for Edward’s Human3/7 c16 GirlOnFire30
I almost forgot to mention the most important thing I love about this fic…all that smut! I just can’t get enough! I love love love both of your stories. You are one hell of a writer!
I almost forgot to mention the most important thing I love about this fic…all that smut! I just can’t get enough! I love love love both of your stories. You are one hell of a writer!
3/7 c16 GirlOnFire30
Goddamn what an amazing lil fic this is! And it was just getting real good with the plot! Pls pls pls come back to this. I just love everything about this story…all their internal musings, how Bella and Edward developed a strong friendship later on, and how Bella and Jasper developed their feelings from physical to something deeper. I love your writing style and I truly hope you can share more of your talent with us.
Goddamn what an amazing lil fic this is! And it was just getting real good with the plot! Pls pls pls come back to this. I just love everything about this story…all their internal musings, how Bella and Edward developed a strong friendship later on, and how Bella and Jasper developed their feelings from physical to something deeper. I love your writing style and I truly hope you can share more of your talent with us.
2/27/2024 c16 redhotlady7552
Alice has Charlie. She's pissed off, that Jasper found his mate in Bella. If you do ever update, could you add more substance? So far, it's a giant smut fest. Lol! I'm no prude, but let's see a good show of what happens with Alice.
Alice has Charlie. She's pissed off, that Jasper found his mate in Bella. If you do ever update, could you add more substance? So far, it's a giant smut fest. Lol! I'm no prude, but let's see a good show of what happens with Alice.
1/7/2024 c1 Guest
Lov this jasper please write more
Lov this jasper please write more
10/20/2023 c16 Smurf
I hope we get update soon and another to post is archive of our
I hope we get update soon and another to post is archive of our
6/29/2023 c16 Guest
Please update! I wanna know what happens with Charlie, and Bella's change.
Please update! I wanna know what happens with Charlie, and Bella's change.
6/29/2023 c3 Guest
Edward in a unitard is a very funny thought! Lol! I pictured that, and cracked up!
Edward in a unitard is a very funny thought! Lol! I pictured that, and cracked up!
6/22/2023 c16 
1triinityz
Oh man. ok, here's my guess, alice. she grabbed charlie. either because she actually cared or because she wants revenge. either way, it's gotta be her. it's been a while since you've updated, i'm glad i found this story but STILL write faster! :)
1triinityzOh man. ok, here's my guess, alice. she grabbed charlie. either because she actually cared or because she wants revenge. either way, it's gotta be her. it's been a while since you've updated, i'm glad i found this story but STILL write faster! :)
4/7/2023 c16 NaiaLune
Oh no you don’t! You get back here and give us more chapters! Pretty please? This is such a good fic!
Oh no you don’t! You get back here and give us more chapters! Pretty please? This is such a good fic!
3/16/2023 c16 Guest
Well this has been quite the joy ride! Hope you update soon.
Well this has been quite the joy ride! Hope you update soon.
3/13/2023 c16 Guest
Wow that was a wild fest!
Wow that was a wild fest!