for Mushoku Tensei: Moving Forward2/11 c25 MairoGleon
Man, what a great fic, I got really addicted and finished all the chapters in one go, I will really look forward for more.
Man, what a great fic, I got really addicted and finished all the chapters in one go, I will really look forward for more.
2/8 c25 Guest
Really good chapter though I have to wonder since it wasn't completely implied at this part. So was zenith up through his whole inner battle or just towards the end when he heal her for pleasant dreams?
Really good chapter though I have to wonder since it wasn't completely implied at this part. So was zenith up through his whole inner battle or just towards the end when he heal her for pleasant dreams?
2/7 c25 
4GMotW - The Author
I think that I get what's happening here. Rudeus feels frustrated because of Paul's mess and due his unique situation as a reincarnated man he feels awkward around Zenith but seriously man, you shouldn't go there and make him so horny especially when you involve Zenith of all people.
I can understand if he finds her beautiful from a purely objective perspective and perhaps he could even see her as an older sister of sorts but... Well, at least I'm able to rationalize his thoughts. Just, please do not make him go for Zenith or something like that.
That said, the rest of the chapter was pretty good.
4GMotW - The AuthorI think that I get what's happening here. Rudeus feels frustrated because of Paul's mess and due his unique situation as a reincarnated man he feels awkward around Zenith but seriously man, you shouldn't go there and make him so horny especially when you involve Zenith of all people.
I can understand if he finds her beautiful from a purely objective perspective and perhaps he could even see her as an older sister of sorts but... Well, at least I'm able to rationalize his thoughts. Just, please do not make him go for Zenith or something like that.
That said, the rest of the chapter was pretty good.
2/7 c25 shootdamit
At this point, the sooner rudy leaves his home, the sooner his heart will begin to mend.
At this point, the sooner rudy leaves his home, the sooner his heart will begin to mend.
2/7 c25 8StoryReiter
...OK I call a bit of BS or rather I raise my hands up in surrender and partial outrage.
It must run in the family. Everyone is horny now. I guess the attraction was there, it just so happens to be me interpreting it as his guilt of taking her son as well as his preference to Lilia. Granted I was laser focused on Lilia and her friendship with Roxy.
I, honestly dislike this although I could understand. Maybe because I like to take Rudy's side on things? This honestly makes it seem to me as if he is no better than his old man. I guess this can be a reason why he keeps his distance. He's gonna need to keep things in check at this rate. Learn from another's mistake. Rudy's a mess it seems. Good on him to better family relations with his biological mum. It might also seem to keep his focus off of Lilia.
Everything is in pain in this household seeking comfort in other parties understandably. Troublesome.
Thank you for the update, take care and have a good day. God bless you author.
8StoryReiter...OK I call a bit of BS or rather I raise my hands up in surrender and partial outrage.
It must run in the family. Everyone is horny now. I guess the attraction was there, it just so happens to be me interpreting it as his guilt of taking her son as well as his preference to Lilia. Granted I was laser focused on Lilia and her friendship with Roxy.
I, honestly dislike this although I could understand. Maybe because I like to take Rudy's side on things? This honestly makes it seem to me as if he is no better than his old man. I guess this can be a reason why he keeps his distance. He's gonna need to keep things in check at this rate. Learn from another's mistake. Rudy's a mess it seems. Good on him to better family relations with his biological mum. It might also seem to keep his focus off of Lilia.
Everything is in pain in this household seeking comfort in other parties understandably. Troublesome.
Thank you for the update, take care and have a good day. God bless you author.
2/2 c24 Silverwingzz
Seems more slice of life than the actual story, could be better. It’s also kinda slow.
Seems more slice of life than the actual story, could be better. It’s also kinda slow.
1/31 c18 StoryReiter
Yeah, this is an issue in hindsight. Rudeus's magic touch of healing increases arousal or invokes something close to it in terms of pleasantness. I thought it as a partial gag really. Alongside her perception that Rudeus is simply a boy which he technically IS. Truly love their dynamic as someone close. Lillia can now learna and improve her swordsmanship at the rate things are going. Adventurer badass maid Lillia when? The overly prepped meido with hidden knives, weapons and implements.
Thank you for this story, take care, have a good day and God bless you author.
Yeah, this is an issue in hindsight. Rudeus's magic touch of healing increases arousal or invokes something close to it in terms of pleasantness. I thought it as a partial gag really. Alongside her perception that Rudeus is simply a boy which he technically IS. Truly love their dynamic as someone close. Lillia can now learna and improve her swordsmanship at the rate things are going. Adventurer badass maid Lillia when? The overly prepped meido with hidden knives, weapons and implements.
Thank you for this story, take care, have a good day and God bless you author.
1/31 c24 StoryReiter
Yeah, NO. You made this ride, I will await and read it till completion. This is easier to 100% than games you know.
Paul is ominous. Your author's note even more so. Or am I reading to much into it?
Are you at it again, PAUL?! DID YOU DEPORT RUDY WHEN HE WAS CARING FOR HIS MOMMA?!
They were just getting closer to. IS THAT IT?!
UGH. You can get better, you DID get better so I have some hopes.
Its amazing in context after a few rereads how passing Zenith's mention from Rudy's POV. Until Lillia coaxed Rudy to connect. He also had that guilt complex of not being their 'true' child. Really sad for Zenith though. She's been through a lot. Happy to say she'll have the fun and opportunity raising the Norn.
Good for Paul that he has inclinations to be caring and considerate if that is how Paul met Zenith before. Then again, Ghylsaine/Ghislaine and Lillia got assaulted by the guy during his immature phase to put it lightly. Yup, I theorized Paul recruited the cat girl to deport Rudy. Only way I can think of for him to truly be successful. Because if I was in Rudy's place some animosity will spill reagrdless of his best efforts unlike what happened to canon. The wound is still to raw so to speak. But this is still a theory.
Thank you for the quick update and looking forward to more. Take care, have a good day and God bless you, author.
Yeah, NO. You made this ride, I will await and read it till completion. This is easier to 100% than games you know.
Paul is ominous. Your author's note even more so. Or am I reading to much into it?
Are you at it again, PAUL?! DID YOU DEPORT RUDY WHEN HE WAS CARING FOR HIS MOMMA?!
They were just getting closer to. IS THAT IT?!
UGH. You can get better, you DID get better so I have some hopes.
Its amazing in context after a few rereads how passing Zenith's mention from Rudy's POV. Until Lillia coaxed Rudy to connect. He also had that guilt complex of not being their 'true' child. Really sad for Zenith though. She's been through a lot. Happy to say she'll have the fun and opportunity raising the Norn.
Good for Paul that he has inclinations to be caring and considerate if that is how Paul met Zenith before. Then again, Ghylsaine/Ghislaine and Lillia got assaulted by the guy during his immature phase to put it lightly. Yup, I theorized Paul recruited the cat girl to deport Rudy. Only way I can think of for him to truly be successful. Because if I was in Rudy's place some animosity will spill reagrdless of his best efforts unlike what happened to canon. The wound is still to raw so to speak. But this is still a theory.
Thank you for the quick update and looking forward to more. Take care, have a good day and God bless you, author.
1/26 c22 Shifuru
Well, this is disappointing. There goes my hope for Lilia to get saved, a chance for it to go a different route from canon, by the current Rudeus from her rapist. I mean some things did change, but not in the way I would find it satisfactory.
Well, this is disappointing. There goes my hope for Lilia to get saved, a chance for it to go a different route from canon, by the current Rudeus from her rapist. I mean some things did change, but not in the way I would find it satisfactory.
1/26 c23 4GMotW - The Author
Well, so far it seems like things are getting better. At least Rudeus and Zenith are on speaking terms with Lilia and won't throw her away but it's good that the Paul issue has been addressed.
It would be a great disservice and a betrayal of the higher order if Lilia were to become Paul's wife, lover or whatever.
Isekai Man again being the good man he is, making sure his mom has emotional support for the upcoming days of the pregnancy. Can't say I disagree with his reasoning given how much care Zenith needs.
Him chosing not to meet Eris might sound cold and callous but he isn't wrong to look for his family and the people of the village.
Then we got Sylphy issue... yeah, I think things are not gonna follow the script you got for this, Rudy. Most likely, her father is gonna play the idiotic ball and forcibly make them spend less time together, then there are gonna be misunderstanding and it could give Paul the perfect excuse to send him away.
Rudeus isn't exactly in the best position to make demands since he is a "Child" and the adults would surely fuck his plan up.
4GMotW - The AuthorWell, so far it seems like things are getting better. At least Rudeus and Zenith are on speaking terms with Lilia and won't throw her away but it's good that the Paul issue has been addressed.
It would be a great disservice and a betrayal of the higher order if Lilia were to become Paul's wife, lover or whatever.
Isekai Man again being the good man he is, making sure his mom has emotional support for the upcoming days of the pregnancy. Can't say I disagree with his reasoning given how much care Zenith needs.
Him chosing not to meet Eris might sound cold and callous but he isn't wrong to look for his family and the people of the village.
Then we got Sylphy issue... yeah, I think things are not gonna follow the script you got for this, Rudy. Most likely, her father is gonna play the idiotic ball and forcibly make them spend less time together, then there are gonna be misunderstanding and it could give Paul the perfect excuse to send him away.
Rudeus isn't exactly in the best position to make demands since he is a "Child" and the adults would surely fuck his plan up.
1/25 c23 teguhbnn80
I will be disappointed if I don't see (at least one) oyakodon scene between Rudy, Lilia and Aisha in this story
I will be disappointed if I don't see (at least one) oyakodon scene between Rudy, Lilia and Aisha in this story