for Legacy of Olympus8/23/2022 c1 Guest
Will you bring other gods and goddess into the story like mother rhoyne or lord of light or maybe the other word essosi gods.
Will you bring other gods and goddess into the story like mother rhoyne or lord of light or maybe the other word essosi gods.
8/23/2022 c1 zeusjupiter46
Much better, keep it going brother. Your worrying style has definitely solidified. Hmm I suggest you make the difference known between inter dimensional gods (like the Olympian’s who are descended from the creator of the multiverse) and regular gods. To be honest just based off of lore alone, an Olympian God would curb stomp a got god. They have less rules and can clearly effect the mortal world more (however maybe you can make it so when the Olympians arrive it restarts the magic in Westeros, awakening the gods of their world)
Much better, keep it going brother. Your worrying style has definitely solidified. Hmm I suggest you make the difference known between inter dimensional gods (like the Olympian’s who are descended from the creator of the multiverse) and regular gods. To be honest just based off of lore alone, an Olympian God would curb stomp a got god. They have less rules and can clearly effect the mortal world more (however maybe you can make it so when the Olympians arrive it restarts the magic in Westeros, awakening the gods of their world)
8/23/2022 c1 Mr popo
Dude I was hoping you’d come back to this story and with a rewrite I have to say I am not disappointed. You got my interest and I will continue to support you and this story.
Dude I was hoping you’d come back to this story and with a rewrite I have to say I am not disappointed. You got my interest and I will continue to support you and this story.
8/23/2022 c1 Guest
Wonder how you’ll bring r’hllor, the 7 and the old gods into this story since the Olympian’s are going to go another world. How will they interact with each other?
Wonder how you’ll bring r’hllor, the 7 and the old gods into this story since the Olympian’s are going to go another world. How will they interact with each other?
8/23/2022 c1 Ooo
Preferably I think they should start in the middle of the rhoyne river and settle in chryone city. And I think it would be great if they started at the beginning of roberts rebellion.
Preferably I think they should start in the middle of the rhoyne river and settle in chryone city. And I think it would be great if they started at the beginning of roberts rebellion.
8/22/2022 c1 Trife
Interesting first chapter for the rewrite. It's going to be interesting to see how you do this. I'm quite interested in seeing how you will deal with all those demigods and demigoddesses running around though because they will have to deal not only with the normal politics but also the faith of the 7 which are not the most accepting of magic and we all know what religious zealots can get up to.
Trife
Interesting first chapter for the rewrite. It's going to be interesting to see how you do this. I'm quite interested in seeing how you will deal with all those demigods and demigoddesses running around though because they will have to deal not only with the normal politics but also the faith of the 7 which are not the most accepting of magic and we all know what religious zealots can get up to.
Trife
8/22/2022 c1 ASeekerofknowledge
So happy to see this story being continued. Can't wait to see you add more and expand this story keep up the good work.
So happy to see this story being continued. Can't wait to see you add more and expand this story keep up the good work.
8/21/2022 c1 Blazinglowe2491
like the more in depth approach about what killing Gaea truly did to the world and the build up it's leading to.
like the more in depth approach about what killing Gaea truly did to the world and the build up it's leading to.
8/21/2022 c1 
2miguelgiuliano.co
as I will always say I love the main idea of your story; and I hope that this time you can continue with it.
Personally, I will always say it, it is better that your story takes place at the time of the Dance of Dragons or the last Dark Fire rebellion. So your characters can have some good epic fights and you can also create some OC's (an idea would be a Percy descendant pitted against a Jason descendant idea). but if not, then I'll take the view that the place where Percy and company should appear could be in one of these two places either to the north of the Wall or to the Stone Steps; thus they could form their own kingdom with their rules and customs; if your story would be close to Robert's rebellion.
2miguelgiuliano.coas I will always say I love the main idea of your story; and I hope that this time you can continue with it.
Personally, I will always say it, it is better that your story takes place at the time of the Dance of Dragons or the last Dark Fire rebellion. So your characters can have some good epic fights and you can also create some OC's (an idea would be a Percy descendant pitted against a Jason descendant idea). but if not, then I'll take the view that the place where Percy and company should appear could be in one of these two places either to the north of the Wall or to the Stone Steps; thus they could form their own kingdom with their rules and customs; if your story would be close to Robert's rebellion.
8/21/2022 c1 17JosephLC
Very nice, this rewrite makes a lot more sense than the original work.
I’m excited to see this future Greco-Amazon-Roman culture that will most likely form. Will the new kingdom be some kind of island in the Sunset Sea? Given the traditional climate the Olympians are used to, it’ll geographically probably be somewhere between the Reach and Dorne, but I cannot see it being much farther north than the Westerlands.
Anyway, again, excited for the future of this story.
Very nice, this rewrite makes a lot more sense than the original work.
I’m excited to see this future Greco-Amazon-Roman culture that will most likely form. Will the new kingdom be some kind of island in the Sunset Sea? Given the traditional climate the Olympians are used to, it’ll geographically probably be somewhere between the Reach and Dorne, but I cannot see it being much farther north than the Westerlands.
Anyway, again, excited for the future of this story.
8/21/2022 c1 kingmanaena
wow this was a great read this was so good im glad you changed up the prophecy i cant wait to read what happens next this was a great start
wow this was a great read this was so good im glad you changed up the prophecy i cant wait to read what happens next this was a great start