for The Demon Host10/2/2023 c1 ElementalMaster16
This... is very interesting... I'm really curious where you will take this.
This... is very interesting... I'm really curious where you will take this.
6/20/2023 c1 Guest
Ooo I’m hooked
Ooo I’m hooked
3/12/2023 c1 Guest
Man that first chapter was REALLY good. I noticed a couple mistakes in terms of grammar and confusing language. For example, in the scene where Kakashi and the Hokage are at Naruto’s place. After snapping out of the trance of the book, you wrote Hiruzen looked into Naruto’s eyes instead of Kakashi, but other than that, you’re writing style is solid. Above all else, Jesus dude, this was just really captivating. The slow build up to Naruto’s first interactions with the team was amazing. And the culmination with Naruto bringing up Rin and sending Kakashi into a rage over it was a very interesting way to showcase Naruto’s “abilities”. It kinda reminds me of the movie Hereditary, where you don’t know if the supernatural is real or not till the very end. It’s not scary, but the creep factor builds over time. I’d say, if you have the inkling for it, to continue this story cause it’s definitely unique. Anyway, thanks for the chapter. I wholeheartedly enjoyed it
Man that first chapter was REALLY good. I noticed a couple mistakes in terms of grammar and confusing language. For example, in the scene where Kakashi and the Hokage are at Naruto’s place. After snapping out of the trance of the book, you wrote Hiruzen looked into Naruto’s eyes instead of Kakashi, but other than that, you’re writing style is solid. Above all else, Jesus dude, this was just really captivating. The slow build up to Naruto’s first interactions with the team was amazing. And the culmination with Naruto bringing up Rin and sending Kakashi into a rage over it was a very interesting way to showcase Naruto’s “abilities”. It kinda reminds me of the movie Hereditary, where you don’t know if the supernatural is real or not till the very end. It’s not scary, but the creep factor builds over time. I’d say, if you have the inkling for it, to continue this story cause it’s definitely unique. Anyway, thanks for the chapter. I wholeheartedly enjoyed it
11/29/2022 c1 
55pain17ification
I've always like stories that focused on a more spiritual side of things... I feel sorry for Naruto, cursed to see or feel the departed and their feelings towards the living...
He's a living conduit for them, and those who are slaves to their grief (like Kakashi and Sasuke) won't be able to handle it...as proven in this first chapter.
55pain17ificationI've always like stories that focused on a more spiritual side of things... I feel sorry for Naruto, cursed to see or feel the departed and their feelings towards the living...
He's a living conduit for them, and those who are slaves to their grief (like Kakashi and Sasuke) won't be able to handle it...as proven in this first chapter.
10/28/2022 c1 1HerdingDog1
This is... Holy unholy hell this is haunting. Especulially the last scene. You introduced the whole 'something at the back of your mind screams at you that something is wrong' when you had Kakashi enter Naruto's room, but the last scene perfectly exemplifies it. Even though only Kakashi knows what he talks about, both Into and Sasuke see just how badly it affects Kakashi, and feel that something is horribly wrong in this context. That Naruto knows things he shouldn't, that he is saying things the push Kakashi's buttons TOO well, and that he should stop now while he still can. But he already can't. Maybe he even chose to continue going after Kakashi in stead of Sasuke when he notices Sasuke's demons, presumably his parents, because he knows that Sasuke would handle it even worse.
1HerdingDog1This is... Holy unholy hell this is haunting. Especulially the last scene. You introduced the whole 'something at the back of your mind screams at you that something is wrong' when you had Kakashi enter Naruto's room, but the last scene perfectly exemplifies it. Even though only Kakashi knows what he talks about, both Into and Sasuke see just how badly it affects Kakashi, and feel that something is horribly wrong in this context. That Naruto knows things he shouldn't, that he is saying things the push Kakashi's buttons TOO well, and that he should stop now while he still can. But he already can't. Maybe he even chose to continue going after Kakashi in stead of Sasuke when he notices Sasuke's demons, presumably his parents, because he knows that Sasuke would handle it even worse.
10/13/2022 c1 5jiggyjester
Jesus on a tricycle, my heart is actually pounding. favorited, terrified for the next chapter.
you just write banger after banger.
5jiggyjesterJesus on a tricycle, my heart is actually pounding. favorited, terrified for the next chapter.
you just write banger after banger.
9/18/2022 c1 El Professor
This story! Wow. I haven't read a story like this ever! It's so f**king good. The concept is unique without being edgy. It delivers what's promised in the summary. Even though it only has one chapter, it's easily one of my favourite fanfics out there.
Your description of Naruto's room and his behaviour are so coherent I could visualise what was happening. I would love to see what direction it goes to if you decide to move forward with this.
Also I've read this chapter 4 times since I discovered it and will read it again when the next one comes out.
This story! Wow. I haven't read a story like this ever! It's so f**king good. The concept is unique without being edgy. It delivers what's promised in the summary. Even though it only has one chapter, it's easily one of my favourite fanfics out there.
Your description of Naruto's room and his behaviour are so coherent I could visualise what was happening. I would love to see what direction it goes to if you decide to move forward with this.
Also I've read this chapter 4 times since I discovered it and will read it again when the next one comes out.