for Fate Breaker8/6 c10 Anonymous
Yes! I think I hate Peter the most. He’s such a spineless waste of a life that wasted Harry’s mercy. This was a great resolution. I do think you should write more about why Emrys is the royal house.
Yes! I think I hate Peter the most. He’s such a spineless waste of a life that wasted Harry’s mercy. This was a great resolution. I do think you should write more about why Emrys is the royal house.
8/6 c9 Anonymous
Another great chapter. It’s weird that she hasn’t met her grandparents and aunt yet. Also, are we to assume that’s the le fey and emrys line merged through Darius or through Kamaria? Said differently, does Kamaria’s mom not contribute anything magically or is this something you’ll explore later?
Another great chapter. It’s weird that she hasn’t met her grandparents and aunt yet. Also, are we to assume that’s the le fey and emrys line merged through Darius or through Kamaria? Said differently, does Kamaria’s mom not contribute anything magically or is this something you’ll explore later?
8/6 c8 Anonymous
Great chapter! The crisis in purpose was a really good interlude. Also, you bring up a really good point about phoenix tears. Either they are exactly as described and a panacea and Dumbledore willingly chose not to heal the longbottoms or they are not a cure all and Rowling didn’t through everything when she described phoenix tears as a cure all. I’m thinking the latter is the simplest explanation.
Great chapter! The crisis in purpose was a really good interlude. Also, you bring up a really good point about phoenix tears. Either they are exactly as described and a panacea and Dumbledore willingly chose not to heal the longbottoms or they are not a cure all and Rowling didn’t through everything when she described phoenix tears as a cure all. I’m thinking the latter is the simplest explanation.
8/5 c7 Anonymous
Good job toeing the line with lord black; it was believably written. What spell did he use? Why didn’t he cover the princess?
Good job toeing the line with lord black; it was believably written. What spell did he use? Why didn’t he cover the princess?
8/5 c6 Anonymous
Interesting history. So the dragon has been alone for centuries? Seems pretty sane and well adjusted for a millennia old dragon.
Interesting history. So the dragon has been alone for centuries? Seems pretty sane and well adjusted for a millennia old dragon.
8/5 c5 Anonymous
Dragon? What is this, the Emrys equivalent to the basilisk? You’re getting perilously close to just jumping the shark with your story. That said, it is pretty engaging so I’ll continue reading.
Dragon? What is this, the Emrys equivalent to the basilisk? You’re getting perilously close to just jumping the shark with your story. That said, it is pretty engaging so I’ll continue reading.
8/5 c4 Anonymous
Great chapter! Your history of brownies was a real nice touch. You could do a better job describing the castle. The full majesty of the castle didn’t come through.
Great chapter! Your history of brownies was a real nice touch. You could do a better job describing the castle. The full majesty of the castle didn’t come through.
8/5 c3 Anonymous
Good chapter; I thought the shift in perspective was a nice touch. Your pacing is good. One thing I don’t understand is why they didn’t immediately get more security once they found out who she was. You alluded to why they didn’t immediately move into the castle, but there wasn’t much consideration given to why she didn’t have more security on privet drive.
Good chapter; I thought the shift in perspective was a nice touch. Your pacing is good. One thing I don’t understand is why they didn’t immediately get more security once they found out who she was. You alluded to why they didn’t immediately move into the castle, but there wasn’t much consideration given to why she didn’t have more security on privet drive.
8/5 c2 Anonymous
Reincarnated as a princess? Seriously? How is there going to be any real challenges when you’ve given her such an absurd heritage. You did so well with the first chapter that this seems so lazy and cliched. At least yourMC has the wherewithal and self awareness to recognize how absurd the results of the inheritance test were.
Reincarnated as a princess? Seriously? How is there going to be any real challenges when you’ve given her such an absurd heritage. You did so well with the first chapter that this seems so lazy and cliched. At least yourMC has the wherewithal and self awareness to recognize how absurd the results of the inheritance test were.
8/5 c1 Anonymous
You’ve got a real unique MC. I also like how you made this a different Harry Potter universe. Let’s hope this one doesn’t have any Horcruxes because searching for those is a bit tedious and mostly uninteresting.
You’ve got a real unique MC. I also like how you made this a different Harry Potter universe. Let’s hope this one doesn’t have any Horcruxes because searching for those is a bit tedious and mostly uninteresting.
8/6 c10 mariita1mari
I'm so happy with the new chapter, I absolutely love this story so far and can't wait to read more.
I'm so happy with the new chapter, I absolutely love this story so far and can't wait to read more.
8/5 c7 
2Dscot
OK I can kind of believe everything until you involve the Weasley’s. There are no bigger Dumbledore supporters than the Weasley’s. There are also no bigger morons than the Weasley’s. For 12 years, they allowed a man who pretended to be a rat to live in their house. Either there are extremely bad parents or they are morons who don’t even know how long a rat should live. They live in a world where people can turn into animals. The fact that they couldn’t figure out that somebody could be an animal, pretending to be a pet shows how moronic they are.
I limit most of my feelings is that I find the Weasley’s creepy. Mrs Weasley, knew Harry all maybe three months. Less than a half a month in second year. a few days in third year, less than a month in fourth year. Yet she yells at Black that Harry is as good as her son.
I also found it strange that they had access to Harry’s vault key. And that Bill was allowed to take money out of Harry’s vault without needing Harry’s permission.
2DscotOK I can kind of believe everything until you involve the Weasley’s. There are no bigger Dumbledore supporters than the Weasley’s. There are also no bigger morons than the Weasley’s. For 12 years, they allowed a man who pretended to be a rat to live in their house. Either there are extremely bad parents or they are morons who don’t even know how long a rat should live. They live in a world where people can turn into animals. The fact that they couldn’t figure out that somebody could be an animal, pretending to be a pet shows how moronic they are.
I limit most of my feelings is that I find the Weasley’s creepy. Mrs Weasley, knew Harry all maybe three months. Less than a half a month in second year. a few days in third year, less than a month in fourth year. Yet she yells at Black that Harry is as good as her son.
I also found it strange that they had access to Harry’s vault key. And that Bill was allowed to take money out of Harry’s vault without needing Harry’s permission.
8/2 c10 1Vik1902
Finally! I was sad thinking this story was abandoned!
I'm anxious to see what will happen when Harry is finally saved: I hope to see Andromeda, Ted and Lady Zabini, together with Lady Longbottom, storm the Wizengamot asking for a justification for Harry to be abused.
I wonder what lord Black is going to say about, and looking to a nice Dumbledore bashing... ahhh this is a real treat!
Thank you again for coming back with this story.
Cheers
1Vik1902Finally! I was sad thinking this story was abandoned!
I'm anxious to see what will happen when Harry is finally saved: I hope to see Andromeda, Ted and Lady Zabini, together with Lady Longbottom, storm the Wizengamot asking for a justification for Harry to be abused.
I wonder what lord Black is going to say about, and looking to a nice Dumbledore bashing... ahhh this is a real treat!
Thank you again for coming back with this story.
Cheers