for Inferno story8/19/2022 c1 Guest
Very interesting and prommisimg story
Very interesting and prommisimg story
8/20/2022 c1 
34augiesannie
I like the idea that Georg had never met anyone like the new governess. And it’s clever, the idea that he would have stayed away from Elsa’s bed in (vain) hopes of building up some excitement. Nice job!
34augiesannieI like the idea that Georg had never met anyone like the new governess. And it’s clever, the idea that he would have stayed away from Elsa’s bed in (vain) hopes of building up some excitement. Nice job!
8/20/2022 c1 Guest
Interesting start...
Interesting start...
8/19/2022 c1 24What About Love
I’m so excited to see your story posted! I’ve been anxiously waiting to see it, and it certainly did not disappoint. What an awesome start! There are so many directions you could go with this. I can’t wait to see where you take us next!
24What About LoveI’m so excited to see your story posted! I’ve been anxiously waiting to see it, and it certainly did not disappoint. What an awesome start! There are so many directions you could go with this. I can’t wait to see where you take us next!
8/19/2022 c1 1Chris and Byng
Welcome to the other side of the pen! So great that you’ve jumped in head first. What a great start to your story. I love the tension that is building already.
1Chris and ByngWelcome to the other side of the pen! So great that you’ve jumped in head first. What a great start to your story. I love the tension that is building already.
8/19/2022 c1 Mittenball
Ooh ... this has real possibilities! Definitely looking forward to more chapters...love your descriptions of G & M's thoughts.
Ooh ... this has real possibilities! Definitely looking forward to more chapters...love your descriptions of G & M's thoughts.
8/19/2022 c1 10bloomandgrow
I'm delighted to see you publishing! I am always cheering madly when readers in the fandom take the plunge into writing and posting. So many people are full of gorgeous stories and it always adds to the richness of the fandom when people put their fingers to the keyboard and express their love for the film by weaving wonderful fics. But posting is nerve-wracking, I know, and it's even more impressive that English is not your first language. So Brava!
It was no problem at all to check the grammar on this after you wrote it, and in fact it was a real pleasure. (And no it didn't take time away from my own story - that's been life in general).
It definitely put a smile on my face because I do love a fiesty, amusing Maria and stubborn provocative Georg, and you have captured that wonderfully.
Even though I know what's coming I'm m excited to follow this story and I am full of anticipation. Congratulations on starting your first fic!
10bloomandgrowI'm delighted to see you publishing! I am always cheering madly when readers in the fandom take the plunge into writing and posting. So many people are full of gorgeous stories and it always adds to the richness of the fandom when people put their fingers to the keyboard and express their love for the film by weaving wonderful fics. But posting is nerve-wracking, I know, and it's even more impressive that English is not your first language. So Brava!
It was no problem at all to check the grammar on this after you wrote it, and in fact it was a real pleasure. (And no it didn't take time away from my own story - that's been life in general).
It definitely put a smile on my face because I do love a fiesty, amusing Maria and stubborn provocative Georg, and you have captured that wonderfully.
Even though I know what's coming I'm m excited to follow this story and I am full of anticipation. Congratulations on starting your first fic!