for Jurassic World Dominion (My Version): REWRITE4/7 c9 JONATHAN GRAHAM
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12/20/2023 c1 NinjaFox311
Very nice! I like what you've fine and can't wait to read more! Favorite! Few notes:
Loved the dinosaur noises written out that was hilarious,
I hope you use the mosasaurus more; it was criminally underused in the film
If you look online, there is lots of concept art of scenes that were deleted/changed, for example when Alan, Maisie, and Owen catch Beta, that was meant to be the Pyroraptor and Maisie wasn't supposed to be there, and it was supposed to finish Alan's arc.
Overall, it was amazing and I can't wait for more!
Very nice! I like what you've fine and can't wait to read more! Favorite! Few notes:
Loved the dinosaur noises written out that was hilarious,
I hope you use the mosasaurus more; it was criminally underused in the film
If you look online, there is lots of concept art of scenes that were deleted/changed, for example when Alan, Maisie, and Owen catch Beta, that was meant to be the Pyroraptor and Maisie wasn't supposed to be there, and it was supposed to finish Alan's arc.
Overall, it was amazing and I can't wait for more!
7/16/2023 c8 
4DieHardBrendan
Well, that chapter can make you see how Claire would feel that her friends can't be part of these dangerous dinosaur missions anymore, along with the other events on this story.
I do enjoy Dominion, but it could use a bunch of improvements like you said.
4DieHardBrendanWell, that chapter can make you see how Claire would feel that her friends can't be part of these dangerous dinosaur missions anymore, along with the other events on this story.
I do enjoy Dominion, but it could use a bunch of improvements like you said.
2/27/2023 c5 Guest
Could you add the creatures of the camp cretaceous from ouranosaurus to monolophosaurus to Tarbosaurus, Smilodon to Nothosaurus.
Could you add the creatures of the camp cretaceous from ouranosaurus to monolophosaurus to Tarbosaurus, Smilodon to Nothosaurus.
2/27/2023 c5 Guest
I just finished your latest chapter and I might say, it is very good, I hope this story would as good as the extended version of the movie.
I just finished your latest chapter and I might say, it is very good, I hope this story would as good as the extended version of the movie.
11/1/2022 c3 KeepingUpDisappearances
I really like this so far! My one complaint is that the text is in bold which makes it harder to read.
I really like this so far! My one complaint is that the text is in bold which makes it harder to read.
9/27/2022 c1 Edward shelley
this is so good and you even had the giganotosaurus pale grey unfact it was the one in the prologue is that color while the another one is not the same color nice.
hope too see more of this dinosaurs forever
oh will there be more dinosaur species
list
. Spinosaurus
. Ceratosaurus they appaer in JP3 and camp cretaceous
. ouranosaurus they appaer in camp cretaceous
. monolophosaurus
. kentrosaurus
. pachyrhinosaurus
. Metriacanthosaurus
. Edmontosaurus
. Peloroplites
. Suchomimus
. Teratophoneus
. Majungasaurus
. Troodon
. Corythosaurus JP3
. Mamenchisaurus
. Euoplocephalus
. Herrerasaurus
. Styracosaurus
. Hadrosaurus
. acrocanthosaurus cut from camp
. Yutyrannus. large fathered dinosaur
. Maiasaura
. Psittacosaurus
. Concavenator
. Lambeosaurus
. Pachycephalosaurus
. Einiosaurus
. Camarasaurus
. Deinonychus. cut from the fmil and replace by atrociraptor
. Elmisaurus
. mapuosaurus
. Carcharodontosaurus
. Utahraptor you can have it covered in feathers
. the possibilities are endless now making dinosaurs is out in the world
this is so good and you even had the giganotosaurus pale grey unfact it was the one in the prologue is that color while the another one is not the same color nice.
hope too see more of this dinosaurs forever
oh will there be more dinosaur species
list
. Spinosaurus
. Ceratosaurus they appaer in JP3 and camp cretaceous
. ouranosaurus they appaer in camp cretaceous
. monolophosaurus
. kentrosaurus
. pachyrhinosaurus
. Metriacanthosaurus
. Edmontosaurus
. Peloroplites
. Suchomimus
. Teratophoneus
. Majungasaurus
. Troodon
. Corythosaurus JP3
. Mamenchisaurus
. Euoplocephalus
. Herrerasaurus
. Styracosaurus
. Hadrosaurus
. acrocanthosaurus cut from camp
. Yutyrannus. large fathered dinosaur
. Maiasaura
. Psittacosaurus
. Concavenator
. Lambeosaurus
. Pachycephalosaurus
. Einiosaurus
. Camarasaurus
. Deinonychus. cut from the fmil and replace by atrociraptor
. Elmisaurus
. mapuosaurus
. Carcharodontosaurus
. Utahraptor you can have it covered in feathers
. the possibilities are endless now making dinosaurs is out in the world
8/28/2022 c1 1The Conniving Serpent
Yooo, this already has a pretty good start, even though it's not my story, I really hope that either you make the Giga more of a villain, or make him not die at the end, anyways, I've got this favorited, good luck!
1The Conniving SerpentYooo, this already has a pretty good start, even though it's not my story, I really hope that either you make the Giga more of a villain, or make him not die at the end, anyways, I've got this favorited, good luck!