7/27/2023 c1 Sturmundsterne
One speaker per paragraph. That is a basic role of the English language. Please go back and fix this. Might be the potential for a good story here, but it’s giving me a headache trying to keep up with all of that people talking over each other.
One speaker per paragraph. That is a basic role of the English language. Please go back and fix this. Might be the potential for a good story here, but it’s giving me a headache trying to keep up with all of that people talking over each other.
7/20/2023 c11 9cliff.west
just found this. i don't know if your going to show what they do with info or not. might work for a book two.
just found this. i don't know if your going to show what they do with info or not. might work for a book two.
7/13/2023 c10 Guest
Hope to see more soon
Hope to see more soon
7/1/2023 c8 Kitsuna G
It's good to see an update. I really want the Jon reveal
It's good to see an update. I really want the Jon reveal
6/25/2023 c7 orionastro
very good story so far, I hope soon they return to their lives performing the changes that ae hardly wait for the next chapters
very good story so far, I hope soon they return to their lives performing the changes that ae hardly wait for the next chapters
4/2/2023 c7 Guest
Hope to see more soon!
Hope to see more soon!