for Pride and Pandemonium: Being Mr Darcy5/8 c1 Gracen1b8
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I just found this site on Reddit called Storio (storioai dot com). The AI writing assistant speeds up drafting significantly. Seems promising if you like tools like Reedsy or Twine.
4/26 c26 maggieci
What will their interactions do to the spell-breaking, I wonder! Amazing story!
Your writing has been very clear when you use their real name and gender while describing the opposite one's actions. Very clever, and a fascinating story!
What will their interactions do to the spell-breaking, I wonder! Amazing story!
Your writing has been very clear when you use their real name and gender while describing the opposite one's actions. Very clever, and a fascinating story!
4/12 c26 ShaneLi0215
Thank you for your update. I can't wait to see how the story develops after this. Lydia ran away so early. How will Darcy and Elizabeth develop from this?
Thank you for your update. I can't wait to see how the story develops after this. Lydia ran away so early. How will Darcy and Elizabeth develop from this?
4/6 c25 Shane
enjoy the story so much!im looking forward to more chapters please
enjoy the story so much!im looking forward to more chapters please
4/7 c26 LotsOfLaundry
Oh, keep going ... all I see is Elizabeth (Darcy) running and Mr. Collins racing after her. That Wickham! More please! L.
Oh, keep going ... all I see is Elizabeth (Darcy) running and Mr. Collins racing after her. That Wickham! More please! L.
24/6 c26 Levenez
Oh my…. Darcy in Elisabeth being the first to break their instructions. And that will not help Charlotte believing that Elisabeth is interested in ten Colonel… what a mess!
Oh my…. Darcy in Elisabeth being the first to break their instructions. And that will not help Charlotte believing that Elisabeth is interested in ten Colonel… what a mess!
4/6 c26 Pedmisson
oh my! What will happen to them now? I was concerned about them not seeing each other...
oh my! What will happen to them now? I was concerned about them not seeing each other...
4/6 c23 aidyj
A fun idea. However, there is repeated plot in this chapter directly from the last chapter, which does not make sense. The ideas in this story are fun and interesting, however it is becoming disjointed.
A fun idea. However, there is repeated plot in this chapter directly from the last chapter, which does not make sense. The ideas in this story are fun and interesting, however it is becoming disjointed.
3/20 c25 Shane
This is a very interesting story. I can't help but keep reading until the end without pausing. I'm looking forward to your update very much.
This is a very interesting story. I can't help but keep reading until the end without pausing. I'm looking forward to your update very much.
3/18 c25 liysyl
Awesome chapter I am looking forward to the attempted reversal. Thanks for sharing your story.
Awesome chapter I am looking forward to the attempted reversal. Thanks for sharing your story.
3/15 c25 Guest
I’ve just read the story straight through and I find it quite funny and enjoyable. However, once they leave Netherfield I feel things start to unravel. Plot holes: Collins seems to have been staying for months? Them both walking alone to N. And breaking in? More likely Darcy (body)—who is independent and can do whatever he wants—would return from London for a few days with Bingley’s permission. And the hedgewitch/Anne thing— why was it so easy for them to do it initially but now they need help? No contact between D & Georgie all this time? No letters? Wouldn’t D in E’s body be concerned about business matters and write to his London house to see to things? Colonel F really wouldn’t notice? Lizzy’s fam really wouldn’t be concerned she was acting strangely? I also find it odd that Bingley would stay away for so long, given D not arguing against the match. And why didn’t Jane go to London to visit the Gardiners? No opportunity to play piano before now that might make D think to practice? The longer the story goes on, the more things don’t make sense. If you can find a way to wrap up before Christmas, that would be more plausible. The switching bodies thing works for a week or so but then you’d have to start finding ways to get on with life, and those kinds of things aren’t mentioned.
I’ve just read the story straight through and I find it quite funny and enjoyable. However, once they leave Netherfield I feel things start to unravel. Plot holes: Collins seems to have been staying for months? Them both walking alone to N. And breaking in? More likely Darcy (body)—who is independent and can do whatever he wants—would return from London for a few days with Bingley’s permission. And the hedgewitch/Anne thing— why was it so easy for them to do it initially but now they need help? No contact between D & Georgie all this time? No letters? Wouldn’t D in E’s body be concerned about business matters and write to his London house to see to things? Colonel F really wouldn’t notice? Lizzy’s fam really wouldn’t be concerned she was acting strangely? I also find it odd that Bingley would stay away for so long, given D not arguing against the match. And why didn’t Jane go to London to visit the Gardiners? No opportunity to play piano before now that might make D think to practice? The longer the story goes on, the more things don’t make sense. If you can find a way to wrap up before Christmas, that would be more plausible. The switching bodies thing works for a week or so but then you’d have to start finding ways to get on with life, and those kinds of things aren’t mentioned.
3/11 c25 EmlynMara
Definitely going in a rather unexpected direction.
I guess he did bungle things more than I realized. She’s still obsessed with Wickham. It’s like she’s learned nothing throughout this whole debacle.
Having lived outside of Chicago, I feel your pain. Definitely second your opinion of roaches. And retiring down South.
Definitely going in a rather unexpected direction.
I guess he did bungle things more than I realized. She’s still obsessed with Wickham. It’s like she’s learned nothing throughout this whole debacle.
Having lived outside of Chicago, I feel your pain. Definitely second your opinion of roaches. And retiring down South.