?
Nice chapter!
Excited to see how strong the MC will get on the future...Those Crazy Fire jutsus from his sensei, the wind style from Danzo (If he doesn't get those crazy vacum style jutsus i will be sad), the Taijutsu and the 8 gates from Gai PLUS Fuinjutsu and his own original jutsus and combos?...Now THAT'S a combination that i could see MC using to beat even Itachi eventually, even with the latter being trained by Hiruzen...
Anyways, curious about the pairing though. Will it be a canon character?
10/11/2023 c10 Red's Melancholy
Yeah this fell off so quick. Its like each chapter now has the mc acting more reckless just to force himself into situations to meet with important characters and everything goes his way. It's become a shifty fix it fic with the same strungout characters and the mc is some amazing genius who can plan all around the entire shinobi world at the age of 8 and no one bats an eye.
Yeah this fell off so quick. Its like each chapter now has the mc acting more reckless just to force himself into situations to meet with important characters and everything goes his way. It's become a shifty fix it fic with the same strungout characters and the mc is some amazing genius who can plan all around the entire shinobi world at the age of 8 and no one bats an eye.
10/11/2023 c9 Red's Melancholy
This was the dumbest shit I've read... After two years he can magically disguise himself so well that he can walk up to the hyuugas and no one can see thru his mask and his transformation jutsu is good enough to hide him from the guards. Way to seriously drop the ball after all the good you did before.
This was the dumbest shit I've read... After two years he can magically disguise himself so well that he can walk up to the hyuugas and no one can see thru his mask and his transformation jutsu is good enough to hide him from the guards. Way to seriously drop the ball after all the good you did before.