for Reading of: An Extraordinary Sage's Not-So-Ordinary Adventure12/12 c8 SaltierThanSea
I usually dont write comments but started a little while ago. I revisited both sage fanfictions and must say they are one of the best stories i have read. Pls Continue, especially the reading series for the 8th Chapter of the original, especially the reaction for the first scene of the past. their reactions are gonna be so fire. Thx m8 for these stories
I usually dont write comments but started a little while ago. I revisited both sage fanfictions and must say they are one of the best stories i have read. Pls Continue, especially the reading series for the 8th Chapter of the original, especially the reaction for the first scene of the past. their reactions are gonna be so fire. Thx m8 for these stories
12/1 c8 Aphroi
when does the reading to chapter 8 come out?
when does the reading to chapter 8 come out?
11/19 c2 Killerpickle
This is very interesting but the style of it just makes it really unreadable - I think the problem stems from how the 'book' changes from first to second person but as well the more disruptive thing how the 'book' sort talks back to them over actually telling a story if you get what I mean.
I wish I could continue reading this as it does look interesting but it is just to disjointed for me, I would recommend going back and either having Naruto actually talking to the gang either through an intermediary of some kind or just in person.
That or changing the responses in the 'book' to a direct story and not have it just answer questions when they ask/saying something their questioning
This is very interesting but the style of it just makes it really unreadable - I think the problem stems from how the 'book' changes from first to second person but as well the more disruptive thing how the 'book' sort talks back to them over actually telling a story if you get what I mean.
I wish I could continue reading this as it does look interesting but it is just to disjointed for me, I would recommend going back and either having Naruto actually talking to the gang either through an intermediary of some kind or just in person.
That or changing the responses in the 'book' to a direct story and not have it just answer questions when they ask/saying something their questioning
11/15 c8 Colm Lambe
Well can't wait till the next chapter. It would be a twist if it turns out everything that happened in the book happening in their dimension and they all except naruto and zetsu remember any of this because everyone had to have their memories eraser by the actual god of that universe for the prophecy of 7 for the percy jackson story to happen. That includes what was done to gave and turn him back to human from being a toad and erasing his memories of the interactions with naruto.
Well can't wait till the next chapter. It would be a twist if it turns out everything that happened in the book happening in their dimension and they all except naruto and zetsu remember any of this because everyone had to have their memories eraser by the actual god of that universe for the prophecy of 7 for the percy jackson story to happen. That includes what was done to gave and turn him back to human from being a toad and erasing his memories of the interactions with naruto.
11/10 c8 Guest
Amazing I Like this so much thanks for the update
Amazing I Like this so much thanks for the update
11/9 c1 Madara
when will it be updated again?
when will it be updated again?
11/6 c8 Guest
at least they don't swallow
at least they don't swallow
810/31 c8 Rey
Es un capítulo bueno pero esperaba un poco más pero no me quejo
Es un capítulo bueno pero esperaba un poco más pero no me quejo
10/31 c5 Guest
Isnt apollo the good of knowledge?
What natuto told Luke hits and should have affected percy given how much he puts others saftey and happiness above his own.
Just thought about this but why weren't the demigods shocked to see their grandma and to learn of other pantheon especially given they don't even know about the romans
Isnt apollo the good of knowledge?
What natuto told Luke hits and should have affected percy given how much he puts others saftey and happiness above his own.
Just thought about this but why weren't the demigods shocked to see their grandma and to learn of other pantheon especially given they don't even know about the romans
10/31 c4 Guest
This female on male violence is ridiculous
This female on male violence is ridiculous
10/31 c3 Guest
I dont knownwhybth3 feel attacked when it's true. Honestly someone has to point out for hestia to be the good of family she just watchs as other families are destroyed or her siblings use their kids as weapons and pawns
I dont knownwhybth3 feel attacked when it's true. Honestly someone has to point out for hestia to be the good of family she just watchs as other families are destroyed or her siblings use their kids as weapons and pawns