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8/19 c7 1Wicked.A
Nice chapter, and an interesting moment when it was stated that the body of the chosen tarnished is currently dying because of the frenzied flame, this hadn't been mentioned yet
4/8 c6 Wicked.A
1/28 c5 Hugo0974
Love the story! Really unique and we'll written ! Hope to see more soon!
1/14 c1 Comedyy
honestly? I want to see a few more characters (not in the main cast of this fic) being taken and used by the frenzied flame, honestly it seems like the frenzied flame would make a lot more than just a few people go insane
1/10 c5 Wicked.A
I like especially how shabriri might just wrongly interpret the frenzied howls, and how it's still ambiguous whether or not the chosen tarnished/lord of frenzied flame is evil or not.
1/7 c5 ZeroisGreater
Good chap.
12/2/2022 c1 4Hofund
Ahhh, the delicious irony of it all.

It is not the first time I chose a male avatar for a game, but it is the first time I ever chose an ending I KNEW was bad because I wanted to save someone. I hated seeing Melina get dunked on. Perhaps it's a bad habit of mine, but I always try (and usually succeed) in finding at least some redeeming value in a generally-disliked character...

At least in my own playthroughs (yes I roleplay), my Tarnished first followed Ranni on her quest for the furthest stars (and he does not regret it one bit), but eventually he returned, reset the timeline (new game-I liked Ranni enough to not want to undo all our hard work), and this time chose a path that would see Melina alive, even if she would never know or understand why: I know what you did, and I doubt how worthy a world without you is of existing. Thus I shall create a world with you still in it and see for myself.

Shabriri thought he swayed me...and I cannot help but laugh because I killed him as soon as I heard what he'd done. I wonder if he knows I only tolerated him the second time so the questline didn't get locked.
11/4/2022 c2 Radio Free Death
[The man looked up at her. "Do you have shit for brains? What fucking allegiance do you think I have?"]

Varre wouldn't curse like this. He would use a whole different vocab to insult, not use a modern one that comes off as anachronistic. Other than that, damn, good job.
10/29/2022 c2 1Wicked.A
10/23/2022 c1 Radio Free Death
This is really good. The dialogue flows well, so well in fact that I kept reading without stopping, engrossed in what was going on and how Melina and Ranni were going to solve this looming, impossible threat of the world ending. There's a lot of stories of the chosen one working their way to this ending, but very few showing the aftermath. Definitely watching this story for sure.
10/15/2022 c2 Guest
Please continue this is soooo good
10/9/2022 c2 Ant
Do please keep going with this. Ist really good!
9/18/2022 c2 legitreader123
this shaping up to be real interesting. cant wait for the confrontation
9/14/2022 c2 1en jaune
Can't wait until the crew reunites with the Tarnished.
9/11/2022 c2 Guest
Very nice indeed and Aw ooor Miquella.
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