for Hadrian Stark - Creating Avalon2h c22 nathan
Hmmm. So in other words, he has to wait about 16 years before he can get married? Not only that, he’s a high lord and warden of the North, really expect him to not marry before he’s 25?
Hmmm. So in other words, he has to wait about 16 years before he can get married? Not only that, he’s a high lord and warden of the North, really expect him to not marry before he’s 25?
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With the faith causing problems in the South, is Hadrian going to reach out to the mountain clans of the Vale? And what about the Old Gods followers in the Riverlands? He could offer safe havens in the North. With the Norths population problem I could see Hadrian trying to scoop them up. He already is on bad terms with the Tully's so what's one more thing going to do? Even house Blackwood could be an option for fostering to protect their children. The Blackwood's reached out to a Warden of a different kingdom because their Paramount failed to help with the crisis so they are definitely feeling the pressure. I think I read somewhere that the Blackwood's were once a house in the North and was displaced like the Manderly's were from the Reach. Hadrian could invite them back earning their gratitude and more people for the North.
With the faith causing problems in the South, is Hadrian going to reach out to the mountain clans of the Vale? And what about the Old Gods followers in the Riverlands? He could offer safe havens in the North. With the Norths population problem I could see Hadrian trying to scoop them up. He already is on bad terms with the Tully's so what's one more thing going to do? Even house Blackwood could be an option for fostering to protect their children. The Blackwood's reached out to a Warden of a different kingdom because their Paramount failed to help with the crisis so they are definitely feeling the pressure. I think I read somewhere that the Blackwood's were once a house in the North and was displaced like the Manderly's were from the Reach. Hadrian could invite them back earning their gratitude and more people for the North.
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So why doesn't Hadrian go ahead and start selling wood to Bravos? This would help set up the trade market in the mean time while also bringing in another source of revenue to help stretch his budget. On the Western coast he didn't want furs or wood sold because it wasn't winter so he wouldn't get as much demand this a lower price but it sounds like Bravos wants wood for building not burning. And since it isn't winter, why doesn't he sell things that would be in demand in summer like ice? I could see Hadrian sending crews north of the Wall to get ice for ice houses. it was mentioned in one of the books that the Nights Watch used ice cells in the wall for prisoners and food so it's conceivable that others would do something similar. It was used for centuries for food preservation along side with salting and smoking meat. Or is he saving that for when he tries to set up the trade colony with the wildlings? Paying them with food or metal to collect ice and furs?
So why doesn't Hadrian go ahead and start selling wood to Bravos? This would help set up the trade market in the mean time while also bringing in another source of revenue to help stretch his budget. On the Western coast he didn't want furs or wood sold because it wasn't winter so he wouldn't get as much demand this a lower price but it sounds like Bravos wants wood for building not burning. And since it isn't winter, why doesn't he sell things that would be in demand in summer like ice? I could see Hadrian sending crews north of the Wall to get ice for ice houses. it was mentioned in one of the books that the Nights Watch used ice cells in the wall for prisoners and food so it's conceivable that others would do something similar. It was used for centuries for food preservation along side with salting and smoking meat. Or is he saving that for when he tries to set up the trade colony with the wildlings? Paying them with food or metal to collect ice and furs?
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Entertaining enough, but unless you plan for a 700k words story, you're lacking timeskip
We also don't see much magic(that he need to learn from 0 and is so limited is already enough of a nerf) and it seems mc didn't once read anything about muggles inventions even if he was old enough to live when the internet existed, i guess it would make his perfect memory too good, but it's still stupid, no way did he never hear about how cement was made for example
Since he could feel people's magic, surprised he didn't find more himself and didn't simply rely on a hunstmen, same for magical objects and animals, also he know there's something magical taking place at winterfell (probably similar to the runes used at greywater watch) but never investigated..
Anyway good Luck with the rest of the story and thanks for writing
Entertaining enough, but unless you plan for a 700k words story, you're lacking timeskip
We also don't see much magic(that he need to learn from 0 and is so limited is already enough of a nerf) and it seems mc didn't once read anything about muggles inventions even if he was old enough to live when the internet existed, i guess it would make his perfect memory too good, but it's still stupid, no way did he never hear about how cement was made for example
Since he could feel people's magic, surprised he didn't find more himself and didn't simply rely on a hunstmen, same for magical objects and animals, also he know there's something magical taking place at winterfell (probably similar to the runes used at greywater watch) but never investigated..
Anyway good Luck with the rest of the story and thanks for writing
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Weren't the reach fleets destroyed ? How is she going to trade so much food ? Or was a year enough to reconstruct most of it ?
Weren't the reach fleets destroyed ? How is she going to trade so much food ? Or was a year enough to reconstruct most of it ?
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Using the giant at all seems risky since if even 1 die it will be hard on their population, same for the singers even tho they didn't act themselves
Btw i thought mc would simply spook the horses and then warg them to flee/get rid of their charges
Since there were direwolves at the meeting at the wall, did mc choose one? Or find a female one that would birth his future companion?
Using the giant at all seems risky since if even 1 die it will be hard on their population, same for the singers even tho they didn't act themselves
Btw i thought mc would simply spook the horses and then warg them to flee/get rid of their charges
Since there were direwolves at the meeting at the wall, did mc choose one? Or find a female one that would birth his future companion?
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Now he just need to find dragon eggs and provide the magic necessary to kickstart their hatching, tho only one or two at most for decades (until Daenerys at least)
Now he just need to find dragon eggs and provide the magic necessary to kickstart their hatching, tho only one or two at most for decades (until Daenerys at least)
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Btw since every Stark ever made had magic(idk how many génération it could strenght to tho), couldn't mc simply visit wintertown to find most bastard line of his house? In thousand of years, there should be a dozens lines at least, and it's if they didn't intermarry without knowing , strenghtening the bloodline
Isn't the north still buying half of the food they did before he came ? Losing such a close trading partner would cost coin again, will mc ever make some north specialty to diversify their trade and rapport more gold ?
Btw since every Stark ever made had magic(idk how many génération it could strenght to tho), couldn't mc simply visit wintertown to find most bastard line of his house? In thousand of years, there should be a dozens lines at least, and it's if they didn't intermarry without knowing , strenghtening the bloodline
Isn't the north still buying half of the food they did before he came ? Losing such a close trading partner would cost coin again, will mc ever make some north specialty to diversify their trade and rapport more gold ?
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Mc seems to fears traitors and has no problem using spies, but he didn't think once about other people spies that could already be deep in the north by this point
Btw how accurate is his soul reading? Because it would make it easy to find people to put in charge as long as they have the skills for ir
Also he stopped aging in his last life, why does he think of his death already when it might happen again? Unless he find another death chamber on the planet he'll be here for a long time
Mc seems to fears traitors and has no problem using spies, but he didn't think once about other people spies that could already be deep in the north by this point
Btw how accurate is his soul reading? Because it would make it easy to find people to put in charge as long as they have the skills for ir
Also he stopped aging in his last life, why does he think of his death already when it might happen again? Unless he find another death chamber on the planet he'll be here for a long time
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When is mc going to start to nurture a baby bird? I want him to have an Hedwig or even a Fawkes
When is mc going to start to nurture a baby bird? I want him to have an Hedwig or even a Fawkes
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Will we get another timeskip soon? most of his plans are longterms and won't see results right now, so seeing his current life is good but he's not even a teen yet
Will we get another timeskip soon? most of his plans are longterms and won't see results right now, so seeing his current life is good but he's not even a teen yet
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Will mc find varys' little birds soon? And decide to get rid of him?
Runes and the magics he know will take quite a while before being useful, what will be the next magical discipline for him to learn?
Can't mc focus how much of someone's soul he see to be able to find faceless men without being overwhelmed by always having his soul vision active ?
Will mc find varys' little birds soon? And decide to get rid of him?
Runes and the magics he know will take quite a while before being useful, what will be the next magical discipline for him to learn?
Can't mc focus how much of someone's soul he see to be able to find faceless men without being overwhelmed by always having his soul vision active ?
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Will he leave skagos to the giant? I don't see where else they could live comfortably
It could also be used for a magic academy/city in at least 2 decades
Will he leave skagos to the giant? I don't see where else they could live comfortably
It could also be used for a magic academy/city in at least 2 decades