for Mushoku Tensei: Moving Forward5/16 c46 gigamans57
This whole weird incest shit is so fucking ASS. And its this far in and he hasn't even fucking left his hometown. Oh my GOD.
This whole weird incest shit is so fucking ASS. And its this far in and he hasn't even fucking left his hometown. Oh my GOD.
5/16 c2 gigamans57
So a loser NEET also happens to know multiple languages, right. The work that goes into learning something like that doesn't mesh with being an uneducated shut-in, but whatever.
Also Lilith's native language is the language that's spoken by everyone there. There's literally only one native language on that continent.
So a loser NEET also happens to know multiple languages, right. The work that goes into learning something like that doesn't mesh with being an uneducated shut-in, but whatever.
Also Lilith's native language is the language that's spoken by everyone there. There's literally only one native language on that continent.
5/14 c5 AU1
Ok this is actually funny and im really disappointed that my time with this story WILL end fast
Ok this is actually funny and im really disappointed that my time with this story WILL end fast
4/9 c44 Guest
Yo warning mc is strait up a cuck if your a normal person and don’t like that shit don’t read.
Yo warning mc is strait up a cuck if your a normal person and don’t like that shit don’t read.
3/27 c1 AmeliaCarson
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Hello,
How are you doing?
This is Amelia Carson I am manga/ comic artist..
I have read your stories that you have shared on Fanfiction they are too good the way you write it the way you explain each and everything is too good. So i am here to give you an idea I hope you will like it and if you are interested we will discuss about it.
So idea is this What do you think about amending your story into Comic art in my art style? I have done so many projects before for my client and if you want i can show you my past work that i have done for my client.
So lets get connected on discord and start working on this wonderful project..
If you're interested, feel free to reach out I'm open for commissions and would love to collaborate with you.
You can contact me on Discord: aholmes2373
Thank you.
2/24 c47 Vel
Your writing is so beautiful
Your writing is so beautiful
1/9 c3 Guest
"The original Rudeus casted only one, before succumbing..."
cast*, not casted. Look up 'irregular verb'.
"The original Rudeus casted only one, before succumbing..."
cast*, not casted. Look up 'irregular verb'.
11/13/2024 c3 gazingvoid
I mean...not really. basically every problem for rudeus was caused by rudeus being powerful.
he was too powerful. it affected too many people. breaking canon. and the world itself got weaker because of it.
thus causing the teleportation incident. honestly. if he would have stayed weak, and just became a small town knight. he could have lived in peace for the rest of his days.
I think laplace actually reincarnated after rudeus died. so. literally. his life would of actually been pretty idealic and perfect. if he didn't shoot himself in the foot.
except for his father's cheating.
hitogami didn't even notice he existed until he passed through hitogami's domain during the teleportation incident.
so most of pain could have been avoided just by relaxing and enjoying life.
which is the true irony of the story. him deciding to change and become a better person. ruined his life. seriously.
he could have just been a noble or a knight. had everything he could ever need. living comfortably. but he decided to better himself and got fucked because of it.
I mean...not really. basically every problem for rudeus was caused by rudeus being powerful.
he was too powerful. it affected too many people. breaking canon. and the world itself got weaker because of it.
thus causing the teleportation incident. honestly. if he would have stayed weak, and just became a small town knight. he could have lived in peace for the rest of his days.
I think laplace actually reincarnated after rudeus died. so. literally. his life would of actually been pretty idealic and perfect. if he didn't shoot himself in the foot.
except for his father's cheating.
hitogami didn't even notice he existed until he passed through hitogami's domain during the teleportation incident.
so most of pain could have been avoided just by relaxing and enjoying life.
which is the true irony of the story. him deciding to change and become a better person. ruined his life. seriously.
he could have just been a noble or a knight. had everything he could ever need. living comfortably. but he decided to better himself and got fucked because of it.
11/13/2024 c3 gazingvoid
I always just chalk it up to magic bullshit lol. magic in the mushoku tensei world is capable of making people superhuman.
that's what touki is. magic focused towards protecting and enhancing the body. which means rudeus can use touki. just not instinctively like everyone else.
magic definitely mutated the baby's brain. cause you have to think. rudeus actually had a laplace factor. and the eventual goal of the laplace factor is to allow laplace to reincarnate. i highly doubt he wants to be a borderline braindead baby for years.
so not only is magic itself mutating the brain. but that specific resurrection magic is probably having a very specific effect on the brain as well. not just increasing magical capacity.
I always just chalk it up to magic bullshit lol. magic in the mushoku tensei world is capable of making people superhuman.
that's what touki is. magic focused towards protecting and enhancing the body. which means rudeus can use touki. just not instinctively like everyone else.
magic definitely mutated the baby's brain. cause you have to think. rudeus actually had a laplace factor. and the eventual goal of the laplace factor is to allow laplace to reincarnate. i highly doubt he wants to be a borderline braindead baby for years.
so not only is magic itself mutating the brain. but that specific resurrection magic is probably having a very specific effect on the brain as well. not just increasing magical capacity.
9/9/2024 c47 Kaleid Liner
It can't be.
What a great story you've written, the good growth in the characters, and one of the things I liked most was that you gave us everyone's point of view, not many writers do it, and it's appreciated that you did it.
Well, i love knowing what each character thinks.
I would like to point out that i liked other things, but i don't want it to be so long.
There are not many good fanfics about this work, but like many others they are divided into two parts, on the one hand, there are those that make the character make changes, but they also copy and paste the original work, then there are those that show us the true "what would have happened if the character did things differently" and i am not going to deny it for a moment when the news of Lilia's pregnancy was announced, i was afraid that everything would happen like in the original, but i want to clarify that even though i was also hurt when we found out about the pregnancy, it was understood why it happened and the incredible thing is that if there was someone who didn't understand it, in later chapters you explain it, you are great.
So, to finish, two things:
1. Even though i'm the type of person who loves for the main character to win over all the female characters, or, in this case, for this Rudeus to accomplish what the original couldn't with all the missed opportunities he had, i'm willing to give that up, i hope that if what you have been hinting that could happen with the other older female character is achieved, that is, you already made him Aisha's stepfather, it costs you nothing to make him Norm's stepfather.
2. Please don't abandon the story.
It can't be.
What a great story you've written, the good growth in the characters, and one of the things I liked most was that you gave us everyone's point of view, not many writers do it, and it's appreciated that you did it.
Well, i love knowing what each character thinks.
I would like to point out that i liked other things, but i don't want it to be so long.
There are not many good fanfics about this work, but like many others they are divided into two parts, on the one hand, there are those that make the character make changes, but they also copy and paste the original work, then there are those that show us the true "what would have happened if the character did things differently" and i am not going to deny it for a moment when the news of Lilia's pregnancy was announced, i was afraid that everything would happen like in the original, but i want to clarify that even though i was also hurt when we found out about the pregnancy, it was understood why it happened and the incredible thing is that if there was someone who didn't understand it, in later chapters you explain it, you are great.
So, to finish, two things:
1. Even though i'm the type of person who loves for the main character to win over all the female characters, or, in this case, for this Rudeus to accomplish what the original couldn't with all the missed opportunities he had, i'm willing to give that up, i hope that if what you have been hinting that could happen with the other older female character is achieved, that is, you already made him Aisha's stepfather, it costs you nothing to make him Norm's stepfather.
2. Please don't abandon the story.
8/28/2024 c42 
2SinfulScribbles
Honestly just kill paul at this point. Dear god its frusturating to see him oscilate between unforgivable bastard and “unlikable but necessary outside perspective”. His actions largely feel like the former but then it occasionally feels like hes used as the vocie of god to point out issues the MC ignores. There is a degree of logic to it, but its an unpleasant experience to resd theough, and not in like a good way. There are some uncomfortable truths or stories that can be uncomfortable to read but are meaningful or inpavtful in very intentional ways. This just frels like indecisisve or unnecessarily agitating for the sake of creating story drama. Ive put this story down a number of times bevause of Paul alone.
2SinfulScribblesHonestly just kill paul at this point. Dear god its frusturating to see him oscilate between unforgivable bastard and “unlikable but necessary outside perspective”. His actions largely feel like the former but then it occasionally feels like hes used as the vocie of god to point out issues the MC ignores. There is a degree of logic to it, but its an unpleasant experience to resd theough, and not in like a good way. There are some uncomfortable truths or stories that can be uncomfortable to read but are meaningful or inpavtful in very intentional ways. This just frels like indecisisve or unnecessarily agitating for the sake of creating story drama. Ive put this story down a number of times bevause of Paul alone.
6/25/2024 c6 lasslowerence
fuck, that was cathartic, better than some other novels who use this scene to make a move on Roxy when he was still 3 xD
fuck, that was cathartic, better than some other novels who use this scene to make a move on Roxy when he was still 3 xD