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1/26 c23 4GMotW - The Author
Well, so far it seems like things are getting better. At least Rudeus and Zenith are on speaking terms with Lilia and won't throw her away but it's good that the Paul issue has been addressed.

It would be a great disservice and a betrayal of the higher order if Lilia were to become Paul's wife, lover or whatever.

Isekai Man again being the good man he is, making sure his mom has emotional support for the upcoming days of the pregnancy. Can't say I disagree with his reasoning given how much care Zenith needs.

Him chosing not to meet Eris might sound cold and callous but he isn't wrong to look for his family and the people of the village.

Then we got Sylphy issue... yeah, I think things are not gonna follow the script you got for this, Rudy. Most likely, her father is gonna play the idiotic ball and forcibly make them spend less time together, then there are gonna be misunderstanding and it could give Paul the perfect excuse to send him away.

Rudeus isn't exactly in the best position to make demands since he is a "Child" and the adults would surely fuck his plan up.
1/25 c23 teguhbnn80
I will be disappointed if I don't see (at least one) oyakodon scene between Rudy, Lilia and Aisha in this story
1/25 c23 8StoryReiter
Man, thats cold Rudy. Then again, he has not bonded with his father's extended family and the village is the only place his hand can realistically save and reach. Here's to thinking how alike he and Lillia were. The mindset of making sure the one who has an interest on them finds another. Not that there is anything wrong, in fact I approve of Rudeus not doing anything drastic with his current mental state. The sad thing is, Paul only took notice of Lillia because Rudy took care of her and made her bloom as they took care of one another. I honestly hope Lillia is in a better place rather than worse. Knowing she has value and worthy of care as a person but being aware of such things while being in her position could be obnoxiously painful.. Sylphy, I have a feeling if things go this route, Laws might object and strap them to canon rails. Rudy will not go down without a fight. He would need a good reason not to if Paul were to enforce it.
As for Zenith, yeah, she does need the company. Lillia will also give birth. Paul also suspect Rudues having NTR magoc hands. Stay strong Isekai Man. This is painful to wait for. The down time is appreciated after such an emotional high.
Thank you for the update, take care and have a good day author. God bless you.
1/25 c23 RimuruSlyme
fuck lilia and paul
1/24 c19 StoryReiter
Yeah, this halycon days. The teleportation incident feels like it will hit harder. I grew to enjoy how you show them interact with each other. As of this chapter, I love how the family dynamics go.
As for the music suggestion, author, well, Hotaru by Fujita Maiko. Latest chapter slaps hard.
Thanks once again, take care always and have a good day author. God bless you.
1/24 c22 StoryReiter
So canon still happens. Outwardly. The gears do not mesh as they did. This world is a bit more cruel than ours. At most, more blatant about it. Confusion truly does set in and I can see Lillia truly do this. Its possible Lillia says she loves Rudy then there and there is hope of restoration happening but... both are hurt and she did it of her own volition not knowing better. Paul already laid his claim and has more pull. It could work between Lillia and Paul but it leaves a bad taste on my mouth. Lillia would forever keep that bitterness within her heart. This is worse than Rudeus's ED in canon. Probably worse than what happened in canon to the family in some case.
For Lillia, only to be saved yet missing the mark. She did not reach back early enough. Same old story for her past. For her to realize that Paul did not truly care and love her as Rudeus did. Living separately would be bad for the kid as said. Yeah. I respect you for being a bigger man Rudeus. Here's to hoping she still finds happiness. You too.
Take care author. And God bless you. Thank you for this story and looking forward to more. Time to move forward.
There is a time for everything. A time to love and a time to hate. A time to kill and a time to heal.
Theyre all going to need healing. I guess Paul truly does have a reason to send him away.
1/23 c22 RimuruSlyme
Fuck lilia
1/23 c22 4GMotW - The Author
Oh man. That's really sad but I guess it can't be helped. The only thing they can do is to heal and find a way to coexist peaceful.

From what I can see, it wouldn't be surprising if Rudeus adopts a training freak mindset and embrace the grinding philosophy for self-improvement. After all, the main issue he has is that it's always someone stronger who takes what he loves away.

The experience hurt him but it taught him a lesson: "If you don't want to make a fool of yourself then be sure to leave a strong impression on others. Don't let others, especially morally dubious adults, see a child but THE MAN."
1/23 c22 shootdamit
holy hell, you made this tragic and i love it
1/22 c22 teguhbnn80
what an amazing chapter, i wonder what kind of relationship rudy and aisha will have?
1/22 c22 Solstice1309
Oof. This really hurts
1/22 c21 GMotW - The Author
Well, shit.

I already expected something like this to happen (goddamnit, Paul!) but this betrayal sure is gonna be quite the turning point. Poor Rudy.

Most likely, he would be all set to just LEAVE that house and stay away from Paul before he kills him in a fit of (justified) rage. Possibly, he will still go to Eris' as it's reasonably the only place he could make some cash for latter usage... but this would not be a good chummy Rudy but rather someone similar to his Old Man incarnation, ruthless, a bit cynical and snarky as well as a no-nonsense dude.

Hopefully, our boy will move forward and heal but now we're gonna get some magnificent edgy elements.

That said, it's very unlikely that Rudy is gonna let Lilia alone in this ordeal. While he'd probably no longer has much affection for the woman, Aisha is innocent. Doesn't mean it's gonna be less awkward to interact with the little sister, and perhaps she'd misunderstand this awkwardness with callousness and aloofness.
1/22 c21 teguhbnn80
I always hate cliffhangers at the end of chapters, anyway I'm looking forward to the next chapter
1/22 c21 8StoryReiter
yeah this sucks. Hope nobody dies. I guess there is a reason. Just as expected Since I know the possibiliites. Damn your libido Paul. Zenith is VERY WILLING. Its the pregnancy isnt it?
i suppose. Im more worried about Lilia. Its her turning point on repeat and even worse.
Her distancing herself to Rudy. Paul being irritablre or scorned.
heres to hoping they keep. being together. Rudy. Hope your heart and your relationship heals. its not the kid's fault. Thanks and good luck. I could wait for a day or two. Lilia probably has an idea between her and Rudy. Roxie noticed.
Please be alright, let the ship sail with WEDDING BELLS! AGHHHHHHHHH!
Troublesome. Thanks for the update author and well, looking forward to more. Take care and have a good day, author.
1/21 c20 StoryReiter
I just realized how traumatic NTR was to young me. Maybe even now simply being desentisized. In smutty or steamy literature can be hard wired for a wallop of instant grarification with good art, horrible context and my head WAS ok with that. this tension was a slap in my face. Just as Rudy put in effort you took your time to write this heartwarming tale. thank you. I actually love Rudy's efforts building up Lillia's confidence as a confidant to a friend. His friendship with Roxy is one of my favorites. and well, now this payoff with Lillia. Lines will need to be drawn. the dynamics. Quite complex web of intentions and acts of the people. An amazing thing to see. Its refreshing how the pieces are the same, just slightly rearranged as a great engaging read.
I both hate and love the tension. Thank you for this story, your effort and time. Take care, have a good day and God bless you, author.
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